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    Interview With a Killer part2

    Story written on November 28, 2006 by adicttosharmen.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=63379
    Author Notes:

    “Yea but… you didn’t do that… FUCK… um… you definitely didn’t do that”

     

     

    “Ok… I know where we have to go”

     

     

     

     

     

    E          N         D             F     L          A         S          H         B         A         C         K

     

     

     

     

    “You guys were really in love…”

     

     

     

    “Yeah”

     

     

     

    “So then what did you do?… the police were looking for you everywhere right?”

     

     

     

    “Yes but…. When you can’t trust anybody… you can always count on family”

     

     

     

    “You mean…”

     

     

     

    “My brother”

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

    F          L          A         S          H         B         A         C         K

     

     

     

     

     

     

    It was 9pm. We knocked on the door and my brother opened it

     

     

     

    “can I help-… fuck Carmen!!!!!!!!”  (Carmen and Julio hugged, leaving Shane standing there really uncomfortable) “Shit Carmen you had us scared… estabamos pensando que estabs muerta, dijeron en las noticias que habias muerto… But I knew they couldn’t keep you there that long” (Shane didn’t know what the fuck they where talking about)

     

     

     

    “Que puedo decir… Sali sin ningun problemas” (They smiled. Until Julio noticed Shane and pointed her to Carmen) “Oh right!!…” (She laughs) “Shane meet Julio my brother, Julio meet Shane my…. My girlfriend” (they looked at each other and smiled)

     

     

     

     

    “Nice to meet you. Bienvenida a la familia” (Shane looked at Carmen like asking for help)

     

     

     

    “He means welcome to the family” (She smiled at Julio)

     

     

     

     

     

    “Thank you”

     

     

     

    “So, come in…” (Carmen went in followed by Shane. Then Julio moved a big carpet from the floor to reveal a secret door) “See I knew some day you would need this” (They went down some stairs to find a big room with a bed and guns allover the walls) “Ok… um… I’ll leave you guys alone, you look really tired so… but we need to talk….see you in the morning … no hagan nada que yo no haria guys”

     

     

     

    “Entonces haría muchas cosas Julio”

     

     

    “Exactly” (He smiled and went upstairs. Living a laughing Carmen and a confused Shane)

     

     

    “What did he say?”

     

     

     

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    3. Ok, I like the whole disjointed mode of your writing but more detail would help it. No doubt Carmen as a killer and lanky Shane as a cop on her heels is interesting, but I still feel distracted when I cannot remember if Jenny and Carmen are siting down, having a drink or whatever. I know they’re talking, but I also want to know what the atmosphere is around Jenny and Carmen, that way I’ll be more inclined to read what Jenny is saying as opposed to scrolling to the next flashback. It’s a really good story and with a bit more poignant details, you could murder my laptop. *weg* good update!

    4. Fantastic update!! I notice that while I’m reading, I can’t wait to find out what happens next. Can’t wait to find out more!! Update asap please.

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