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Lest I Forget (5b)
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“I certainly hope so,” I muttered, already dreading the experience. Shane laughed and hugged me.
“You’ll be fine; just relax and quit worrying about it, will ya? Oh, and don’t drink all the booze on the cruise. That might help a little bit.”
“Fuck you, McCutcheon,” I grumbled, but it was good-natured as I hugged her back.
The lunch went really well. If it hadn’t been for Tina’s absence, it would have felt like the old days, the way we all sat there gossiping and making fun of each other. Well, that and the fact that Alice and I were together, and couldn’t seem to stop touching hands as she ate her crab legs and I ate my shrimp scampi. It was really nice, just being there with everybody. I didn’t even mind that Bette and Shane were there, and before we’d left I’d thought that I wouldn’t be able to wait to get rid of them. I know that sounds bad, but every time I so much as glanced at Alice my heart just melted. I wanted her all to myself, and it really didn’t even have anything to do with sex. That was a part of it, of course…but honestly, if I’d been told that during the cruise all I could do was hug her, I would still have been the happiest person alive.
I don’t really recall what we did after lunch. It was too soon to go on board the ship just then, so I’m sure we did something…but I really don’t remember what it was. For me, all the mattered was that I was with Alice.
By the time we got to the ship, she and I were both ready to just curl up in bed and sleep for awhile. Still, we had to get all the paperwork settled, our passports checked so we could go into Canada when the ship landed, and a bunch of other bureaucratic nonsense that made my head ache. Luckily, Bette took it upon herself to take care of it for us. Beyond showing the staff our IDs and passports and signing some papers, we really didn’t have to do much. Bette hugged us both and told us to have a great time, and Shane did the same while slipping me three boxes of the seasickness pills.
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AWESOME! I love how you have Dana being so in-love with Alice, just utterely and completely. That is how I saw it happening on the real show ‘if’ that ding dong IC didn’t knock TV Dana off…ugh it still bugs me, why, okay I can rant on that one forever…back to your story…I truly love this story, so well written you can actually visualize the scenes. And yeah nice touch with the shower, I love it! Nice work!
No, you can’t let her slip away yet, there are years and years of stories to be told … and you must tell it as wonderfully as you have up to now.
I forgot to add this to my comment last night. After watching the Afterellen’s vlog: Worst Lesbian TV Moments where Killing Dana was the #1, I was really bumped out all over again. Then your post came along in the early hours in the morning made me feel a whole lot better. I just wanted you to know that. Honestly, it is this alternative universe of fanfics which gives me a little comfort and plenty of laughs. I cannot stress enough just how much miss DF on the show. Thanks MT and all you Danish writers again.
gasp. But I know you will get Alice back, I just know it. And I love how much in love they were back in the days and still are of course. It’s wonderfully desribed by you. Great.
I agree with MaGoose, this chapter really was a rollercoaster of emotions. I loved the whole interaction with Shane and Bette . And then the kiss Alice gave to Dana right before she slipped back in her coma. Poor Dana. :( I hope Alice will come by for a little while. *keeps fingers crossed*
“So fucking cute”, and Shane was sooo effin’ right! I agree with ACH21, there’s no doubt in my mind that Dana would be consummed body and soul with her love for Alice. It’s very touching, *sigh*. I also have to add that the humor in this story is cracking me up, spot on there MT! I am anxiously waiting to hear more about their life together…
Running out of hot water, fantastic. Bette & Shane’s note was even better. Keeping the passport with the sex toys, LMAO! How the hell do you eat crabs legs with one hand? Ha-ha-haa. S was a real good friend getting D her 3 boxes of seasickness pills. The sunrise scene was perfect. I think this Alaskan honeymoon cruise was just what the doctor ordered. And just when I was having fun reading this update, A might have slipped back into a coma. My heart goes out to D and thank god Charlie and S showed up at the right time. Please let A stay for a little bit longer. Thank you MT for another awesome update. I hope you will be able to post another one before your trip if you have the time.
noooooooooooooooooooooo :'(
Incredible chapter, MT! I started to cut and paste my favorite lines to comment on. However, I realized that it was most of the chapter. What a roller coaster of humor, drama, sadness, romance, sex… I’ve said it before and I will keep saying it: You rock at writing Danish. I trust that Alice will be back from the coma — I know you have a lot more to say about their years together. Thanks so much for the update!!
at last I get a chance to read some stories and I headed straight for yours. This story is fantastic you write so well and are developing the long happy life together that we know this pair could have had beautifully. I expectantly await the next chapter!!!!!