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    In Too Deep Ch. 3

    Story written on January 21, 2007 by Akiracolorblind.
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    Shane snapped her fingers, and Jenny appeared. “Jenny–she doesn’t think I’m professional.”

     

    “I never had a gun in my face, and I don’t ever want it to happen again.” Shane nodded and stepped closer to Carmen.

     

    “I promise you I won’t put a gun in your face again, but if you step across MY line.” Shane put her hands together prayer-like against her lips. “I will kill you, and I won’t think twice about it.” Carmen stared into Shane’s icy blue eyes.

     

    “Why do you act so big and tough when you know you’re not?”

     

    “What are you talking about?”

     

    “You know what I’m talking about. You think that you’re bad to the bone because you’re pushing drugs and can hold a gun, but anybody can do that. What makes you the fuckin’ king of this city?”

     

    “Are you pushing your luck? Do you wanna die?”

     

    “I don’t care if I died today, but I know that you’re a joke, and you won’t be able to live that down.” Shane brought her fist up and punched the door. Carmen jumped as she stared down Shane.

     

    “You think you’re so fuckin’ smart don’t you.” Shane bit her bottom lip. She pressed her hand against Carmen’s neck. “You better lose the fuckin’ attitude, or they will find your body floating in the river.” She pulled her hand away from Carmen’s neck, and Carmen coughed. “You know what—I thought of something. I want you to come back tonight after midnight. We’re not finish here—get the fuck out.” Carmen opened the door and walked out of Shane’s bedroom.

     

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    “Helena, she’s fuckin’ crazy! I don’t think I can do this.” Carmen plopped down at the bed in their hotel room.

     

    “You have to do this Carmen. We’re both in this together remember that. I need you there with me by my side. You have to go back after midnight, or she’ll think something is up. You gotta do this.”

     

    Carmen sighed and dropped her head. “I’m afraid of what might happen to me. I don’t want to do this alone.” Helena walked over to Carmen and sat next to her.

     

    “I know you don’t want to do this, but you got to be strong Morales. You have to do your job. Both of our jobs depend on this. Don’t just think about yourself, think about me too.” Carmen looked at Helena.

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    1. Damn this is bad. Poor Carmen, Shane is crazy bitch. Helena better careful or Jenny ganna kill her. Oh where is Tina, just wondering why she not in this story. Ok post soon please, thanks!

    2. I just caught up with this story and, even though I read 3 chapters in a row, I’m already jonesin’ for another update. I have one question, though. Are Helena and Carmen supposed to be working WITH Shane or FOR Shane? At first I thought they’d be working with Shane, since they own Miami (or so they claim) and working for someone else would be a big step down for them. But it looks like Helena and Carmen are just Shane’s little bitches. I understand that they would have to prove their loyalty and such, but Shane treats them like dirt, especially Carmen, and they take it. They don’t really command the respect of two women who run a city. Well, that’s the only question I had. Other than that, the story is intriguing (I’m hooked). As far as the rape scene. . . umm. . . I just kept thinking of Carmen crying while this was all happening to her. And how fucked up it is for her. But Jenny is awesome as a total psycho. Alice’s “I don’t mix pleasure with business” motto is cool; she’s fricken cool (probably one of the more sane members of the family). Great work. I’m looking forward to the next update.

    3. Okay I will admit ‘guiltily’ that this post was fucking hot. But I think it’s too early for Shane to start feeling guilty even though she just :raped: Carmen. Perhaps after a couple of days…then the guilt can set in. After all, Shane is psychotic ~eg~. I love Alice in this. And leave it to Helena to be so forward. She’ll get her fingers chopped off if she’s not careful. Jenny rocks like crazy…I love it. But back to Shane…should Carmen be in her bed this soon? Well,…can’t change that now except maybe turn it into a dream :p But still, I’m looking forward to more of this story and this update was hot as hell. PPS! Ah…poor Pam and Paul. muhahahahaha!!!….in light of the ‘evil’ of course.

    4. wow wow wow! what a smashing chapter ACB!! uhm yeah… that whole ‘rape’ scene was a bit full on but pretty… hot… :S anyway , i love alice and jenny!! jeny is just well… u know, fucking crazy and i love it!!… and alice is pretty damn cool too.. but maybe she needs more scenes??… pretty please?? hehe.. fantastic work!! PPS!!

    5. I’m still loving our evil trio! I agree Alice needs more screen time and so does Bette and Dana however this is so original and I think you’re doing an awesome job so far. PPS

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