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    In Too Deep Ch. 3

    Story written on January 21, 2007 by Akiracolorblind.
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    Shane snapped her fingers, and Jenny appeared. “Jenny–she doesn’t think I’m professional.”

     

    “I got my eye on you.” Jenny pointed the gun at the screen and smiled.

     

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    “So Carmen,” Shane walked around the Latina and stood in front of her. “Would like to stay at my side and work together?”

     

    “I like to work on my own,” Shane laughed softly and rubbed her chin.

     

    “Well—you don’t get that choice. You will work with me, and you will like it.” Shane had a smug smile on her face and snapped her finger. Pamela walked out of the bedroom, bruised and beaten. She walked over to Shane, and Shane pulled the chain that was wrapped around Pamela’s neck. Pamela winced in pain as Shane pulled her close. “Carmen I like for you to meet someone—this is Pamela Russo.  She’s my pet, and her lowlife of husband Paul is running me money. You see Paul has a drug problem, and he’s been running his wife around LA as his hoe for a fix. So I made him a better deal.” Shane pulled Pamela’s hair making her scream. “She’s my hoe while Paul runs around for me to get my money. She’s a really great fuck, and I love to hear her scream.” Shane kissed Pamela hard and looked at Carmen as she did it. Carmen looked away in disgust. Shane pulled away and smiled. “You don’t like what you see.”

     

    “I don’t think it’s right for you to treat her like that. You’re running a business, at least be professional.”

     

    “You don’t think I’m professional.”  Shane snapped her fingers, and Jenny appeared. “Jenny—she doesn’t think that I’m professional.” Shane held out her hand, and Jenny placed a silver 9 mm in Shane’s hand. Shane got into Carmen’s face. “Do you think this is professional?” Shane pointed the gun at Pamela, and Pamela’s eyes got wide as she fired the gun. Carmen jumped as she heard the gun go off. Pamela dropped to her knees as blood oozed from her throat. She fell on her back and began to gurgle on her blood. Carmen stared down at Pamela as she tried to fight to live. Pamela’s eyes went wide as she took her last breath.

     

    “Hey!” Carmen snapped out of her trance and looked up at Shane. “You act like you haven’t killed anybody before. Are you sure you’re cut out for this?” Carmen hesitated. “Are you sure!” Shane retorted as she pointed the gun at Carmen, and Jenny smiled.

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    1. Damn this is bad. Poor Carmen, Shane is crazy bitch. Helena better careful or Jenny ganna kill her. Oh where is Tina, just wondering why she not in this story. Ok post soon please, thanks!

    2. I just caught up with this story and, even though I read 3 chapters in a row, I’m already jonesin’ for another update. I have one question, though. Are Helena and Carmen supposed to be working WITH Shane or FOR Shane? At first I thought they’d be working with Shane, since they own Miami (or so they claim) and working for someone else would be a big step down for them. But it looks like Helena and Carmen are just Shane’s little bitches. I understand that they would have to prove their loyalty and such, but Shane treats them like dirt, especially Carmen, and they take it. They don’t really command the respect of two women who run a city. Well, that’s the only question I had. Other than that, the story is intriguing (I’m hooked). As far as the rape scene. . . umm. . . I just kept thinking of Carmen crying while this was all happening to her. And how fucked up it is for her. But Jenny is awesome as a total psycho. Alice’s “I don’t mix pleasure with business” motto is cool; she’s fricken cool (probably one of the more sane members of the family). Great work. I’m looking forward to the next update.

    3. Okay I will admit ‘guiltily’ that this post was fucking hot. But I think it’s too early for Shane to start feeling guilty even though she just :raped: Carmen. Perhaps after a couple of days…then the guilt can set in. After all, Shane is psychotic ~eg~. I love Alice in this. And leave it to Helena to be so forward. She’ll get her fingers chopped off if she’s not careful. Jenny rocks like crazy…I love it. But back to Shane…should Carmen be in her bed this soon? Well,…can’t change that now except maybe turn it into a dream :p But still, I’m looking forward to more of this story and this update was hot as hell. PPS! Ah…poor Pam and Paul. muhahahahaha!!!….in light of the ‘evil’ of course.

    4. wow wow wow! what a smashing chapter ACB!! uhm yeah… that whole ‘rape’ scene was a bit full on but pretty… hot… :S anyway , i love alice and jenny!! jeny is just well… u know, fucking crazy and i love it!!… and alice is pretty damn cool too.. but maybe she needs more scenes??… pretty please?? hehe.. fantastic work!! PPS!!

    5. I’m still loving our evil trio! I agree Alice needs more screen time and so does Bette and Dana however this is so original and I think you’re doing an awesome job so far. PPS

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