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Luau (Chapter 2)
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For once Dana managed to remain impassive while Alice’s chin hit the floor. She’d told Al that she thought maybe Beth was in over her head with Shane, but Alice had dismissed the idea, noting that Beth had known Shane long enough to know better. Dana had dropped it, but still thought there was something there. What she hadn’t counted on was Shane having the same feelings, let alone allowing herself to explore them.
Alice found herself surprised not only by what Shane said, but how she’d said it. It was, she thought, the most she’d ever heard the lanky hairdresser say at once. The combination was enough to send her mind reeling for a few seconds.
“Well say something will you?” Shane couldn’t bring herself to look at them.
“What do you want to hear?” Alice knew she’d tell Shane the truth, but wanted to gauge where Shane really was with this first.
“What do you mean by that?” Shane wondered if it was possible that Alice and Dana were actually trying to torture her.
“She means do you want to hear the upside or the downside to falling in love with your best friend while you’re seriously involved with someone else,” Dana answered. She’d obviously been giving the situation some thought.
“Well you guys were in love with each other long before you admitted it,” Shane said.
“That’s true, and as far as I’m concerned we didn’t come to our senses a moment too soon,” Al responded lightly. “However, that doesn’t mean it wasn’t simultaneously the best and worst time of our lives until we got the bulk of it sorted out.”
“On the other hand, Tonya wasn’t…”
“No matter what happens, someone’s going to get hurt.” Dana tried to keep Shane from tripping over the foot she was rapidly jamming in her mouth, not realizing she was doing pretty much the same thing.
“Thanks for that Dana,” Shane opined.
“Maybe you should stop helping now, baby,” Alice said gently.
“Hey,” Dane said quietly, “You can’t just ignore it…”
“And I’m betting you wouldn’t be here if you didn’t already have some idea about what you’re going to do,” Alice nudged.
“I’ve never felt like this,” acknowledged Shane. “Why does everything have to be such shit?”
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Thank you so much for the new story! I loved Lucky and am loving this one, too. You do a great job writing Danish romance. PPS!
I like you’re proposal I wish mine could be like that (and also the sex but that’s just between me and the brackets) I can’t wait to see about the dolphin swim and I can’t wait to see the ceremony basically I can’t wait so post now (on another note I’m not one to beg for more sex in an already NC-17 story and I do realize that your sex scene is quite long and that this isnt a PWP but can I get a twofer?) Love ya mama b post soon (or give me a snip…actually minus the or GIVE ME A SNIP!!!) :please:
Yay! you’re back – you know how I feel about your writing and how it’s uber exquisite and fanfracking wonderful – fan fic land is so much fuller with you in it – I’ll step away from the fan girl box now – oh yeah – loving the new story :)
WOW!! just wow you are amazing i loved every inch of that post so sweet.. so talented man :)
Awww, what a beautiful proposal! The way you write these two is just incredible. I’m also liking the idea of Shane and Beth. I’ve sort of stopped liking Carmen since she was such a bitch in Season 3, and honestly I think Beth would be better for her. Either way, though, this is great, even if it’s only a “dip your toe back in” kinda story.
Is it me or are these scenes getting steamier and steamier??? What can I say I love, love, love this!!! Very loving, Very romantic…I love the way you write these two!!! PPS!
This is my first comment because English is not my first language so I’m kind of shy writing this…but I guess you deserve it ;). Your stories are great and this one is a perfect example. I really enjoy the way you write Danish (and Dave hihihi!!!)…so please post soon!!!
That was sooooo beauitful and veryyyy romantic WOW!!!! Your such a awesome writer and please continue!!!!!!!!
*sigh* Thank you. I’mnot sure what else I can say. I’ve said it all about 200 times. But yeah…this was fucking amazing! And when it comes to NC-17…Jesus Fucking Christ…yeah…Thanks! (as for the crack monkey thing…lmao. Yeah…I have no idea where that came from…haha.) POST SOON SAMMY!