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Invincible
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“Wow. I feel bad.” She says, regarding it carefully. “You said to draw a caricature.
“I know. I couldn’t. I saw you like that.”
“Well, it’s very good.” She’s still looking at herself, admiring my work.
I shrug casually. “I’ll sell it to you.” I say flippantly. The eccentric blonde looks up at me with narrowed eyes.
“You monster. How much?”
A small smile tugs at the corner of my lips and I whisper. “One kiss.” She returns my smile. There is definitely something developing between us but she is skillfully resisting me much in the same way I dodged Jodi earlier. There’s no shame in putting it out there now. “That smile is going to be the end of me.”
Her demeanor turns serious all of a sudden. Her pointed look is almost incredulous.
“And what happens when your friend calls you tomorrow?”
And there it is. What we’ve been dancing around for hours. I should feel guilty, but somehow, I’m not.
“She only met you a few days before me. She would do the same.”
“I see that friendship is important to you.”
“It is. But as her best friend, I also know that she is trying to finish a novel about inadequacy and rejection. So the longer I stay, the better it is for her career.”
The smile returns as she shakes her head at me, then yawns. Damn. How can a yawn be so sexy?
“Your career is the one I’d worry about.” I look down at the drawing she’s given me. She’s hit a nerve. I’m not sure what to say next. She picks up on it. “I’m sorry – ” She begins.
“No, no. You’re more right than you even know. I used to be one of those girls who was just sort of snowboarding through her life without any focus whatsoever.” I confess.
“When did you change?”
I pause.
“Um, about five minutes ago.” I offer a goofy grin.
“Every passing minute is another chance to turn it all around.” She says, almost whimsically.
This woman has no idea how her words strike right to the heart of me. I’ve never been one to believe in fate. But I’ll be damned if Alice wasn’t meant to have introduced us like this and now here we are.
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Enjoyed your story even tho i know nothing of vanilla sky.This epihany that BETTE finally has regarding her company and the warning from a trusted friend makes for an enjoyable read.TINA appears to be the alter ego of BETTE the uncanny ability to read her and is spot on in that drawing.BETTE has some life altering/style changes to make so let’s see what happens becuz for a one off you left a lot unanswered yet it was thought provoking in a good way.
Thanks for your comment, Dunn! Perhaps not having seen the film makes for a better read, although I know what you mean by all the unanswered questions. Even though this is a one-off, I have not completely ruled out possibly coming back to it in the future for a follow-up. There’s no plan to do that right now, but it is always an option. I appreciate you taking the time to read it and offering your feedback!
Great art work!
You never disappoint me. I enjoyed it a lot. You do know how to tell a tale. Thanks
You are too kind, wkm. I’m very happy that you enjoyed the story. Thanks for showin’ the love!
Hope you continue to post stories. I do love your tales.
This is so cool and sexy! I never watch Vanilla sky, but I’ll be damn, I think BnT suit the part so well.
Perhaps I prefer my readers not to have seen the movie. It’s definitely a weird one. But I thought these scenes of a hopeful budding relationship worked with Bette and Tina in those roles. Glad you liked it!
Not seen Vanilla Sky but don’t feel it detracted from finding this story fascinating. I really enjoyed the read and hope that you do consider it as a base for more as this budding relationship between my favourite couple certainly has potential.
Thanks
Don’t think I’ve ever had anyone comment that my stories were ‘fascinating’ so thank you for the compliment Sassy! A follow-up isn’t completely off the table, but just not actively in the works at present. Appreciate you taking the time to read.
Waittttttt! No way!!! I love Vanilla Sky and the older one Abre los ojos! What can I say I can’t resist a naked Penelope Cruz (>ω< )!!!
It wasn't THAT weird to me tbh, I freakin cracked up and cried my eyes out when Penelope said to Tom "I'll see you in another life when we're both cats."
Ahhh old movie, good times! Didn't think I'd see the gay version of the story. Nicely done!
Hahahaha! I suppose the best reason to watch those films would be a naked Penelope. She’s not really my cup of tea, I’m more of a Salma Hayek fan, but she was great in these films. Like I said, I have a love/hate relationship with it. Thanks for reading, hope I did the story justice since you seem to be the only one who has seen the movie so far.
MEEEEOOOOOWWW!
yeeeeeeeeessssss….. you know how long I have agonised about seeing this piece come up…. I miss you my friend. I feel we have resumed our game of tag… you posted… I posted too! guees it’s your turn again ;0) xx
Brilliant, as always, Mell. I have missed your amazing storytelling. I hope you will give us more, if not this story, something else. Oh wait!! Don’t you have something else you’re working on? Like just a chapter or two left? OMG, you do…. Yay!!
Look forward to whatever you write.
ps
Salma Hayek? Nice.
Yes, Salma Hayek. I can’t quite put my finger on it (but I can definitely put my finger in it :p), but I have a thing for slightly older women. Just something about them I can’t get enough of. And thank you for your very kind words, even though they aren’t very subtle. I’ll try to write something or two somethings when I can.
GREAT!!! I know and a like Vanilla Sky (with Tom Cruz and Penelope Cruz) . Vanilla Sky is a Hollywood remake of another great movie – the spanish movie “Abre Los Ojos” (with Penelope Cruz and Eduardo Noriega) And I like so much your story , Invincible with Bette and Tina :))) THANK YOU!!!
Thanks, Leonora! You seem to be one of the few readers who have also seen the movie and bonus points for having seen the original Spanish film!!
I loved this new version of Vanilla Sky,
I saw the movie however vaguely lenbro
some scenes, it would be interesting if you
continue to write its version.
All Stars.