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Instinct part9
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“Sarah…I have a young patient who needs a heart… her name is Shane… she… she doesn’t have much time… she has loves one outside her door waiting for me to do something but I cant… I cant do nothing if I don’t have a new heart for her”
“Why are you telling me this?”
“I was hoping you would donate Ronny’s heart… he has a very healthy one and if I get it now it would make someone live”
“NO!”
“Sarah, she’s going to die-”
“NO GET OUT!”
“Sarah..”
“Get the fuck out…”
Izzy turned around and I came in crying
“Carmen don’t-“
“Listened lady-”
“Who the fuck are you?”
“Carmen lets just go”
“NO! listened! And listened good… your kid is gone and I’m sorry…. I have lost people too you know… I have lost everything!… so I know were you’re coming from… I can’t make you give her his heart…. I cant… but you listened… Shane is a good person… a good fucking person who deserves a second chance… because in the first one she didn’t know any better…. She need a second chance… she needs a heart…”
“I get that but he’s my son… I’m sorry… but I cant”
Izzy motion me to follow her out side… so we turned away… but I couldn’t just let that be my only try, so I turn around and look at her
“I love her… I love Shane… and we have waist the last five years or our lives lusting each other without the other one knowing… I know she loves me but…. But she doesn’t know how much I love her and missed her… she doesn’t know how in everyday she would appear in my mind… she doesn’t know how in does five years, I couldn’t stop thinking about how it used to be… she doesn’t know I missed her smile, her eyes, her body…. Her soul… she doesn’t know how home doesn’t feel like home… she doesn’t know… she doesn’t know I still love her… So I’m asking you… please…. Please, think about this… think about what would your son do… he looks nice… I can tell… I can tell she was an angel… but he is not here anymore… so help Shane live… she needs to live… I need her to live… help ME live…because I realized now… that life without her… isn’t worth living at all”
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your updates make the heart heavier (in a good way of course).. they are laced with so much emotions, it’s so real. i hope carmen will be able to convince shane to go for that operation. it’s .. it’s.. so sad! ):
I’m inlove with this storydef. keep it up~Broooklyn~
oh my god i know u want larger comments but im on the edge of tears so oh my god! please please don’t let shane die i’ll beg too
oh and by the way PPS!!! but really soon cause i need u to update please pretty please???
you made me cry…i love the sincerity, their vulnerability..the pure love that comes from both of them, the silly decisions and thoughts that cloud their judgement because of threats of NOT being able to pick up where they left off…how i wish to see Cramen back in season 6…sigh..please keep on updating!
oh my god, what a great update. i love this story. dont keep me hanging, please post soon!
okay, ima have 2 come back wit a comment bcuz im kina choked up right now, so yeah … but plz make it so dat Shane go thru wit da surgery …. datz all i can say atm….
I..uh..eff me that was powerful!!!
Holy Sh*t!!!! It’s freaking awesome. I hate to say this but I can understand Shane and Carmen either. Shane has might seen the light already when she got a heart attack badly. I just hope Carmen get won eventually.
OMG, if I could see through my tears I would send you a longer comment. This story is heartbreaking!
wow.. puh.. powerfull indeed! Loving the story!=) I’ve been watching a shot at love.. Brittany has been my favourite from day one! =D Though it sucked that Tila dumped her.. I think she’s better off without her.. she is too good for her! Go Brit! “I don’t want a shot at love, I want the whole damn bar!” lol..^^