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Invincible
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“I’ve come to wish you a happy birthday.” She smirks, a bare leg exposed but her foot is adorned with a black strappy high-heel as she does a sexy little leg kick.
I give her an empty smile and audibly suck in a breath as I shake my head at her audacity. “Oh, man. I didn’t invite you, Jodi.” I say as she saunters toward me, the chenille lowering around her shoulders with each step.
“Yeah, that was a little weird…”
“But see, that’s how it works with parties. You have to be invited.” She’s in my personal space now and playfully smacks my arm. I chuckle as she draws even closer.
“Ohh,” she says in mock realization. “I’m mad at you, you bitch.” She scolds in a mocking tone. “We made love four times the other night.”
“Is that good?” I ask in an attempt to play along with her game.
“Mmmm, two’s good.” She puts her arms around my shoulders and the blanket falls completely off her naked frame. She balances on her tippy toes to kiss my unwilling lips. “Three is very good…” Kiss. “But four…”
“Four is pretty good?” I go fishing for the compliment. If there was one thing that Jodi did well, it was stroke my ego, among other things.
She giggles sensually and kisses me again. “No, four is…” Another kiss. “Four is…” And another kiss. “Hmm, just hold me.” She lays her head on my shoulder and squeezes her arms around me.
Now I’m really curious. “Four is what?” I inquire.
“Hold me, and then I’ll leave and you can go talk to that cute blonde.” She says as she pulls away, her arms still wrapped around my neck.
I look down at her, eyeing her suspiciously. “Four is what?” I press again.
“I don’t want to meet your fancy friends. I knew ‘em all back when I was fancy too.” She kisses me again.
“Four is what?” I insist.
She steps back and speaks to me plainly. “She looks like a gold digger, Bette.”
I frown. “A gold digger?”
“Sometimes I worry about you, Bette. One day, some clever girl in a big silly coat is going to come along and play you in just the right way, and I’ll lose my friend. And there won’t be anymore chicken soup parties for me and you.” She gives me a pout and leans in one last time for a final kiss. I gently and skillfully resist her seduction and I think she finally gets a clue. “Okay,” she whispers. Picking up the chenille blanket from the floor, she lies across my bed and wraps herself so she’s covered and grabs Tina’s gift I had set down. “When will you call me again? And don’t say soon. I hate it when you say soon.” She twirls the gift in her hand as she looks at me with questioning eyes. She shakes the gift and puts her ear to it. “I think it’s a bomb.” She whispers with a grin.
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Enjoyed your story even tho i know nothing of vanilla sky.This epihany that BETTE finally has regarding her company and the warning from a trusted friend makes for an enjoyable read.TINA appears to be the alter ego of BETTE the uncanny ability to read her and is spot on in that drawing.BETTE has some life altering/style changes to make so let’s see what happens becuz for a one off you left a lot unanswered yet it was thought provoking in a good way.
Thanks for your comment, Dunn! Perhaps not having seen the film makes for a better read, although I know what you mean by all the unanswered questions. Even though this is a one-off, I have not completely ruled out possibly coming back to it in the future for a follow-up. There’s no plan to do that right now, but it is always an option. I appreciate you taking the time to read it and offering your feedback!
Great art work!
You never disappoint me. I enjoyed it a lot. You do know how to tell a tale. Thanks
You are too kind, wkm. I’m very happy that you enjoyed the story. Thanks for showin’ the love!
Hope you continue to post stories. I do love your tales.
This is so cool and sexy! I never watch Vanilla sky, but I’ll be damn, I think BnT suit the part so well.
Perhaps I prefer my readers not to have seen the movie. It’s definitely a weird one. But I thought these scenes of a hopeful budding relationship worked with Bette and Tina in those roles. Glad you liked it!
Not seen Vanilla Sky but don’t feel it detracted from finding this story fascinating. I really enjoyed the read and hope that you do consider it as a base for more as this budding relationship between my favourite couple certainly has potential.
Thanks
Don’t think I’ve ever had anyone comment that my stories were ‘fascinating’ so thank you for the compliment Sassy! A follow-up isn’t completely off the table, but just not actively in the works at present. Appreciate you taking the time to read.
Waittttttt! No way!!! I love Vanilla Sky and the older one Abre los ojos! What can I say I can’t resist a naked Penelope Cruz (>ω< )!!!
It wasn't THAT weird to me tbh, I freakin cracked up and cried my eyes out when Penelope said to Tom "I'll see you in another life when we're both cats."
Ahhh old movie, good times! Didn't think I'd see the gay version of the story. Nicely done!
Hahahaha! I suppose the best reason to watch those films would be a naked Penelope. She’s not really my cup of tea, I’m more of a Salma Hayek fan, but she was great in these films. Like I said, I have a love/hate relationship with it. Thanks for reading, hope I did the story justice since you seem to be the only one who has seen the movie so far.
MEEEEOOOOOWWW!
yeeeeeeeeessssss….. you know how long I have agonised about seeing this piece come up…. I miss you my friend. I feel we have resumed our game of tag… you posted… I posted too! guees it’s your turn again ;0) xx
Brilliant, as always, Mell. I have missed your amazing storytelling. I hope you will give us more, if not this story, something else. Oh wait!! Don’t you have something else you’re working on? Like just a chapter or two left? OMG, you do…. Yay!!
Look forward to whatever you write.
ps
Salma Hayek? Nice.
Yes, Salma Hayek. I can’t quite put my finger on it (but I can definitely put my finger in it :p), but I have a thing for slightly older women. Just something about them I can’t get enough of. And thank you for your very kind words, even though they aren’t very subtle. I’ll try to write something or two somethings when I can.
GREAT!!! I know and a like Vanilla Sky (with Tom Cruz and Penelope Cruz) . Vanilla Sky is a Hollywood remake of another great movie – the spanish movie “Abre Los Ojos” (with Penelope Cruz and Eduardo Noriega) And I like so much your story , Invincible with Bette and Tina :))) THANK YOU!!!
Thanks, Leonora! You seem to be one of the few readers who have also seen the movie and bonus points for having seen the original Spanish film!!
I loved this new version of Vanilla Sky,
I saw the movie however vaguely lenbro
some scenes, it would be interesting if you
continue to write its version.
All Stars.