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I’ll Never Get Over You – Part 4
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“Yeah, but if I were you I would call Howie for the family list. He’ll know who Dana can tolerate and who she can’t.” Alice pointed out, remembering how Dana felt about certain members of her family. “In fact maybe you should just invite Howie.” Alice added.
“Yeah, it might get wild and we don’t want Dana’s family to see that.” Carmen agreed with Alice.
“Okay, just friends then.”
“You guys can have it here if you want to.” Kit offered.
Shane grinned. “Perfect. Let’s get to work.” Shane said
“Hello?” Dana reached over the naked figure of her pale skinned girlfriend and answered the phone sleep still heavy in her voice.
“Dane? Is that you?”
“I think.” Dana replied to Shane as she felt Leisha stir next to her.
“How was your flight?”
“Why would you call so early to ask that?” Dana asked irritably only barely resisting the urge to hang up the phone.
Shane chuckled. “It’s two in the afternoon, Dana.”
Dana’s eyes flew open and she looked over at the clock. Amazed that Shane was right Dana plopped her head back onto her pillow. “Jet lag.” She gave as her excuse.
“What are you talking about. Don’t you gain like three hours or something?”
“Okay fine. Hours and hours of incredibly amazing it’s-good-to-be-home *****. That better?” Dana grinned when Shane laughed, knowing that she had caught her friend slightly off guard and that didn’t happen very often.
“Dude, your making me blush.” Shane said into the phone.
Dana laughed softly. “Well, that’s two major victories this week, I’m unstoppable.” Dana closed her eyes again. “What’s up?”
“Wondering what you were doing tonight.”
“Going to dinner with Leisha. Celebrating still.”
“Oh.” Shane feigned disappointment. “Well, do you feel like stopping by the Planet really quick on your way. Everyone wants to see you and say congratulations.”
“UhOkay. I’m sure that Leisha won’t mind.” Dana looked down at Leisha still sleeping against her side.
“Great. What time should we be there?”
“Well. I think that she said the reservations were for eight. So how about seven?”
“Cool. See you then, Dana.” Dana didn’t bother to put the phone back on the charger she simply beeped it off and threw it on the floor next to her bed letting herself fall back to sleep
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Hey there everyone, like I said I almost left the last part out because sadly I blush at the word ‘naked’ but after taking it out and adding it in about a million times, I just found that I wanted it there. I was a little iffy because I didn’t know if I captured the feel of the scene right, and there’s that blushing thing, but as I requested please be gentle, I’m trying to expand myself here….
That was such a Kik ass post!..THNX4writing, jus need2get rid of Leisha&Adam& It’LL b all GooD :D this lst scene was grt dude..abso-fuking-lutely spectacular..Post soon I hope? mwah
This story gets better and better. And the end scene there was hot but realistic and tastefully done, quite beautiful really. Please post soon xx
Wow… Just wow!!!
Bravo. I don’t think the scene could have been written any better. So emotional. Can’t wait to see what follows.
that was just amazing…..the love scene was beautifully well written…..don’t think it could’ve been done any better than that
You’re back with a vengence lol. I adore the bittersweetness feel of this story, and that last scene was achingly tender and throughly satisfiying. You never have to worry ; )
that was great! especially the last page. ;) whew!
When this chapter came up I actually went back to read both stories. Now that I’m caught up, I hope Danish can finally work things out. Your writing keeps getting better and better, you portray their pain and emotions beautifully. And that last scene was truly amazing. Thanks for posting it =)
Wow, thanks the emotions are wonderful, love this secure and caring Dana.
that was great but what will they tell their partners about this but I am just glad to see that they have sort of made up and I can wait for the next post as I love this story please post soon
i love this story and i am so glad that you have time to write more. you are one of my favorite writers on here and this is my favorite story. you write with so much emotion and feeling. the last scene was hot and if you think this is the worst of your writing i think you are doing pretty good for yourself. great post. glad to see dana and alice reconnecting.
I was wondering if you were going to post again. I know it has been a long while but I want to know what was in that box!!!