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Luau (Chapter 1)
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“Fine,” she relented, “I’ll be there in 45 minutes.”
Right now Shane wanted nothing more than to be able to talk to Alice and Dana about what she was doing and feeling. God, what she was feeling. She wondered again why she’d ever thought she’d be better off if she finally connected with her emotional life.
“Oh, come on Shane,” Beth said as she handed her an espresso, “it’s not like we haven’t kissed before.”
“Not like that we haven’t,” Shane said without thinking.
“Listen I get it…you thought I was Carmen,” Beth took a deep breath, “but I knew what I was doing when I kissed you back.”
“I knew it was you,” whispered Shane, her eyes glued to her shoes. “I think I’m falling in love with you Beth.”
“Whoa.” Beth swallowed hard. “I thought it was just me.” She lowered herself into the nearest chair. “What are we gonna do?”
“This sucks.” Shane downed her double-shot in one gulp.
Alice toyed with her food and stared at Dane, who seemed to be enjoying each and every bite. A little too much if you asked Alice.
“Don’t you like it,” asked Dana, an innocent look plastered on her delicately angled face. “I can make you something else, but I thought you love my pasta prima vera.”
“I’m a little…”
“Yes?”
“…distracted.” Alice punched her fork through a perfectly julienned slice of zucchini and popped it into her mouth. She wasn’t proud of the small pleasure she felt as Dana’s eyes widened ever so slightly while she watched her chew.
“By what?” Dana teased a piece of penne off of her fork with the tip of her tongue.
“Ummm, nothing I guess,” Alice was not going to give her the satisfaction. “I’ve got a lot to do if I’m going to get things in order before we go.”
“If anyone can get it all done, it’s you.” Dana shifted gears immediately, concern in her voice. “I’m in town until we go and I’ll help you with everything. Baby, the last thing I wanted to do was to make it harder for you.”
“Boy, you’re easy,” Alice smiled softly, taking Dana’s hand and pressing it to her lips. “I was kidding.”
Dana wanted to be mad, but she couldn’t. She’d been teasing Alice and Alice had totally busted her. No one could make her laugh at herself like that.
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SO SO Happy!!! I love where you are taking this…and I see that the DANISH bond is even stronger (if even possible)…Love’d every word!!! Welcome Back! PPS
Ok, you have totally made my week. i was out of town all weekend and i come back to this, needless to say i did a little happy dance in my chair :) I am a big fan of yours and never had a chance to post on your other stories because i found them too late, sad i know!! but i will be posting now. Love the way you write danish, keep it up! and thanks for coming back to us. :)
Wow – welcome back, missed you lots, great to be reading your fic again. Don’t leave it too long to update as this is great.
Yeah we are so happy you’re back !! PPS
Great chapter! Really looking forward to Shane’s breakfast heart to heart with Dana and Alice. PPS!
woohoo!!!! great chapter! i missed you :)
Phew, you’re back! Good, now maybe your fans will ease up on me a little bit. I definitely can’t fill your shoes writing wise (or any other way). I love this as I do everything you write, it’s a great beginning to what I’m sure will be yet another great story.
What a great suprise! I’m thrilled to see you writing again. And I’m glad I could catch the first chapter today, since I’m leaving tomorrow for holiday. Darn, now I gotta wait for weeks to read more from you! Oh well, it will be worth the wait! Great Start!Read & see you in a few weeks!
MAMA B!!!!!!! This was great! And you thought I wouldn’t comment…Also I asked you about the Sheth (Shane/Beth) and you misled me. I’m so shocked that you would do that to me lol Seriously great chapter can’t wait to see what happens in Maui! Also post soon don’t use me as an example for anything you do. :)
Ah, I was so excited to see your name next to a new update that I had to do a double take! I’m so glad you’re back with this story. It’s up there as one of my all-time favorites. This chapter is of course no exception. Can’t wait for more!
You have been missed, SG. I loved this and I’m looking forward to your next post. Cheers!
YAY!!!!!!! You’re back! I was just re-reading Lucky in Love over the weekend and wishing that you would write something new. You are an amazing writer and story-teller. Thanks for this and all your previous writings. PPS!
SAAAMMMMMYYY!!! YAAAAAY!!! …ok. Done shouting now. lol. Ok so…I heard from a little, ClozzyD shaped birdie, that you were cooking something up…and then I see the post…and I think I jumped around like a monkey on crack for a good 3 minutes…and then I felt silly…but still excited :-D haha. Anyways, I haven’t been around these parts for awhile but I am glad I tuned back in! This was amazing as always, your writing abilities are outstanding as always!I loved this chapter and cannot WAIT for the next!!! Don’t keep us hanging!!! And by us I mostly mean me…but I’m sure everyone else is eager for Chap. 2 as well. hehe. Later chica!
Awesome start sammy,loved it and cant wait for more!!!!!!!!!