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Tina screamed. Her entire body shook as the greatest pleasure hit her wave after wave. It was something she could not control. She jerked and squirmed, letting the climax ride out. Then her knees almost gave in. But Bette supported her with a hand gently cupping her sex.
“Good girl… good girl, shhh it’s ok.” The brunette understood Tina could become too sensitive after her orgasm, so she just held her, feeling the pulsing eventually soothed down. The red lines from Tina’s finger nails swelled and heated up a little under the hot running water but it was not entirely an unwelcome sensation.
Water ran through the small gap in between their bodies, it damped their hair, made the gold threads and dark waves intertwine together. Tina nudged her nose to the brunette’s neck and counted the heartbeat thudding underneath the luscious muscle. It was like an invitation, for her to suck and lick on the jumping point. Quite successfully, a whimpering exhale was drawn out of the woman.
Bette didn’t expect the blonde to recover this quickly. She just realized what Tina was trying to do to her when a slender hand snuck into her pants. “T! What are you doing?”
“I want to know how you feel like.” Tina chuckled at the exhilarated reaction from the brunette. She slid her hand further until her fingers dipped into the nice and warm pond of sensual desire. She had never felt another woman like this, never to know how silken and sweet the touch could be. “You’re so wet, Bette…” So wet and ready that it urged her to do something about it.
She had no idea what Tina was doing to her, but she let her anyway. Bette closed her eyes and panted, trying to fathom the fact that Tina wanted to take her. All she could do was to give.
To see someone always in control person give out under the loving stroking and caressing, it gave Tina a new level of high. Her kisses trailed down the beautiful neck to the little hollow that gathered a small pool of droplets between the collar bones, and then to the heaving chest, finally arrived to the soft bosoms. As strong as Bette had disciplined herself to be, the feminine appeal of her appearance was undeniable. Tina found her addicted to the softness as she laid open mouth kisses on the breast, and circled her tongue around the hardened nipple.
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Correction: I dedicate this chapter to Pie, my dear friend! Although…it is NC-17 and a teeny tiny bit inappropriate, but it’s a happy chapter, and a reminder for her to come back soon. She texted me this morning saying that she’s doing better, fighting an infection, but I’m sure she’s gonna kick ass!
And the inspiration of the title was from the song “Gold”, by Wake Owl. It is a really good song.
SO to my twitter family and fanfic readers! Stop by any time and leave me some love ;)
Peace :)
So glad there was some happiness for those two after the brutality. Thanks
Nice Chapter – nice dedication.
Pie seems to be recovering now so hopefully she’ll be back posting soon.
I would be pissed off if someone who supposedly cares for me, would allow someone to shoot drugs into me. I don’t care what the consequences are.
Other then that I really enjoy this story.
This was an awesome chapter… I loved the sexiness and them finally being together truly. But what I truly loved about this chapter was the cuteness factor and the verbal back and forth between them.. I just loved their playfulness!!! Great chapter!!
Wow this was awesome, thankyou!
Such a nice contrast to the violence of the last chapter. Beautiful musings of love and adoration.. Thank you, Rob! Again, Pie would be proud!
Wonderful, sweet and hot loving chapter! Just what we needed after that violence chapter.
It is good to hear Pie_Fair is getting better, she sure will kick ass!
It was a sweet and full of love chapter. It was very relaxing to read, an immense difference to the previous violence chapter.
I loved the playful banter between them.
really liked it. Thank you!
The more you get well soon Pie. and come back to us :)
Rob, it was amazing one NC: 17 pure quality,
my God !! was breathtaking, very sensual, very
romantic, wild and gentle at the same time,
all perfeito.elas simply torched this
history, and there is medicine for my poor heart.
ROB! ALL STARS.
Beautiful chapter amid all this terror!
RT,
I have been following this book and I don’t know if I have left a comment on your previous chapters..
But I couldn’t remember leaving a comment so here I am begging u to please hurry with your next chap coz I am really excited for these two ladies.
Command has been missing but I guess it wouldn’t hurt if you will entertain us with your own version of crime/suspense and full of love fan fiction..
Another achievement for you friend bcoz u are able to make us asked for more. (Wink!)
Thanks for this Chap! We are The Lucky One(s) *ooppss!!!
Oh my sweet friend!..Sorry it has taken me so long to catch up with your story but thank you so much for dedicating this chapter to me. I continue to improve everyday. You have managed to once again dazzle me with your writing and what a sweet chapter compared to the last one….Can’t wait for the next chapter and thank you for all your love and support.
Luv ya!
Pie
I’m so happy you are my friend because when someone ask one day, hey have you ever read one of Robyn’s amazing books? I can say of course I have, she’s a good friend of mines. lol ok I just had to say that…Seriously Robyn every chapter I am amazed by your writing…gosh you suck! ok not really! But truly you are incredible, fucking incredible! Dedicate your first book to me…something like “To the most beautiful, loving friend I ever known Marq***** oh shit almost let it slip. Anyways I love it…obviously! lol