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Love in Control – Chapter VIII – Will You Marry Me?
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She fell silent as she felt those soft lips take possession of hers. She caressed the hair on the nape of Jade’s head before pulling her closer, and then opened her mouth wider when she felt the silky tip of the tongue she knew so well venture out and touch her own. She heard moaning when their tongues slid and danced with one another, and realized it had come from deep inside her own throat.
Another escaped her as Jade reached over and pulled her onto her lap and then started caressing her hips with her fingertips. Rian felt Jade’s large hands run up and down her bare back repeatedly, exploring the steadily warming skin there.
“That was a show I’d rather not have you repeat in this dress, baby. I may have to call a small army to back me up next time, because I will surely lose a bidding war with any one of those guys …”
Rian let out another soft moan when those hands travelled around her back and gently cupped her breasts. Another gush from her insides soaked her already-sticky silk panties as she felt thumbs that knew just where and when to rub tenderly run over her nipples. Preparing the ground for —
“No man on earth could outbid you where it counts, Jade,” she answered hoarsely. “Now get this dress off of me, please.”
Without breaking the long, slow kiss, Jade pulled on the side zipper that she’d felt as she’d caressed Rian on her sides, and gently slipped the shimmering dress off of each shoulder until it bunched around Rian’s waist. She quickly undid the clasp of the complicated bra and tossed it to a corner of the sofa, one hand rubbing circles on her beloved’s soft skin as it trailed down her quivering core ‘til she got to Rian’s stomach, the other continuing to rub the sexy back that had been beguiling Jade and all the guys watching Rian all night long. This was all going too slowly for Rian, and she really did need Jade’s fingers in her now. She tore her lips away from Jade’s heady kisses. “Ba-a-a-by… please,” she moaned.
“Shh….” Jade answered, as a hand snuck past the elastic of the silk panties, rubbing the smooth mound along the way, feeling heat emanating from the moaning beauty writhing on top of her. The seeking fingers found Rian’s sticky, hot, and wet entrance. “Sooo wet,” Jade whispered as she stroked between the lips, causing Rian to moan louder.
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Nice, enjoyed it especially Tina and Bette in the beginning
I agree the beginning was a laugh with Bette and Tina????
Love it! loved the homage to his #purple majesty Prince!….”when doves cry…”great way to start the day! My thanks!
Oh, that was absolute worth the long wait!
Fantastic and sexy chapter, wouldn’t mind if you write more B&T in your story.
But Rian and Jade captured my heart, they are a great couple.
Thanks for the update!
You can be sure that yes, it was worth the wait
for another fantastic chapter!
My heart always Tibette, however Jade and Rian captivated me.
The whole universe
I’m with all the above especially wkm and Dee22 Tibette always.
Worth the wait, thanks.
Hello everyone. Thanks for taking the time to comment. A few caveats: the story arc for “Love In Control” will not have much Bette/Tina romance, although there will be occasional scenes. Their story is evolving in this book — the evolution will see them in a family unit, rather than as a couple. This particular arc started with scenes in earlier chapters, and will be more central in the next chapters. I think I’ve gone over their romance (exhaustively) in the other books already, anyway, and I really don’t have much more to say about “Tibette” than what I’ve already written in the other books.
I sense that it’s time that they evolve and mature in my stories, as characters, otherwise, their story arc will not make much sense if they remain struck in TiBette-land (at least in my storyline). To be perfectly honest, an evolving, maturing Bette/Tina, in the way I’ve been writing about them, is infinitely more interesting for me to write. I can sense them growing, and it seems to be as part of a family unit: this evolution is more authentic and important in this book than “TiBette.” it’s the other couples, in the meantime, who will be developing their own romances.
In the end this book is about a few kinds of love, what they mean, etc., but make no mistake the evolving Bette/Tina take on love remains the central/anchoring one for this book, particularly as things take a turn in the next chapters.
i may disappoint many of the readers who take the time to click through the pages of this story … I hope they will understand that I really can’t write a story if it’s not something I believe in or can stand behind, or would even want to read myself. I have moved on, and have explored the limits of that particular time in their lives through several books already, and so have the Bette and Tina characters in my storylines. They are different now from who they were in the TiBette version of the earlier books from who they seem to be growing into —
maybe I should re-classify this book to another fandom, different from “L Word” even if Bette and Tina and their family are central characters?
I seem to be raising expectations by slotting this book under “L Word.” And that’s not fair to you, the readers.
While Bette and Tina originally attracted me to your writing, your Jade/Rain and Aerin/Harley characters have captivated me. Their unexplored characters are ripe with endless plot lines. Don’t apologize for the lack of TiBette romance, as your other characters and your writing are rich enough to sustain my appetite for a romantic escape.