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Luau (Chapter 2)
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“It’s incredible!” She kissed Dana hard. “I love it!” Another kiss, this time a bit more lingering.
“And I love you.”
“I love you,” Dana said. “We’re only paying the difference between the suite Nike had for us, so it’s actually pretty affordable.” The fact that Dana even thought about things like this never failed to amaze Alice.
The smell of something delicious distracted them. The time change and the five-hour flight pretty much cancelled each other out so even though they’d left LA at ten, it was only one in the afternoon. Dana’s first obligation to Nike wasn’t until one the next day, allowing them time to adjust and relax
“I’m going to change and then we’ll figure out what we’re going to do this afternoon, okay?”
Alice slowly disentangled herself from Dana’s body and wandered off to the bedroom. Dana pulled off her jacket, grabbed her phone and stepped onto the lanai to check messages. Alice emerged five minutes later in a Hawaiian floral print wrap skirt, hot pink bikini top and over-sized sunglasses. Her hair was clipped loosely atop her head, soft tendrils framing her face, and she was applying sunscreen to her arms. Dana nearly dropped the phone. It was precisely the reaction Al was hoping for and she didn’t bother to suppress a smug grin as she swaggered over.
“You like?” She traced her fingers gently across Dana’s soft lips before planting a tender kiss on them.
“Ummm hmmm,” Dana breathed as she slipped her tongue against Alice’s and began a delicious little dance. “I definitely know how I want to spend the afternoon.” Her hands deftly undid the bikini top.
“Are you sure?” Alice stepped back and flashed her before reaching back and retying it.
“Because I was thinking a little trip around the grounds might be in order.”
“Seriously?” Dana arched a brow, trying to decipher if Al was teasing her.
“Yeah,” Alice laughed. “We should probably see what’s out there before all the craziness starts.” She stepped back into Dana’s arms. “This week is going to be totally nuts and next week…”
“What about next week?” Dana wondered if it was possible that Alice had figured out her plan.
“I’m pretty sure I’m going to keep you all to myself.” Alice winked and kissed her again.
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Thank you so much for the new story! I loved Lucky and am loving this one, too. You do a great job writing Danish romance. PPS!
I like you’re proposal I wish mine could be like that (and also the sex but that’s just between me and the brackets) I can’t wait to see about the dolphin swim and I can’t wait to see the ceremony basically I can’t wait so post now (on another note I’m not one to beg for more sex in an already NC-17 story and I do realize that your sex scene is quite long and that this isnt a PWP but can I get a twofer?) Love ya mama b post soon (or give me a snip…actually minus the or GIVE ME A SNIP!!!) :please:
Yay! you’re back – you know how I feel about your writing and how it’s uber exquisite and fanfracking wonderful – fan fic land is so much fuller with you in it – I’ll step away from the fan girl box now – oh yeah – loving the new story :)
WOW!! just wow you are amazing i loved every inch of that post so sweet.. so talented man :)
Awww, what a beautiful proposal! The way you write these two is just incredible. I’m also liking the idea of Shane and Beth. I’ve sort of stopped liking Carmen since she was such a bitch in Season 3, and honestly I think Beth would be better for her. Either way, though, this is great, even if it’s only a “dip your toe back in” kinda story.
Is it me or are these scenes getting steamier and steamier??? What can I say I love, love, love this!!! Very loving, Very romantic…I love the way you write these two!!! PPS!
This is my first comment because English is not my first language so I’m kind of shy writing this…but I guess you deserve it ;). Your stories are great and this one is a perfect example. I really enjoy the way you write Danish (and Dave hihihi!!!)…so please post soon!!!
That was sooooo beauitful and veryyyy romantic WOW!!!! Your such a awesome writer and please continue!!!!!!!!
*sigh* Thank you. I’mnot sure what else I can say. I’ve said it all about 200 times. But yeah…this was fucking amazing! And when it comes to NC-17…Jesus Fucking Christ…yeah…Thanks! (as for the crack monkey thing…lmao. Yeah…I have no idea where that came from…haha.) POST SOON SAMMY!