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I’ll Never Get Over You – Part 4
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Leisha looked over at Dana and smiled. Carmen and Shane had both called her earlier in the week to tell her about the surprise party that they were throwing for Dana and had asked that she help get Dana to the Planet at seven o’clock that night. So now here they were parked out front getting ready to go inside. They made their way up the curb and Leisha pulled the door open for Dana stepping in after her, touching her back as they entered. “Congratulations Dana!!!!” Dana looked around the Planet and smiled at all of her friends and family that had gathered in her honor, truly surprised that they could have put this together in only two days. She saw the faces of some of her trainers and people from the Club, But her eyes rested on the people that stood toward the front of the line and her eyes started to water at the sight of them. Bette, Tina, Shane, Carmen and Howie all smiled at her and once again She could feel the exhilaration of that final ball sailing over the net. She still felt Shane’s arms being thrown tightly around her. And then as their eyes met for the first time in nearly a year, Dana relived the split second that her hand and her eyes had searched for Alice. Her smile barely faulted, but Dana felt her heart stop beating at the way Alice looked at her. Only for a fleeting second and then she gave Dana a small smile and bowed her head and stepped back into the crowd.
“So, tell me oh wise older sister of mine. How does it feel to have won your very first grand slam?” Dana smiled at her little brother who had stepped forward to take a flower off of one of the tables and was now using it as a microphone.
“It feelsGreat!” Dana said unable to accurately describe what it actually felt like to have a grand slam under her belt.
“And there you have it folks, a woman of many words. My sister, Dana Fairbanks. It’s Grrrrrreat!” He said mimicking Tony the Tiger. He ducked a slap from Dana and moved aside so that Dana and Leisha could step further into the room, but not before pulling her into a hug and telling her that he was proud of her. “I’m sorry I missed it, Dane.” He said into her ear.
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Hey there everyone, like I said I almost left the last part out because sadly I blush at the word ‘naked’ but after taking it out and adding it in about a million times, I just found that I wanted it there. I was a little iffy because I didn’t know if I captured the feel of the scene right, and there’s that blushing thing, but as I requested please be gentle, I’m trying to expand myself here….
That was such a Kik ass post!..THNX4writing, jus need2get rid of Leisha&Adam& It’LL b all GooD :D this lst scene was grt dude..abso-fuking-lutely spectacular..Post soon I hope? mwah
This story gets better and better. And the end scene there was hot but realistic and tastefully done, quite beautiful really. Please post soon xx
Wow… Just wow!!!
Bravo. I don’t think the scene could have been written any better. So emotional. Can’t wait to see what follows.
that was just amazing…..the love scene was beautifully well written…..don’t think it could’ve been done any better than that
You’re back with a vengence lol. I adore the bittersweetness feel of this story, and that last scene was achingly tender and throughly satisfiying. You never have to worry ; )
that was great! especially the last page. ;) whew!
When this chapter came up I actually went back to read both stories. Now that I’m caught up, I hope Danish can finally work things out. Your writing keeps getting better and better, you portray their pain and emotions beautifully. And that last scene was truly amazing. Thanks for posting it =)
Wow, thanks the emotions are wonderful, love this secure and caring Dana.
that was great but what will they tell their partners about this but I am just glad to see that they have sort of made up and I can wait for the next post as I love this story please post soon
i love this story and i am so glad that you have time to write more. you are one of my favorite writers on here and this is my favorite story. you write with so much emotion and feeling. the last scene was hot and if you think this is the worst of your writing i think you are doing pretty good for yourself. great post. glad to see dana and alice reconnecting.
I was wondering if you were going to post again. I know it has been a long while but I want to know what was in that box!!!