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Lest I Forget (5b)
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I didn’t even realize that neither of us had had a chance to brush our hair until I climbed into the Jeep after Alice, whose hair was a tangled mess that looked like one of the weird landscaping thingies my mom used to put in the yard every spring where the grass wouldn’t grow. It made me start giggling again, but this time, Alice didn’t join me. She just stared at me, along with Bette and Shane, who looked like they’d just stepped into the psychiatric ward.
Bette finally shook her head. “I don’t even want to know, you two. Get your asses in here so we can get to San Diego, will you? Here, have a muffin,” she said with finality, handing us a brown paper sack filled with breakfast goodies. We’d barely managed to climb in, throw our stuff in the back and shut the door before Shane pulled away.
No one really seemed too peppy, and that was perfectly all right with me. I just cuddled up next to Alice, and we fell asleep together as Bette and Shane yammered on about something or other from the front of the Jeep.
A little over two hours later, I felt Al shaking my shoulder, and opened my eyes blearily to see sleepy brown ones looking at me. I jumped a little out of instinct alone, and she smiled. “Bette said to wake you up. She went to get us a table in the restaurant,” Alice murmured before she leaned in and kissed me.
“So fucking cute,” Shane muttered from the front seat, then she waved out the window. “Come on you guys, let’s go have lunch,” she directed, stepping out of the Jeep.
“I’d much rather just stay in here with you,” I whispered to Alice. She smiled but shook her head and opened the door, dragging me with her.
“Come on Dane, it’ll be fun. Besides, we should eat something before we get on the boat,” she said. I grimaced, remembering the last time I’d been on a boat with Alice. Well, actually, every time I’d been on a boat, period. I suddenly hated this honeymoon idea.
“It’s okay, Dane,” Shane comforted, having seen our exchange. “I picked you up some sea-sickness pills at the drugstore. Besides, once you’re on the water a day or so you’ll be fine.”
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AWESOME! I love how you have Dana being so in-love with Alice, just utterely and completely. That is how I saw it happening on the real show ‘if’ that ding dong IC didn’t knock TV Dana off…ugh it still bugs me, why, okay I can rant on that one forever…back to your story…I truly love this story, so well written you can actually visualize the scenes. And yeah nice touch with the shower, I love it! Nice work!
No, you can’t let her slip away yet, there are years and years of stories to be told … and you must tell it as wonderfully as you have up to now.
I forgot to add this to my comment last night. After watching the Afterellen’s vlog: Worst Lesbian TV Moments where Killing Dana was the #1, I was really bumped out all over again. Then your post came along in the early hours in the morning made me feel a whole lot better. I just wanted you to know that. Honestly, it is this alternative universe of fanfics which gives me a little comfort and plenty of laughs. I cannot stress enough just how much miss DF on the show. Thanks MT and all you Danish writers again.
gasp. But I know you will get Alice back, I just know it. And I love how much in love they were back in the days and still are of course. It’s wonderfully desribed by you. Great.
I agree with MaGoose, this chapter really was a rollercoaster of emotions. I loved the whole interaction with Shane and Bette . And then the kiss Alice gave to Dana right before she slipped back in her coma. Poor Dana. :( I hope Alice will come by for a little while. *keeps fingers crossed*
“So fucking cute”, and Shane was sooo effin’ right! I agree with ACH21, there’s no doubt in my mind that Dana would be consummed body and soul with her love for Alice. It’s very touching, *sigh*. I also have to add that the humor in this story is cracking me up, spot on there MT! I am anxiously waiting to hear more about their life together…
Running out of hot water, fantastic. Bette & Shane’s note was even better. Keeping the passport with the sex toys, LMAO! How the hell do you eat crabs legs with one hand? Ha-ha-haa. S was a real good friend getting D her 3 boxes of seasickness pills. The sunrise scene was perfect. I think this Alaskan honeymoon cruise was just what the doctor ordered. And just when I was having fun reading this update, A might have slipped back into a coma. My heart goes out to D and thank god Charlie and S showed up at the right time. Please let A stay for a little bit longer. Thank you MT for another awesome update. I hope you will be able to post another one before your trip if you have the time.
noooooooooooooooooooooo :'(
Incredible chapter, MT! I started to cut and paste my favorite lines to comment on. However, I realized that it was most of the chapter. What a roller coaster of humor, drama, sadness, romance, sex… I’ve said it before and I will keep saying it: You rock at writing Danish. I trust that Alice will be back from the coma — I know you have a lot more to say about their years together. Thanks so much for the update!!
at last I get a chance to read some stories and I headed straight for yours. This story is fantastic you write so well and are developing the long happy life together that we know this pair could have had beautifully. I expectantly await the next chapter!!!!!