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Invincible
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In short, I can’t stop staring. Her oddly funny mannerisms are intriguing to me as she and Alice make their way towards me. While struggling with the box gift in her hands, she removes her coat to reveal a very simple, natural beauty. Something sparks. I feel an energy; a free spirit with a barely containable life-force. I see the woman I’ve hired to take care of coat check speak with my lovely guest who responds in kind shaking her head. Another woman runs into the puffy coat as she tries to slide between Alice and the blonde, causing the blonde to instantly apologize for spilling the woman’s drink.
I absent-mindedly nod at whatever Dana’s telling me and shamelessly stare at the attractive woman with the oversized coat.
”Hi Alice!” I hear and my eyes catch Gabby Deveaux grab my friend and place a sloppy kiss on her cheek as Alice smiles politely trying to shake her off. Gabby and Alice have history. Yes, it’s precisely the kind of history you’re thinking.
The blonde is now looking directly at me with a curious expression
“Literary Goddess, Alice Pieszecki.” I greet Alice who has just escaped a buzzed and clingy former flame.
“Hey, Porter!” She hugs me with a really tight and fast squeeze and pounds her fist on my back a couple times. I think she may be trying to send me a message, but I’m lost in two pools of honey and hazel. She pulls away quickly and palms the side of my arm. “Happy birthday and all the usual shit people say to each other. How you doing?”
Finally, I turn to her and break out into a genuine smile knowing that my eyes are dancing. “Livin’ the dream, my friend. Livin’ the dream.” I steal a quick glance at Alice’s date who is still burdened with her coat and find that she’s still looking at me. “Thanks for coming, Al.” I say my eyes quickly darting back to my longtime friend.
This time, Alice is the first to turn back to the woman who is now blatantly staring at me. Taking a deep breath, Alice gestures to me, “Meet the one and only, Bette Porter.”
The woman steps forward with a sweet smile that’s just a tad timid.
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Enjoyed your story even tho i know nothing of vanilla sky.This epihany that BETTE finally has regarding her company and the warning from a trusted friend makes for an enjoyable read.TINA appears to be the alter ego of BETTE the uncanny ability to read her and is spot on in that drawing.BETTE has some life altering/style changes to make so let’s see what happens becuz for a one off you left a lot unanswered yet it was thought provoking in a good way.
Thanks for your comment, Dunn! Perhaps not having seen the film makes for a better read, although I know what you mean by all the unanswered questions. Even though this is a one-off, I have not completely ruled out possibly coming back to it in the future for a follow-up. There’s no plan to do that right now, but it is always an option. I appreciate you taking the time to read it and offering your feedback!
Great art work!
You never disappoint me. I enjoyed it a lot. You do know how to tell a tale. Thanks
You are too kind, wkm. I’m very happy that you enjoyed the story. Thanks for showin’ the love!
Hope you continue to post stories. I do love your tales.
This is so cool and sexy! I never watch Vanilla sky, but I’ll be damn, I think BnT suit the part so well.
Perhaps I prefer my readers not to have seen the movie. It’s definitely a weird one. But I thought these scenes of a hopeful budding relationship worked with Bette and Tina in those roles. Glad you liked it!
Not seen Vanilla Sky but don’t feel it detracted from finding this story fascinating. I really enjoyed the read and hope that you do consider it as a base for more as this budding relationship between my favourite couple certainly has potential.
Thanks
Don’t think I’ve ever had anyone comment that my stories were ‘fascinating’ so thank you for the compliment Sassy! A follow-up isn’t completely off the table, but just not actively in the works at present. Appreciate you taking the time to read.
Waittttttt! No way!!! I love Vanilla Sky and the older one Abre los ojos! What can I say I can’t resist a naked Penelope Cruz (>ω< )!!!
It wasn't THAT weird to me tbh, I freakin cracked up and cried my eyes out when Penelope said to Tom "I'll see you in another life when we're both cats."
Ahhh old movie, good times! Didn't think I'd see the gay version of the story. Nicely done!
Hahahaha! I suppose the best reason to watch those films would be a naked Penelope. She’s not really my cup of tea, I’m more of a Salma Hayek fan, but she was great in these films. Like I said, I have a love/hate relationship with it. Thanks for reading, hope I did the story justice since you seem to be the only one who has seen the movie so far.
MEEEEOOOOOWWW!
yeeeeeeeeessssss….. you know how long I have agonised about seeing this piece come up…. I miss you my friend. I feel we have resumed our game of tag… you posted… I posted too! guees it’s your turn again ;0) xx
Brilliant, as always, Mell. I have missed your amazing storytelling. I hope you will give us more, if not this story, something else. Oh wait!! Don’t you have something else you’re working on? Like just a chapter or two left? OMG, you do…. Yay!!
Look forward to whatever you write.
ps
Salma Hayek? Nice.
Yes, Salma Hayek. I can’t quite put my finger on it (but I can definitely put my finger in it :p), but I have a thing for slightly older women. Just something about them I can’t get enough of. And thank you for your very kind words, even though they aren’t very subtle. I’ll try to write something or two somethings when I can.
GREAT!!! I know and a like Vanilla Sky (with Tom Cruz and Penelope Cruz) . Vanilla Sky is a Hollywood remake of another great movie – the spanish movie “Abre Los Ojos” (with Penelope Cruz and Eduardo Noriega) And I like so much your story , Invincible with Bette and Tina :))) THANK YOU!!!
Thanks, Leonora! You seem to be one of the few readers who have also seen the movie and bonus points for having seen the original Spanish film!!
I loved this new version of Vanilla Sky,
I saw the movie however vaguely lenbro
some scenes, it would be interesting if you
continue to write its version.
All Stars.