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Interview With a Killer part2
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“Nothing”
“… he knows what you do for a living?”
“Yes”
“He helps you?”
“Yes”
“So… all this is because your parents right?”
“Well it started like that… but how did you know?”
"Your record"
“You read my record?”
“Yes”
“Right… look I’m tired so lets talk about this tomorrow ok?”
“Yea ok” (They took their clothes off and got in bed. Both of them looking at the ceiling) “so … I’m your girlfriend now huh?” (Carmen laughed)
“Well I didn’t think you’ll mind… but if you want, I can tell him you’re just a friend”
“No its ok… but it would have been nice to be asked to be the girlfriend, you know” (Carmen turned to her side looking at Shane)
“Well Shane… do you want to be my girlfriend?” (Shane looked at her)
“I don’t know i mean… I’m really busy right now-”
“Fuck you” (They started laughing and Carmen turned to the other side. Then Shane turned to the side facing Carmen from behind, spooning her)
“Yea… I would love to be your girlfriend” (Shane kissed Carmen on the cheek, causing Carmen to smile and turned to face Shane)
“That’s good cause, I was not going to sleep with you unless you were my girlfriend” (she smiled)
“Then it’s a good thing… but I though you were too tired?”
“Yea but, we have to finish what we started” (They started kissing)
E N D F L A S H B A C K
“So you guys finally…” (Carmen laughs at Jenny)
“Yes Jenny, we finally had sex”
“How?”
“You are really into the details huh?”
“No… I just-“
“Are you gay Jenny?”
“NO!!!… I just… I mean, I have a boyfriend”
“So…But…. Have you ever felt attracted to a girl before?”
“Well… there is this woman named Mari-… ok this is not about me… so… just… um…. Continue your story” (Carmen laughs at Jenny’s reaction)
“Come on you can tell me”
“No it’s just… well I think she is really pretty and sophisticated and-”
“HOT!!!!”
“OK…. So your brother helped you out…”
“You’re too much Jenny…. Well back to my story then….”
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perfect update.. i absolutely loved it.. please continue like now, i need more…thanks
ok this is the best update wow i loved it great story please keep it up
Ok, I like the whole disjointed mode of your writing but more detail would help it. No doubt Carmen as a killer and lanky Shane as a cop on her heels is interesting, but I still feel distracted when I cannot remember if Jenny and Carmen are siting down, having a drink or whatever. I know they’re talking, but I also want to know what the atmosphere is around Jenny and Carmen, that way I’ll be more inclined to read what Jenny is saying as opposed to scrolling to the next flashback. It’s a really good story and with a bit more poignant details, you could murder my laptop. *weg* good update!
Fantastic update!! I notice that while I’m reading, I can’t wait to find out what happens next. Can’t wait to find out more!! Update asap please.
I’m soo glad Julio was there for Carmen and Shane. Like Carmen said, “you can always count on family.”