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Luau (Chapter 2)
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“We finally get to take on our honeymoon,” Dana chuckled. “So we’re making a big push on all the things we need to do for Think Pink and a bunch of other stuff, including our official housewarming party.”
“And we have a favor to ask…” Alice began.
“But if you don’t want to, we’ll understand…” Dana interrupted.
“I’m sure she won’t…”
“Well, you never know and we don’t want to impose…”
“She won’t think it’s an imposition…”
“Guys!” Shane said. “I’m right here.” Dana and Alice exchanged a knowing glance. “And you know whatever you need, you got, so just ask already, will you?”
“Ummm,” Dana began, “we were kinda of hoping you might… well, if you would consider…”
“We want you to stay at the house while we’re gone and take care of Dave,” Alice couldn’t take it any longer.
Dave lifted his head and looked expectantly at Shane, as though he knew exactly what she was thinking. She stared right back, an inscrutable look on her face.
“How long?”
“Two weeks.” Dana answered as she and Alice watched the unspoken communication between Dave and Shane.
A long ten seconds passed.
“Sure,” Shane replied. “I’ll even throw his ball a couple of times while you’re gone.” She wasn’t quite sure when it was, exactly, but somewhere along the way, she’d grown to truly love the hairy beast and knew that he loved her too.
“Well, now that we’ve got that settled, what’s the emergency?” Alice changed the subject with head-spinning alacrity.
Shane took a deep breath and got very interested in what was going on just beyond the open French doors, She tried to find the right words but knew that there was no good way to say what she needed to, so she just went for it.
“Beth and I have been spending a lot of time together the past few months and we’ve gotten really close. Really, really close. Closer than we ever were in so many ways. And Carmen and I are still trying to make it work, but there are lots of problems and she’s been saying that we may need to take a break, but we haven’t yet and I’m not sure it’s a good idea, but then maybe it is. Because Beth and I have fallen in love. With each other.”
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Thank you so much for the new story! I loved Lucky and am loving this one, too. You do a great job writing Danish romance. PPS!
I like you’re proposal I wish mine could be like that (and also the sex but that’s just between me and the brackets) I can’t wait to see about the dolphin swim and I can’t wait to see the ceremony basically I can’t wait so post now (on another note I’m not one to beg for more sex in an already NC-17 story and I do realize that your sex scene is quite long and that this isnt a PWP but can I get a twofer?) Love ya mama b post soon (or give me a snip…actually minus the or GIVE ME A SNIP!!!) :please:
Yay! you’re back – you know how I feel about your writing and how it’s uber exquisite and fanfracking wonderful – fan fic land is so much fuller with you in it – I’ll step away from the fan girl box now – oh yeah – loving the new story :)
WOW!! just wow you are amazing i loved every inch of that post so sweet.. so talented man :)
Awww, what a beautiful proposal! The way you write these two is just incredible. I’m also liking the idea of Shane and Beth. I’ve sort of stopped liking Carmen since she was such a bitch in Season 3, and honestly I think Beth would be better for her. Either way, though, this is great, even if it’s only a “dip your toe back in” kinda story.
Is it me or are these scenes getting steamier and steamier??? What can I say I love, love, love this!!! Very loving, Very romantic…I love the way you write these two!!! PPS!
This is my first comment because English is not my first language so I’m kind of shy writing this…but I guess you deserve it ;). Your stories are great and this one is a perfect example. I really enjoy the way you write Danish (and Dave hihihi!!!)…so please post soon!!!
That was sooooo beauitful and veryyyy romantic WOW!!!! Your such a awesome writer and please continue!!!!!!!!
*sigh* Thank you. I’mnot sure what else I can say. I’ve said it all about 200 times. But yeah…this was fucking amazing! And when it comes to NC-17…Jesus Fucking Christ…yeah…Thanks! (as for the crack monkey thing…lmao. Yeah…I have no idea where that came from…haha.) POST SOON SAMMY!