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Without the water cascading down their bodies, Bette had a clearer view at what was presented in front of her. She gratefully took it in with eager eyes. And she could smell her, a primitive, sensual, delicious scent blended with the flowery of the body wash.
Tina was immediately red from her chest to her face the second she realized the brunette was smelling her. She tried to close her legs but Bette put a firm hand in between them. The brunette laid kisses on the supple thigh before holding the leg over her shoulder and supporting the woman at her bottom with another hand.
The first contact was the tip of her nose. Bette nudged her nose with tenderness to the delicate folds and inhaled. Tina jumped at the tickling breath. The brunette smiled sensing the voluptuous butt tense up in her hand. Then it was her tongue, a nice and long lick at the pink slit to make the blonde jump even harder. But she had the confidence to support the woman, and she was determined for a taste. So she pressed her talented tongue harder. A taste she earned. It was a little salty first, at the tip of her tongue, but as she gathered more of the limpid juice, the aftertaste was sweet, pure, and mellow. Accompanied by the angelic whimpers and sensuous moans from above, for one second, she thought she had died and gone to heaven. “Ahh, I could do this for years…” Bette thought, and sought for even more.
Tina, although shy, couldn’t help her own response. She ground her hips with urgency and met the rhythm of the movements of Bette’s very skilled and capable piece of muscle. And somehow her hand found its way to the damp brown hair, holding the woman steadily in place. It would’ve shamed herself if she had not known how good the brunette could be.
With one hand helping the blonde balance above her, Bette had her other hand between her own legs and stroking in sync with their sexy little dance. She had never done this before, nor had she planed it, but it was something she wanted to try. To be able to come together with the woman of her dreams meant a significant amount.
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Correction: I dedicate this chapter to Pie, my dear friend! Although…it is NC-17 and a teeny tiny bit inappropriate, but it’s a happy chapter, and a reminder for her to come back soon. She texted me this morning saying that she’s doing better, fighting an infection, but I’m sure she’s gonna kick ass!
And the inspiration of the title was from the song “Gold”, by Wake Owl. It is a really good song.
SO to my twitter family and fanfic readers! Stop by any time and leave me some love ;)
Peace :)
So glad there was some happiness for those two after the brutality. Thanks
Nice Chapter – nice dedication.
Pie seems to be recovering now so hopefully she’ll be back posting soon.
I would be pissed off if someone who supposedly cares for me, would allow someone to shoot drugs into me. I don’t care what the consequences are.
Other then that I really enjoy this story.
This was an awesome chapter… I loved the sexiness and them finally being together truly. But what I truly loved about this chapter was the cuteness factor and the verbal back and forth between them.. I just loved their playfulness!!! Great chapter!!
Wow this was awesome, thankyou!
Such a nice contrast to the violence of the last chapter. Beautiful musings of love and adoration.. Thank you, Rob! Again, Pie would be proud!
Wonderful, sweet and hot loving chapter! Just what we needed after that violence chapter.
It is good to hear Pie_Fair is getting better, she sure will kick ass!
It was a sweet and full of love chapter. It was very relaxing to read, an immense difference to the previous violence chapter.
I loved the playful banter between them.
really liked it. Thank you!
The more you get well soon Pie. and come back to us :)
Rob, it was amazing one NC: 17 pure quality,
my God !! was breathtaking, very sensual, very
romantic, wild and gentle at the same time,
all perfeito.elas simply torched this
history, and there is medicine for my poor heart.
ROB! ALL STARS.
Beautiful chapter amid all this terror!
RT,
I have been following this book and I don’t know if I have left a comment on your previous chapters..
But I couldn’t remember leaving a comment so here I am begging u to please hurry with your next chap coz I am really excited for these two ladies.
Command has been missing but I guess it wouldn’t hurt if you will entertain us with your own version of crime/suspense and full of love fan fiction..
Another achievement for you friend bcoz u are able to make us asked for more. (Wink!)
Thanks for this Chap! We are The Lucky One(s) *ooppss!!!
Oh my sweet friend!..Sorry it has taken me so long to catch up with your story but thank you so much for dedicating this chapter to me. I continue to improve everyday. You have managed to once again dazzle me with your writing and what a sweet chapter compared to the last one….Can’t wait for the next chapter and thank you for all your love and support.
Luv ya!
Pie
I’m so happy you are my friend because when someone ask one day, hey have you ever read one of Robyn’s amazing books? I can say of course I have, she’s a good friend of mines. lol ok I just had to say that…Seriously Robyn every chapter I am amazed by your writing…gosh you suck! ok not really! But truly you are incredible, fucking incredible! Dedicate your first book to me…something like “To the most beautiful, loving friend I ever known Marq***** oh shit almost let it slip. Anyways I love it…obviously! lol