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“You know what I want.”
“Just ask for it.” Bette encouraged her. As for herself, she wanted to be reassured that it was what Tina really wanted.
“I want you… to make love to me.” She said it, and momentarily withdrew from their kiss. “Please…?”
There were some sparkles in those limpid brown eyes. “Since you asked nicely—” But she was cut off by another round of intense deep kissing. She let her hand explore more, discovering the sensitive little bean hidden in the soft folds with her thumb, and massaging the tight opening to ease two fingers in. The touch was heavenly.
Tina moaned and dug her fingers into the supple tissue she found on Bette’s back. She spread her legs further to allow the exploring hand. And as the fingers eased in for a mere inch so not to hurt her, she grew a bit impatient. “In—inside.”
The tight but soft muscle flexed under her careful maneuver. Bette could feel the pulsing of the little knob, pleading for attention, and the contracting that welcomed her digit, she could almost hear the wanton sounds of their grinding. Her elevated senses magnified everything and it was causing the hot honey seeping out of her core, mingling with the hot water running through the material of her underwear and pajama pants. It was not exactly a satisfying sensation, but it excited her nevertheless. She pushed her fingers all the way in, and dragged along the spongy walls on her way out.
Tina cried, out of the indescribable ecstasy the act brought her. The feeling of Bette’s thumb pressing precisely on the sensitive little organ that held thousands of nerve endings, and those long and talented fingers hitting her G-spot without missing a single time, was gradually pushing her to the edge. She took notes, in the way Bette pleased her, for she wanted to give the brunette what she received from her. “Bette…Bette fas—faster…” She whimpered and made her humble request that was met by enthusiasm.
Bette could tell the blonde was coming to an explosive orgasm, it was exactly when she sped up, her hand clashing into the woman’s hips and making louder noises. Suddenly Tina’s smooth inner walls clasped down around her fingers, pushing her hand out. She held steady and thrusted one more time.
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Correction: I dedicate this chapter to Pie, my dear friend! Although…it is NC-17 and a teeny tiny bit inappropriate, but it’s a happy chapter, and a reminder for her to come back soon. She texted me this morning saying that she’s doing better, fighting an infection, but I’m sure she’s gonna kick ass!
And the inspiration of the title was from the song “Gold”, by Wake Owl. It is a really good song.
SO to my twitter family and fanfic readers! Stop by any time and leave me some love ;)
Peace :)
So glad there was some happiness for those two after the brutality. Thanks
Nice Chapter – nice dedication.
Pie seems to be recovering now so hopefully she’ll be back posting soon.
I would be pissed off if someone who supposedly cares for me, would allow someone to shoot drugs into me. I don’t care what the consequences are.
Other then that I really enjoy this story.
This was an awesome chapter… I loved the sexiness and them finally being together truly. But what I truly loved about this chapter was the cuteness factor and the verbal back and forth between them.. I just loved their playfulness!!! Great chapter!!
Wow this was awesome, thankyou!
Such a nice contrast to the violence of the last chapter. Beautiful musings of love and adoration.. Thank you, Rob! Again, Pie would be proud!
Wonderful, sweet and hot loving chapter! Just what we needed after that violence chapter.
It is good to hear Pie_Fair is getting better, she sure will kick ass!
It was a sweet and full of love chapter. It was very relaxing to read, an immense difference to the previous violence chapter.
I loved the playful banter between them.
really liked it. Thank you!
The more you get well soon Pie. and come back to us :)
Rob, it was amazing one NC: 17 pure quality,
my God !! was breathtaking, very sensual, very
romantic, wild and gentle at the same time,
all perfeito.elas simply torched this
history, and there is medicine for my poor heart.
ROB! ALL STARS.
Beautiful chapter amid all this terror!
RT,
I have been following this book and I don’t know if I have left a comment on your previous chapters..
But I couldn’t remember leaving a comment so here I am begging u to please hurry with your next chap coz I am really excited for these two ladies.
Command has been missing but I guess it wouldn’t hurt if you will entertain us with your own version of crime/suspense and full of love fan fiction..
Another achievement for you friend bcoz u are able to make us asked for more. (Wink!)
Thanks for this Chap! We are The Lucky One(s) *ooppss!!!
Oh my sweet friend!..Sorry it has taken me so long to catch up with your story but thank you so much for dedicating this chapter to me. I continue to improve everyday. You have managed to once again dazzle me with your writing and what a sweet chapter compared to the last one….Can’t wait for the next chapter and thank you for all your love and support.
Luv ya!
Pie
I’m so happy you are my friend because when someone ask one day, hey have you ever read one of Robyn’s amazing books? I can say of course I have, she’s a good friend of mines. lol ok I just had to say that…Seriously Robyn every chapter I am amazed by your writing…gosh you suck! ok not really! But truly you are incredible, fucking incredible! Dedicate your first book to me…something like “To the most beautiful, loving friend I ever known Marq***** oh shit almost let it slip. Anyways I love it…obviously! lol