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Luau (Chapter 1)
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Dana knew it was time. She stood and entered Alice with three fingers. With her other hand, she at last started working Alice’s engorged clitoris in earnest.
“Fuck, that’s it,” Alice’s eyes rolled back and her head fell against Dana’s shoulder. “Right there, that’s it! FUUUCCCKK!”
Her entire body involuntarily spasmed as she surrendered to her release. Dana managed to support them both and turned her hand so she could press a knuckle into Alice’s g spot at the very moment she reached her peak. As hoped, this sent her into another realm. One that was beyond consciousness as it turned out, because Alice didn’t remember anything until she woke up a few moments later on the floor, cradled in Dana’s arms, still winded and too weak to move.
“Oh my God,” she murmured.
“I know,” Dana grinned. “Good thing we have all night, huh?”
“The things I’m going to do to you.” Alice shivered as Dana lightly trailed her fingers across her nipples.
“Big talk from someone who was passed out just a second ago.”
“Now you’re just bragging.” Alice rolled on top of Dana and pressed their bodies fully together. Dana rewarded her with a wide smile and flushing cheeks. “It’s okay baby, you’ve definitely earned the right.”
They kissed lackadaisically, rekindling their passion with deliberation. Dana became aware of just how cold she was and gently rolled Alice back to the floor.
“Let’s go to bed,” she extended her hand and helped Al up.
Only then did they see that not only was the sofa totally off kilter, they’d toppled a lamp off the end table. Peels of laughter rang through the house as they made their way to the bedroom. Alice pushed Dana onto her back and quickly lifted a leg onto each shoulder. Dana’s clit winked at her, causing her to lick her parched lips. The both jumped when the phone rang just as she began to lower herself to collect her prize. Dana thought Alice would ignore it and closed her eyes in anticipation of what was to come.
“Hey Shane.” Blue eyes flew open to see an impish smile. “Don’t take this the wrong way, okay, but I’m a bit indisposed at the moment. Talk to Dane for a minute, will you?” She put the phone in Dana’s hand.
“…to say I’m sorry.” Dana heard the sincerity in Shane’s voice before she processed the words. “Oh, okay. It’s just that I really miss you guys.”
“Hello?” Dana tried to modulate her breathing. “What’s up?” She nearly came off the bed as Alice slowly swept her tongue around her hardness.
“I’m losing my mind and I need to talk to you guys.” Dana reached out with her free hand and tried to push Alice away. “Can I swing by?”
Alice suckled the length of Dana’s clit while her fingers rolled diamond cut nipples. Dana inhaled deeply.
“Uh, sure. When do you want to come?” Dana tried to lift her legs and sit up, but Alice locked her arms around them. “What do you mean you’re losing your mind?”
“I’d rather not go into it on the phone.”
“But you’re okay?” Dana’s concern rocked Alice to her senses and she sat up.
“Yes. No. Shit I don’t know.”
Alice took the phone back.
“Hey, Yoda,” she said soothingly. “Will you be okay until breakfast?”
“Yeah,” Shane sounded relieved. “I’m really sorry about being such an ass this morning.”
“As long as you’re okay now, I don’t give a fuck about anything else.” Alice leaned back against Dana who wrapped her arms tightly around her.
“Well, I’m not really,” Shane hesitated, “but I feel better knowing that I’m going to see you guys soon.”
“Eight o’clock-ish, here, okay?”
“Yeah.”
“Oh, and Shane?”
“Yeah?’
“You’d probably better bring some breakfast with you.”
Ten minutes later, Alice brought Dana to the same heights she’d experienced herself not a half hour earlier. Their deep need for each other was nearly satiated when, weary and tingling, the couple drifted into satisfied oblivion in the wee hours of the night.
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SO SO Happy!!! I love where you are taking this…and I see that the DANISH bond is even stronger (if even possible)…Love’d every word!!! Welcome Back! PPS
Ok, you have totally made my week. i was out of town all weekend and i come back to this, needless to say i did a little happy dance in my chair :) I am a big fan of yours and never had a chance to post on your other stories because i found them too late, sad i know!! but i will be posting now. Love the way you write danish, keep it up! and thanks for coming back to us. :)
Wow – welcome back, missed you lots, great to be reading your fic again. Don’t leave it too long to update as this is great.
Yeah we are so happy you’re back !! PPS
Great chapter! Really looking forward to Shane’s breakfast heart to heart with Dana and Alice. PPS!
woohoo!!!! great chapter! i missed you :)
Phew, you’re back! Good, now maybe your fans will ease up on me a little bit. I definitely can’t fill your shoes writing wise (or any other way). I love this as I do everything you write, it’s a great beginning to what I’m sure will be yet another great story.
What a great suprise! I’m thrilled to see you writing again. And I’m glad I could catch the first chapter today, since I’m leaving tomorrow for holiday. Darn, now I gotta wait for weeks to read more from you! Oh well, it will be worth the wait! Great Start!Read & see you in a few weeks!
MAMA B!!!!!!! This was great! And you thought I wouldn’t comment…Also I asked you about the Sheth (Shane/Beth) and you misled me. I’m so shocked that you would do that to me lol Seriously great chapter can’t wait to see what happens in Maui! Also post soon don’t use me as an example for anything you do. :)
Ah, I was so excited to see your name next to a new update that I had to do a double take! I’m so glad you’re back with this story. It’s up there as one of my all-time favorites. This chapter is of course no exception. Can’t wait for more!
You have been missed, SG. I loved this and I’m looking forward to your next post. Cheers!
YAY!!!!!!! You’re back! I was just re-reading Lucky in Love over the weekend and wishing that you would write something new. You are an amazing writer and story-teller. Thanks for this and all your previous writings. PPS!
SAAAMMMMMYYY!!! YAAAAAY!!! …ok. Done shouting now. lol. Ok so…I heard from a little, ClozzyD shaped birdie, that you were cooking something up…and then I see the post…and I think I jumped around like a monkey on crack for a good 3 minutes…and then I felt silly…but still excited :-D haha. Anyways, I haven’t been around these parts for awhile but I am glad I tuned back in! This was amazing as always, your writing abilities are outstanding as always!I loved this chapter and cannot WAIT for the next!!! Don’t keep us hanging!!! And by us I mostly mean me…but I’m sure everyone else is eager for Chap. 2 as well. hehe. Later chica!
Awesome start sammy,loved it and cant wait for more!!!!!!!!!