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    In Too Deep Ch. 3

    Story written on January 21, 2007 by Akiracolorblind.
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    Shane snapped her fingers, and Jenny appeared. “Jenny–she doesn’t think I’m professional.”

     

    “Yes!” Shane smiled and nodded.

     

    “That’s what I like to hear.” She tapped Carmen’s cheek with her hand. “Now, Miss Morales, if you need to take a breather, walk outside for a second. When you come back in, you better be ready to do your job.” Shane backed away from Carmen and walked away.

     

    Jenny snapped her fingers. “Clean it up.” Two big men walked over to Pamela’s dead body and picked it up off the floor. Jenny smiled at Carmen. Carmen turned around and walked away. She rubbed her forehead and put her hand on her hip.

     

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    “She’s fucking psychotic. I don’t think I’m cut out for this.”

     

    “You gotta stick it out Morales. This is your job.” Dana replied. “You have to do whatever you can to get close to them. I don’t care if you have to sleep with Shane just to get under her skin. You do what you have to do.”  Carmen swallowed hard and sighed. “We need you to do this Carmen, do this for your father.”

     

    “Keep my father out of this,” snapped Carmen.

     

    “Whoa—watch who you’re talking to. I can take your badge away in a heartbeat.”

     

    “Sorry Detective.”

     

    “Okay, go back in there and act like you’ve been doing this for years.”

     

    “Yes ma’am.”

     

    “Bye,” Carmen hung up her phone and licked her top lip. She opened the door and walked back into the building.

     

    “Who were you talking to?” Carmen turned on her heels as she saw Jenny standing behind her.

     

    “I was talking to one of my workers back in Miami. Is that a problem?”

     

    “No,” Jenny shook her head. “It’s not a problem at all.” She walked past Carmen. “Shane wants to see you now.” Carmen walked behind Jenny as they walked towards Shane’s bedroom.  Jenny opened the door, and Carmen stepped in. Shane got up from her bed and walked over to Carmen. Jenny walked out of the bedroom and closed the door. Carmen backed away and bumped into the door.

     

    “Calm down—I’m not going to hurt you.” Shane looked at Carmen. “I’m sorry for waving the gun in your face earlier, but I need to know that you’re ready to do this.”

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    1. Damn this is bad. Poor Carmen, Shane is crazy bitch. Helena better careful or Jenny ganna kill her. Oh where is Tina, just wondering why she not in this story. Ok post soon please, thanks!

    2. I just caught up with this story and, even though I read 3 chapters in a row, I’m already jonesin’ for another update. I have one question, though. Are Helena and Carmen supposed to be working WITH Shane or FOR Shane? At first I thought they’d be working with Shane, since they own Miami (or so they claim) and working for someone else would be a big step down for them. But it looks like Helena and Carmen are just Shane’s little bitches. I understand that they would have to prove their loyalty and such, but Shane treats them like dirt, especially Carmen, and they take it. They don’t really command the respect of two women who run a city. Well, that’s the only question I had. Other than that, the story is intriguing (I’m hooked). As far as the rape scene. . . umm. . . I just kept thinking of Carmen crying while this was all happening to her. And how fucked up it is for her. But Jenny is awesome as a total psycho. Alice’s “I don’t mix pleasure with business” motto is cool; she’s fricken cool (probably one of the more sane members of the family). Great work. I’m looking forward to the next update.

    3. Okay I will admit ‘guiltily’ that this post was fucking hot. But I think it’s too early for Shane to start feeling guilty even though she just :raped: Carmen. Perhaps after a couple of days…then the guilt can set in. After all, Shane is psychotic ~eg~. I love Alice in this. And leave it to Helena to be so forward. She’ll get her fingers chopped off if she’s not careful. Jenny rocks like crazy…I love it. But back to Shane…should Carmen be in her bed this soon? Well,…can’t change that now except maybe turn it into a dream :p But still, I’m looking forward to more of this story and this update was hot as hell. PPS! Ah…poor Pam and Paul. muhahahahaha!!!….in light of the ‘evil’ of course.

    4. wow wow wow! what a smashing chapter ACB!! uhm yeah… that whole ‘rape’ scene was a bit full on but pretty… hot… :S anyway , i love alice and jenny!! jeny is just well… u know, fucking crazy and i love it!!… and alice is pretty damn cool too.. but maybe she needs more scenes??… pretty please?? hehe.. fantastic work!! PPS!!

    5. I’m still loving our evil trio! I agree Alice needs more screen time and so does Bette and Dana however this is so original and I think you’re doing an awesome job so far. PPS

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