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Lest I Forget (5b)
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“Good. They’re idiots for coming over anyway…I mean really. What did they think was gonna happen?” She stopped and shrugged. “Okay, do you know where your passport is? I totally forgot we need it for Canada. I have no idea where mine is, Dana,” she fretted, glancing around the room as if the damn thing was going to magically appear on the windowsill or something. I smiled, because I knew exactly where both our passports were. I was the one who had put them away in her filing cabinet, in the file folder marked “Important! Alice Pieszecki, you are NOT to shred this folder no matter how messy and out of place it might look.”
“Honey…do you honestly think it’s in here? Wouldn’t it be in a sensible place, like the desk?” I asked, just to wind her up. She was already looking pretty flustered about it, and I thought it was adorable.
“No…important stuff like that, I keep with the sex toys,” she mumbled, rifling through the very drawer where she did indeed keep the dildos, handcuffs, and other assorted stuff. I laughed and walked over to her, pulling her away from the sex drawer and into my arms for a hug.
“Baby, I put it with mine in the filing cabinet in the living room,” I told her quietly. She just sighed and rested her head on my shoulder.
“You knew all this time and you didn’t tell me? That’s not fair,” she pouted, but when I kissed her she smiled. “I’m glad you did that though. You’re always doing little stuff like that for me, and I love you for it. What would I do without you?” she asked seriously. I smiled.
“You’d probably masturbate a lot more,” I said before I could stop myself. She laughed and started to tickle me mercilessly until I somehow got away from her and ran into the living room, where I got our passports and cameras before she tackled me.
“High tech photography equipment!” I yelled, but she got me to the floor and tickled me anyway. We were still rolling around on the floor laughing when we heard my phone going off in the bedroom. Two seconds after it stopped, Alice’s started. The house phone started to ring simultaneously, and all Alice and I could do was look at each other and giggle. Then we giggled as we got up off the floor, walked to the bedroom, got our things and headed out to the lot.
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AWESOME! I love how you have Dana being so in-love with Alice, just utterely and completely. That is how I saw it happening on the real show ‘if’ that ding dong IC didn’t knock TV Dana off…ugh it still bugs me, why, okay I can rant on that one forever…back to your story…I truly love this story, so well written you can actually visualize the scenes. And yeah nice touch with the shower, I love it! Nice work!
No, you can’t let her slip away yet, there are years and years of stories to be told … and you must tell it as wonderfully as you have up to now.
I forgot to add this to my comment last night. After watching the Afterellen’s vlog: Worst Lesbian TV Moments where Killing Dana was the #1, I was really bumped out all over again. Then your post came along in the early hours in the morning made me feel a whole lot better. I just wanted you to know that. Honestly, it is this alternative universe of fanfics which gives me a little comfort and plenty of laughs. I cannot stress enough just how much miss DF on the show. Thanks MT and all you Danish writers again.
gasp. But I know you will get Alice back, I just know it. And I love how much in love they were back in the days and still are of course. It’s wonderfully desribed by you. Great.
I agree with MaGoose, this chapter really was a rollercoaster of emotions. I loved the whole interaction with Shane and Bette . And then the kiss Alice gave to Dana right before she slipped back in her coma. Poor Dana. :( I hope Alice will come by for a little while. *keeps fingers crossed*
“So fucking cute”, and Shane was sooo effin’ right! I agree with ACH21, there’s no doubt in my mind that Dana would be consummed body and soul with her love for Alice. It’s very touching, *sigh*. I also have to add that the humor in this story is cracking me up, spot on there MT! I am anxiously waiting to hear more about their life together…
Running out of hot water, fantastic. Bette & Shane’s note was even better. Keeping the passport with the sex toys, LMAO! How the hell do you eat crabs legs with one hand? Ha-ha-haa. S was a real good friend getting D her 3 boxes of seasickness pills. The sunrise scene was perfect. I think this Alaskan honeymoon cruise was just what the doctor ordered. And just when I was having fun reading this update, A might have slipped back into a coma. My heart goes out to D and thank god Charlie and S showed up at the right time. Please let A stay for a little bit longer. Thank you MT for another awesome update. I hope you will be able to post another one before your trip if you have the time.
noooooooooooooooooooooo :'(
Incredible chapter, MT! I started to cut and paste my favorite lines to comment on. However, I realized that it was most of the chapter. What a roller coaster of humor, drama, sadness, romance, sex… I’ve said it before and I will keep saying it: You rock at writing Danish. I trust that Alice will be back from the coma — I know you have a lot more to say about their years together. Thanks so much for the update!!
at last I get a chance to read some stories and I headed straight for yours. This story is fantastic you write so well and are developing the long happy life together that we know this pair could have had beautifully. I expectantly await the next chapter!!!!!