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Invincible
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“We picked it out together.” Alice explains. I hear her, but we both know where my focus is right now. I’m dreamily staring at her date who is returning the favor. Alice sighs heavily and steps in closer to Tina.
“Thank you.” I’m drowning in her eyes.
“WE picked it out together.” Alice says again, emphasizing the pronoun and wrapping an arm around the blonde. “WE…” she repeats, her free hand motioning between her and the gorgeous blonde.
“You’re welcome.” Tina answers in almost a whisper. We share another long look while at the same time sharing a goofy grin.
“Stop flirting and open it.” Alice bites.
Her tone snaps me out of my unintentional reverie and I look at her quirking my brow briefly as if to say, ‘come on, Alice.’
“Let’s get a drink.” She suggests to Tina.
“Okay.” Tina responds.
“What would you guys like?” Dana chimes in, startling me after I had forgotten that she had been standing right there beside me the entire time.
I begin to back away with the gift in my hand. “I’m just going to take this upstairs to put it with the rest of the gifts and I’ll see you two around. Please, make yourselves at home, take full advantage of what the wait staff is offering and have a great time.” I excuse myself and start for my bedroom. I think I need to get my bearings about me before another exchange with Alice and her date. I’m in so much trouble.
Before I can reach the stairs, Whit stops me. He’s carrying a full glass of red wine and smiling. “Hey, Whit.” I say as he grabs the side of my arm with his free hand and spins me slightly so I am now facing the direction from which I came. At the moment, he appears a bit drunk, but when he opens his mouth to speak to me, it is more than confirmed.
“Hey, Bette. Listen to me. Don’t blow me off. The wife and I are all packed and ready to go back to London. And I understand.” He slurs. “You put me up for that Peabody position so you didn’t have to fire me. A classy move. And you know what? Your father would have done the same thing.”
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Enjoyed your story even tho i know nothing of vanilla sky.This epihany that BETTE finally has regarding her company and the warning from a trusted friend makes for an enjoyable read.TINA appears to be the alter ego of BETTE the uncanny ability to read her and is spot on in that drawing.BETTE has some life altering/style changes to make so let’s see what happens becuz for a one off you left a lot unanswered yet it was thought provoking in a good way.
Thanks for your comment, Dunn! Perhaps not having seen the film makes for a better read, although I know what you mean by all the unanswered questions. Even though this is a one-off, I have not completely ruled out possibly coming back to it in the future for a follow-up. There’s no plan to do that right now, but it is always an option. I appreciate you taking the time to read it and offering your feedback!
Great art work!
You never disappoint me. I enjoyed it a lot. You do know how to tell a tale. Thanks
You are too kind, wkm. I’m very happy that you enjoyed the story. Thanks for showin’ the love!
Hope you continue to post stories. I do love your tales.
This is so cool and sexy! I never watch Vanilla sky, but I’ll be damn, I think BnT suit the part so well.
Perhaps I prefer my readers not to have seen the movie. It’s definitely a weird one. But I thought these scenes of a hopeful budding relationship worked with Bette and Tina in those roles. Glad you liked it!
Not seen Vanilla Sky but don’t feel it detracted from finding this story fascinating. I really enjoyed the read and hope that you do consider it as a base for more as this budding relationship between my favourite couple certainly has potential.
Thanks
Don’t think I’ve ever had anyone comment that my stories were ‘fascinating’ so thank you for the compliment Sassy! A follow-up isn’t completely off the table, but just not actively in the works at present. Appreciate you taking the time to read.
Waittttttt! No way!!! I love Vanilla Sky and the older one Abre los ojos! What can I say I can’t resist a naked Penelope Cruz (>ω< )!!!
It wasn't THAT weird to me tbh, I freakin cracked up and cried my eyes out when Penelope said to Tom "I'll see you in another life when we're both cats."
Ahhh old movie, good times! Didn't think I'd see the gay version of the story. Nicely done!
Hahahaha! I suppose the best reason to watch those films would be a naked Penelope. She’s not really my cup of tea, I’m more of a Salma Hayek fan, but she was great in these films. Like I said, I have a love/hate relationship with it. Thanks for reading, hope I did the story justice since you seem to be the only one who has seen the movie so far.
MEEEEOOOOOWWW!
yeeeeeeeeessssss….. you know how long I have agonised about seeing this piece come up…. I miss you my friend. I feel we have resumed our game of tag… you posted… I posted too! guees it’s your turn again ;0) xx
Brilliant, as always, Mell. I have missed your amazing storytelling. I hope you will give us more, if not this story, something else. Oh wait!! Don’t you have something else you’re working on? Like just a chapter or two left? OMG, you do…. Yay!!
Look forward to whatever you write.
ps
Salma Hayek? Nice.
Yes, Salma Hayek. I can’t quite put my finger on it (but I can definitely put my finger in it :p), but I have a thing for slightly older women. Just something about them I can’t get enough of. And thank you for your very kind words, even though they aren’t very subtle. I’ll try to write something or two somethings when I can.
GREAT!!! I know and a like Vanilla Sky (with Tom Cruz and Penelope Cruz) . Vanilla Sky is a Hollywood remake of another great movie – the spanish movie “Abre Los Ojos” (with Penelope Cruz and Eduardo Noriega) And I like so much your story , Invincible with Bette and Tina :))) THANK YOU!!!
Thanks, Leonora! You seem to be one of the few readers who have also seen the movie and bonus points for having seen the original Spanish film!!
I loved this new version of Vanilla Sky,
I saw the movie however vaguely lenbro
some scenes, it would be interesting if you
continue to write its version.
All Stars.