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Lest I Forget (5a)
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“A sandwich would be great,” I told her with a smile, realizing how hungry I actually was. I was sure that had something to do with my little breakdown as much as the fact that I hadn’t had anything to eat or drink for awhile. “I’m sorry about making a scene before,” I told her apologetically. She just smiled.
“That’s totally okay. If you hadn’t broken at down at some point, I’d have been really worried. And it wasn’t like I didn’t need to get back to my rounds anyway,” Gemma responded with a shrug. “Anyway, please don’t worry about it. I’ll run and see what I can grab you from the cart, okay? And it says on Alice’s chart that she should be able to drink something if she wants to, so I’ll go find her some juice too. I’ll be back in a few minutes.” Having said this, she shut the door behind her. I looked over at Alice and grinned.
“I bet you’re thirsty after having that tube in your throat, huh?” I asked. “I’m sure he would have let you have something sooner, hun, but he was probably afraid you wouldn’t be able to keep it down.” Alice just looked at me with quiet acceptance. I smiled and pulled my chair closer to her bed again, hugging her as if my life depended on it.
Gemma managed to find me a pretty decent club sandwich off the cart in the cafeteria. She’d also grabbed a gilled chicken salad and some Jello, which she handed to me with a smile. “Cheap dessert, I know. I can always ask them to make you something tomorrow,” she said in an apology. I just shook my head.
“Nah, it’s okay. To be perfectly honest with you, I haven’t even been thinking about food today. I can always call my friends to bring me something by if I need it,” I replied, realizing that I should probably call them before too long.
“Okay, but remember that I’m here and it’s no big deal if you want anything. After I leave tonight I’ll come back for the next three days, so if you need anything don’t hesitate to ask me,” she replied. “Oh, and I brought you both some apple juice, and I got a couple cans of Sprite for you, Dana,” she continued, taking the drinks out. “I’ll get you a new water pitcher before I leave tonight too, that one’s probably getting gross,” she said, glancing at the pitcher on the table that I’d honestly forgotten was there.
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hey! Sorry for not commenting on the 4th part of this story. I was wondering the whole time if you updated it, I just appearently didn’t see it. But hey, that gave me two parts at one time!Lovely wedding and wonderful wedding night. Just everything about it was beautifully written and described. Them first just sitting down on the couch after they got home was kinda typically danish and it fit somehow. I found it sweet. And don’t worry, you did a very good job with the first person writing. Loved it!
Beautifully Written….and HOT!I love thier relationship!
As I said before, better and better – oh, and hotter and hotter … Wow!! Wonderful, fantastic, bravo, more!!
I guess I was overwhelmed by the 2 paragraphs and the last line “I was truly saying goodbye to her just sent me over the top and I had to take a break. This post is another great piece of work. S’s toast was right on and touching. I am glad that that the rest of the chapter is more about happy Danish, I was a little apprehensive that I might keep crying for the rest of the chapter. Then you showed us the humor. “…couldn’t pee on our own, then other was to buy a gun and start firing,,. and racing each other to the bedroom, classic! I might have mentioned this before, and I will say it again, you have to be the “Yoda of Danish.” I have not read one piece of your work that would negate my opinion. You have A & D down pact, writing as if you were themselves. And please do not second guess yourself. I echo what MaGoose said, “excellent first person NC-17.” Just awesome MT. Thank you.
MT great story I love it you are an amazing writer keep it up
MT great story I love it you are an amazing writer keep it up
I’m thinking of contucting a petition drive for keeping Alice alive in this story ;p. It’s too haaaard!!! So, hereby I ask, beg, plead for this fanfic to be a little sci-fic… Anyone join me? ;) just kiddin’ (well, half true). Anyway, I loved it as always MT, so once more eskerrik asko!
The first part was very moving. I could totally picture the two of them being all caught up in their own little world on their wedding. And the second part…damn, that was the hottest strap-on scene ever! :D L3 is only 3,5 weeks away. I’m counting the days!
wow…that’s the only word i can form. i almost stopped reading after the 1st page to tell you how fn amazing and touching dana’s breakdown was written. but i forged on and the rest of this is just…wow.
Okay I didn’t think I was going to get through the first page. Dana’s breakdown almost did me in and was very affecting. I think eveyone who’s reading this will agree that your writing from Dana’s perspective is just spot on. Shane’s speech at the reception was just exactly what I would’ve imagined from Shane! Back at the apartment… Dana and Alice’s slow burn was very Danish. However the line, “But I love the way you beg me when I wear it, and the way you moan for me when I use it,” OMG. Anyway, it was a pretty hot little scene in a very good chapter. I reaaallly wish Alice’s condition would improve, or at the least case we get “many” more chapters of happy memories. Great writing!
Well, I think we can say that you mastered writing a sex scene in the first person pretty successfully! That was great, I loved the whole scene in the living room after they got home…so tender. It’s so sad to know that despite all the good times this ain’t going to end well! Draw out the memories for us please!!
im speechless……that was aaaamazing muted how is it that you get better and better every single time you just exceed my expectations again and again your a genius writer is it your profession, can i ask that? neways blew me away so sweet i hate thinking that she’s gunna pass away tho if only she didnt have to, miraculous recovery perhaps? yay! i’d believe it :)
awesome. really, really, really beautiful. :)
wow wow wow muted, it takes a lot for me to cry with the written word, but somehow your words touch my heart. you have an amazing way of describing the love of dana and alice, it is truly a gift and i feel greatful that i have the opportunity to read it. PPS and well done as always.
Loved Shane’s speech at the wedding. It just shows that your dialog talents are not limited to Danish. And, might I say, you did some excellent first person NC-17. The strap-on thing? HOT! I’m with wonderingaloud — please draw out the happy memories. And with sonny_gal wishing for a miraculous recovery — although I know there won’t be one. I do have to keep reminding myself that they have had 37-some-odd years together and that no one lives forever…and that they are fictional people. You and the other great Danish writers make them seem so real (plus the incredible acting in the first three seasons by Erin and Leisha). Thanks so much for the new chapter and the great story!
Nothing cheers me up more than reading some happy Danish! Yay!! Such wonderful memories written so beautifully that it feels as though we’re all reliving these happy moments with them. Dana’s breakdown was so real and understandable. Well Done hun :D
I have just finished reading 2 paragraghs and I am bawling. I need some time out before I continue. This is so unbelievable.