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Lest I Forget (5a)
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“I’m sure Dr. Hernandez will be excited to hear about this,” Gemma said softly. “He was worried she’d have a lot more difficulty with swallowing. I know she hasn’t really been moving much, but what she has been doing is pretty great. I guess we’ll just have to wait and see,” she finished. “Okay, well it looks like you two are doing fine, so I’ll get out of your hair if you want me to.”
“Actually, do you have time to hear a little about the reception? I feel sort of bad for breaking down after the wedding story. The reception was pretty great too,” I said. She just smiled and sat down.
“Why not? I’m done with my rounds and I have my pager, so I think I can spare a few minutes.”
I smiled back and looked down at Alice as she drank slowly. “This kinda reminds me of the reception a little bit, baby,” I told her. She just looked back at me expectantly, so I sighed and started the story again.
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After the ceremony, we’d all migrated to the other side of the Planet, where some of the people that Helena had asked to help had been busy setting up the buffet. There were several kinds of sushi and other finger foods, and while it definitely wasn’t anything fancy, there was a good variety and more than enough for everybody.
Every table had a bottle of champagne, and before too long everybody was done eating and looking at Alice and I expectantly. We’d been feeding each other sushi on one of the couches in the back, completely lost in each other. When we heard Kit clear her throat, we looked up at the crowd, startled.
“You girls wanna say anything, or just sit there being antisocial all day?” Kit asked, looking like she was going to laugh at us.
“Um…thanks for coming to our wedding?” Alice ventured. There was laughter through the room until Shane stood up, banging on her champagne glass with a fork. This brought on more laughter, but it died as she began her toast.
“I’ve known these two for a long time now, and I can safely say that they’re the best friends a person could have. It took them years to finally get together, but they’re not really all that smart sometimes, so it wasn’t really surprising. Anyway, I was there through all the problems they had together, and even during those it was more than obvious that they loved each other. I never really believed in anything like having one true love who’s made for me alone, but these two sort of personify that. When Dana got sick, it seemed like the only person who made her feel better was Alice, and I know that if the situation was reversed it’d be exactly the same, except the other way around. I guess all I’m really trying to say here is that the two of them aren’t themselves when they’re apart, and I wish them nothing but the best.”
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hey! Sorry for not commenting on the 4th part of this story. I was wondering the whole time if you updated it, I just appearently didn’t see it. But hey, that gave me two parts at one time!Lovely wedding and wonderful wedding night. Just everything about it was beautifully written and described. Them first just sitting down on the couch after they got home was kinda typically danish and it fit somehow. I found it sweet. And don’t worry, you did a very good job with the first person writing. Loved it!
Beautifully Written….and HOT!I love thier relationship!
As I said before, better and better – oh, and hotter and hotter … Wow!! Wonderful, fantastic, bravo, more!!
I guess I was overwhelmed by the 2 paragraphs and the last line “I was truly saying goodbye to her just sent me over the top and I had to take a break. This post is another great piece of work. S’s toast was right on and touching. I am glad that that the rest of the chapter is more about happy Danish, I was a little apprehensive that I might keep crying for the rest of the chapter. Then you showed us the humor. “…couldn’t pee on our own, then other was to buy a gun and start firing,,. and racing each other to the bedroom, classic! I might have mentioned this before, and I will say it again, you have to be the “Yoda of Danish.” I have not read one piece of your work that would negate my opinion. You have A & D down pact, writing as if you were themselves. And please do not second guess yourself. I echo what MaGoose said, “excellent first person NC-17.” Just awesome MT. Thank you.
MT great story I love it you are an amazing writer keep it up
MT great story I love it you are an amazing writer keep it up
I’m thinking of contucting a petition drive for keeping Alice alive in this story ;p. It’s too haaaard!!! So, hereby I ask, beg, plead for this fanfic to be a little sci-fic… Anyone join me? ;) just kiddin’ (well, half true). Anyway, I loved it as always MT, so once more eskerrik asko!
The first part was very moving. I could totally picture the two of them being all caught up in their own little world on their wedding. And the second part…damn, that was the hottest strap-on scene ever! :D L3 is only 3,5 weeks away. I’m counting the days!
wow…that’s the only word i can form. i almost stopped reading after the 1st page to tell you how fn amazing and touching dana’s breakdown was written. but i forged on and the rest of this is just…wow.
Okay I didn’t think I was going to get through the first page. Dana’s breakdown almost did me in and was very affecting. I think eveyone who’s reading this will agree that your writing from Dana’s perspective is just spot on. Shane’s speech at the reception was just exactly what I would’ve imagined from Shane! Back at the apartment… Dana and Alice’s slow burn was very Danish. However the line, “But I love the way you beg me when I wear it, and the way you moan for me when I use it,” OMG. Anyway, it was a pretty hot little scene in a very good chapter. I reaaallly wish Alice’s condition would improve, or at the least case we get “many” more chapters of happy memories. Great writing!
Well, I think we can say that you mastered writing a sex scene in the first person pretty successfully! That was great, I loved the whole scene in the living room after they got home…so tender. It’s so sad to know that despite all the good times this ain’t going to end well! Draw out the memories for us please!!
im speechless……that was aaaamazing muted how is it that you get better and better every single time you just exceed my expectations again and again your a genius writer is it your profession, can i ask that? neways blew me away so sweet i hate thinking that she’s gunna pass away tho if only she didnt have to, miraculous recovery perhaps? yay! i’d believe it :)
awesome. really, really, really beautiful. :)
wow wow wow muted, it takes a lot for me to cry with the written word, but somehow your words touch my heart. you have an amazing way of describing the love of dana and alice, it is truly a gift and i feel greatful that i have the opportunity to read it. PPS and well done as always.
Loved Shane’s speech at the wedding. It just shows that your dialog talents are not limited to Danish. And, might I say, you did some excellent first person NC-17. The strap-on thing? HOT! I’m with wonderingaloud — please draw out the happy memories. And with sonny_gal wishing for a miraculous recovery — although I know there won’t be one. I do have to keep reminding myself that they have had 37-some-odd years together and that no one lives forever…and that they are fictional people. You and the other great Danish writers make them seem so real (plus the incredible acting in the first three seasons by Erin and Leisha). Thanks so much for the new chapter and the great story!
Nothing cheers me up more than reading some happy Danish! Yay!! Such wonderful memories written so beautifully that it feels as though we’re all reliving these happy moments with them. Dana’s breakdown was so real and understandable. Well Done hun :D
I have just finished reading 2 paragraghs and I am bawling. I need some time out before I continue. This is so unbelievable.