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    Interview With a Killer part2

    Story written on November 28, 2006 by adicttosharmen.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=63379
    Author Notes:

    “Yea but… you didn’t do that… FUCK… um… you definitely didn’t do that”

     

     

     

    “I missed you” (Shane said between kisses. Carmen smiled )

     

     

     

    “You saw me two days ago…” (She smiled and pushed Shane against the door of what used to be their room. Carmen got down to her knees and started kissing Shane’s breast, stomach and down.  Shane smiled)

     

     

     

     

    “Yea but… you didn’t do that… FUCK… um… you definitely didn’t do that” (She grabbed Carmen by her face and pulled her up so they where now kissing. Shane opened the door with her left hand and almost fell when the door opened. They walked in the room laughing between kisses. Shane grabbed Carmen by the waist and pushed her to the bed. Carmen was resting on the bed looking at Shane smiling and Shane stood there without movement. She couldn’t believe her eyes… Carmen was in her bed again, alive, with that sexy smile ready for her) Nothing can ruin this moment

     

     

     

    “What are you waiting for?”

     

     

     

    “I don’t kno-” (She got interrupted by a knock on the door) why the fuck do I always have to open my mouth huh?

     

     

     

    “Fuck!!…just wait a second let me see who it is” (Shane went to the front door and saw thru the peephole, that it was Pablo. She came back to the room) “Shit Carmen you have to hide, it’s Pablo” (And went to open the front door)

     

     

     

    “SHANE!!!”

     

     

    “Pablo…?”  (He came in the room)

     

     

    “Shit Shane, I have been calling you since, like… 2 hours ago. Why the fuck didn’t you answer the phone?”

     

     

    “I didn’t want to”

     

     

    “Well guess what… Carmen’s gone… well not gone as in gone , gone but, she didn’t die …. She escaped!!!” (Shane was confused) “Are you listening to me Shane … she is not dead… be happy”

     

     

    “I am but…. Why are you?” (Pablo was hurt)

     

     

    “Shane…. Carmen was a friend… and… you’re like a sister to me… and she makes you happy, so I’m happy….I didn’t want to see her dead… and I though you were going to kill yourself if she died so yea I’m happy (He laughed)

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    3. Ok, I like the whole disjointed mode of your writing but more detail would help it. No doubt Carmen as a killer and lanky Shane as a cop on her heels is interesting, but I still feel distracted when I cannot remember if Jenny and Carmen are siting down, having a drink or whatever. I know they’re talking, but I also want to know what the atmosphere is around Jenny and Carmen, that way I’ll be more inclined to read what Jenny is saying as opposed to scrolling to the next flashback. It’s a really good story and with a bit more poignant details, you could murder my laptop. *weg* good update!

    4. Fantastic update!! I notice that while I’m reading, I can’t wait to find out what happens next. Can’t wait to find out more!! Update asap please.

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