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    Interview With a Killer part2

    Story written on November 28, 2006 by adicttosharmen.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=63379
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    “Yea but… you didn’t do that… FUCK… um… you definitely didn’t do that”

     

     

    “Yea… kill my self” (She laugh sarcastically) “listen… she’s here…”

     

     

    “… oh…” (Shane pointed to the room) “…OOOooohh!!!…. well look Shane… you have to get out of here… go somewhere else… they are coming here any minute now…. They think you have something to do with this… I told them you didn’t. but you know…”

     

     

     

    “Yea your right… um… thank you…” (Shane smiled at him)

     

     

     

     

    “No problem… now get out of here… go and be… happy…” (He laugh for a moment) “I guess I was wrong … some times love IS like in the movies” (he hugged her and left)

     

     

     

     

     

     

    “So is he gone?” (Carmen said from the room door. Shane was looking at her smiling)

     

     

     

     

     

    “Yes… but we have to get out of here”

     

     

     

    “Wait what?”

     

     

     

    “The police are coming here looking for you…. They think I have something to do with it”

     

     

     

    “Ok, but…. What did you mean by ‘we’?”

     

     

     

    “We?”         

     

     

     

    “Um… yea, you said ‘we’ have to get out of here”

     

     

     

    “well … I’m going with you…” what!!

     

     

     

    “Why?…. I mean your going to risk everything you have, for me?… they could arrest you for helping me you know” why the fuck are you saying that to her…. You want this… you want her to come with you (Carmen’s face was unreadable, like if she had no emotion)

     

     

     

     

     

    “I don’t care… I said it before and I will say it again… if I cant be with you… I rather just die” (Carmen looked down and a tear fell from her eyes) “look at me Carmen” (Carmen looked at her) “ I want this… I want you… and if that means running away… I will do it…. For you I will do anything”

     

     

     

    “I love you Shane” (Shane went towards her, and whipped away the tears on Carmen’s face)

     

     

     

     

     

    “You know… I have heard that two times coming from you… and I really don’t get tired of hearing it” (They smiled and kissed) “But we have to go”

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    3. Ok, I like the whole disjointed mode of your writing but more detail would help it. No doubt Carmen as a killer and lanky Shane as a cop on her heels is interesting, but I still feel distracted when I cannot remember if Jenny and Carmen are siting down, having a drink or whatever. I know they’re talking, but I also want to know what the atmosphere is around Jenny and Carmen, that way I’ll be more inclined to read what Jenny is saying as opposed to scrolling to the next flashback. It’s a really good story and with a bit more poignant details, you could murder my laptop. *weg* good update!

    4. Fantastic update!! I notice that while I’m reading, I can’t wait to find out what happens next. Can’t wait to find out more!! Update asap please.

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