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Luau (Chapter 1)
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“I think it’s time for dessert,” she said in a husky voice.
“But what about the dishes?” Alice stood as if to clear the table.
“Fuck the dishes,” Dana growled, grabbing Alice and pulling her onto her lap.
“Un uh,” Alice smiled as Dana practically ripped her tee shirt off. “Fuck me.”
Alice fed her breasts, one at a time, to Dana’s hungry mouth. Her nipples were so hard and so sensitive that she practically came from those sensations alone. By the time she stood to drop her panties, her juices were dripping along the soft skin of her inner thighs. Her scent saturated Dana’s grey matter, leaving her incapable of rational thought. She was aware of Alice removing her clothes, her need building with every ragged breath. She felt Alice leading her to the sofa and took charge, quickly bending Al forward over it, sucking her way noisily from the base of Alice’s skull to the gracefully sculpted center of her lower back. Wrapping her arm between Alice and the sofa, Dana parted her outer lips and made gentle zigzag motions with two fingers, lazily searching out Alice’s rapidly hardening clit. As Al’s hips began undulating against her hand, Dana began licking Alice’s inner thighs, thoroughly cleansing them of any trace of her essence.
The sounds of Alice’s arousal filled the room. Pinned over the couch as she was there was nothing she could do to reciprocate Dana’s skilled attentions. As far-gone as she was, however, Dana didn’t take her over the edge.
“Please baby,” Alice moaned into the cushions. “I need it.”
She bucked against Dana’s hand harder, trying to get her clit to connect with Dana’s fingers. Dana responded by slipping her fingers a little lower and exposing Alice’s center completely. She fluttered her tongue along the outer edges of each moist lip before allowing herself the pleasure of burying it as deeply as she could into Alice’s opening and drinking as much of her honey as she could. Alice’s shrieks of pleasure urged her on and, still, she stopped short of finishing, prolonging Al’s sweet agony as long as she dared.
“I need to cum.” Alice lifted herself as best she could, nearly upending the heavy sofa in the process. She would have laughed had she been able to think of anything more than thrusting against Dana’s face and getting some relief, but Dana pulled back just enough to maintain contact, giggling in spite of herself. “I need to cum,” Alice cried again. “Please.”
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SO SO Happy!!! I love where you are taking this…and I see that the DANISH bond is even stronger (if even possible)…Love’d every word!!! Welcome Back! PPS
Ok, you have totally made my week. i was out of town all weekend and i come back to this, needless to say i did a little happy dance in my chair :) I am a big fan of yours and never had a chance to post on your other stories because i found them too late, sad i know!! but i will be posting now. Love the way you write danish, keep it up! and thanks for coming back to us. :)
Wow – welcome back, missed you lots, great to be reading your fic again. Don’t leave it too long to update as this is great.
Yeah we are so happy you’re back !! PPS
Great chapter! Really looking forward to Shane’s breakfast heart to heart with Dana and Alice. PPS!
woohoo!!!! great chapter! i missed you :)
Phew, you’re back! Good, now maybe your fans will ease up on me a little bit. I definitely can’t fill your shoes writing wise (or any other way). I love this as I do everything you write, it’s a great beginning to what I’m sure will be yet another great story.
What a great suprise! I’m thrilled to see you writing again. And I’m glad I could catch the first chapter today, since I’m leaving tomorrow for holiday. Darn, now I gotta wait for weeks to read more from you! Oh well, it will be worth the wait! Great Start!Read & see you in a few weeks!
MAMA B!!!!!!! This was great! And you thought I wouldn’t comment…Also I asked you about the Sheth (Shane/Beth) and you misled me. I’m so shocked that you would do that to me lol Seriously great chapter can’t wait to see what happens in Maui! Also post soon don’t use me as an example for anything you do. :)
Ah, I was so excited to see your name next to a new update that I had to do a double take! I’m so glad you’re back with this story. It’s up there as one of my all-time favorites. This chapter is of course no exception. Can’t wait for more!
You have been missed, SG. I loved this and I’m looking forward to your next post. Cheers!
YAY!!!!!!! You’re back! I was just re-reading Lucky in Love over the weekend and wishing that you would write something new. You are an amazing writer and story-teller. Thanks for this and all your previous writings. PPS!
SAAAMMMMMYYY!!! YAAAAAY!!! …ok. Done shouting now. lol. Ok so…I heard from a little, ClozzyD shaped birdie, that you were cooking something up…and then I see the post…and I think I jumped around like a monkey on crack for a good 3 minutes…and then I felt silly…but still excited :-D haha. Anyways, I haven’t been around these parts for awhile but I am glad I tuned back in! This was amazing as always, your writing abilities are outstanding as always!I loved this chapter and cannot WAIT for the next!!! Don’t keep us hanging!!! And by us I mostly mean me…but I’m sure everyone else is eager for Chap. 2 as well. hehe. Later chica!
Awesome start sammy,loved it and cant wait for more!!!!!!!!!