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    Invincible

    Story written on July 23, 2015 by meloveslu.
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    “You know they even have a nickname for you behind your back.” Whit informs me. I smile faintly at him. Understandingly. He leans in and kisses my cheek. “Citizen Strap-On.” He declares boldly and drunkenly making me flinch just a little. “Now you’ve got great instincts. But I say these next three things with complete

    “You know they even have a nickname for you behind your back.” Whit informs me. I smile faintly at him. Understandingly. He leans in and kisses my cheek. “Citizen Strap-On.” He declares boldly and drunkenly making me flinch just a little. “Now you’ve got great instincts. But I say these next three things with complete love. Claim your life…learn to be an asshole…Don’t be – ”

    “Two’s enough.” I raise my hand up indicating him to stop as I bend my knees slightly, bracing his form so that he doesn’t fall over.

    “Okay, forgive me. I still believe in this family. Even if it’s only you, Bette.” Whit continues.

    I go back to tracking Tina but then I see Jenny and lunge for her, effectively extracting myself from Whit’s oversharing this evening. “Jenny!” I call out. My assistant looks in my direction and meets me part way through the sea of partygoers. “Do me a favor and get Whit out of here. He’s in pretty bad shape already. Drive him home. And in the morning tell him he’s re-hired with a 50% raise. Give him that big corner office he’s always wanted right across the hall from the Seven Dwarves. Set up a meeting with Helena Peabody for Monday morning. I’m going to be in early on Monday.” This earns me a skeptical look from Jenny. “Well, earlier than usual.” I add sheepishly.

    Finally, I’m free to head up to my room with the gift from Tina and Alice. I open the door and slip inside, shutting it behind me. I lean my back and head up against the door and take a deep breath, closing my eyes. I run a hand through my hair. There are a number of wrapped presents piled on my bed and I move to set the one in my hand amongst the ever-growing heap when I notice a spaghetti strap maroon party dress haphazardly tossed next to them on my bed. Setting the gift on the edge of the bed, I gently pick up the dress and feel the fabric.

    “Hello, sexy.”

    I slowly turn to face my bedroom intruder and see Jodi leaning provocatively against the entryway of the en suite wearing nothing but the gray chenille throw that’s usually laying across the foot of my bed draped around her shoulders.

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    1. Enjoyed your story even tho i know nothing of vanilla sky.This epihany that BETTE finally has regarding her company and the warning from a trusted friend makes for an enjoyable read.TINA appears to be the alter ego of BETTE the uncanny ability to read her and is spot on in that drawing.BETTE has some life altering/style changes to make so let’s see what happens becuz for a one off you left a lot unanswered yet it was thought provoking in a good way.

      • Thanks for your comment, Dunn! Perhaps not having seen the film makes for a better read, although I know what you mean by all the unanswered questions. Even though this is a one-off, I have not completely ruled out possibly coming back to it in the future for a follow-up. There’s no plan to do that right now, but it is always an option. I appreciate you taking the time to read it and offering your feedback!

      • Perhaps I prefer my readers not to have seen the movie. It’s definitely a weird one. But I thought these scenes of a hopeful budding relationship worked with Bette and Tina in those roles. Glad you liked it!

    5. Not seen Vanilla Sky but don’t feel it detracted from finding this story fascinating. I really enjoyed the read and hope that you do consider it as a base for more as this budding relationship between my favourite couple certainly has potential.

      Thanks

      • Don’t think I’ve ever had anyone comment that my stories were ‘fascinating’ so thank you for the compliment Sassy! A follow-up isn’t completely off the table, but just not actively in the works at present. Appreciate you taking the time to read.

    6. Waittttttt! No way!!! I love Vanilla Sky and the older one Abre los ojos! What can I say I can’t resist a naked Penelope Cruz (>ω< )!!!

      It wasn't THAT weird to me tbh, I freakin cracked up and cried my eyes out when Penelope said to Tom "I'll see you in another life when we're both cats."

      Ahhh old movie, good times! Didn't think I'd see the gay version of the story. Nicely done!

      • Hahahaha! I suppose the best reason to watch those films would be a naked Penelope. She’s not really my cup of tea, I’m more of a Salma Hayek fan, but she was great in these films. Like I said, I have a love/hate relationship with it. Thanks for reading, hope I did the story justice since you seem to be the only one who has seen the movie so far.

        MEEEEOOOOOWWW!

    7. yeeeeeeeeessssss….. you know how long I have agonised about seeing this piece come up…. I miss you my friend. I feel we have resumed our game of tag… you posted… I posted too! guees it’s your turn again ;0) xx

    8. Brilliant, as always, Mell. I have missed your amazing storytelling. I hope you will give us more, if not this story, something else. Oh wait!! Don’t you have something else you’re working on? Like just a chapter or two left? OMG, you do…. Yay!!
      Look forward to whatever you write.

      ps
      Salma Hayek? Nice.

      • Yes, Salma Hayek. I can’t quite put my finger on it (but I can definitely put my finger in it :p), but I have a thing for slightly older women. Just something about them I can’t get enough of. And thank you for your very kind words, even though they aren’t very subtle. I’ll try to write something or two somethings when I can.

    9. GREAT!!! I know and a like Vanilla Sky (with Tom Cruz and Penelope Cruz) . Vanilla Sky is a Hollywood remake of another great movie – the spanish movie “Abre Los Ojos” (with Penelope Cruz and Eduardo Noriega) And I like so much your story , Invincible with Bette and Tina :))) THANK YOU!!!

    10. I loved this new version of Vanilla Sky,
      I saw the movie however vaguely lenbro
      some scenes, it would be interesting if you
      continue to write its version.
      All Stars.

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