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Luau (Chapter 3)
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Dana moved her hand from Al’s waist to her cheek and looked into her eyes.
“You can, baby,” Dana said in all seriousness. “What is it?”
“It’s nothing really,” Al said quietly. “ I was just…I don’t know…trying to be completely at one with you….with us…in this moment. You look so beautiful and I am so totally, completely…utterly…in love with you. I have everything I ever dreamed of because of you and I just don’t want to ever take it…take you…for granted…not now, not when we get back to our real lives…not ever…” Alice realized she was rambling and stopped mid-sentence.
“First of all, this is our real life,” Dana solemnly reassured her, moving closer so that their foreheads were touching. “And we won’t take each other for granted. After everything we’ve been through, that may be the one mistake we both know never to make.” They stayed like that for a few minutes, fully in the moment, exactly as Al had been trying to be when Dana awoke. “Hey,” Dana finally whispered, “are you okay? I mean you’re not in pain or anything?”
“No, Dane,” Alice laughed playfully, “a little tender maybe, but I feel great. Awww…are you disappointed that I won’t be walking funny?”
“I can’t believe you said that.” Dana tried to sound insulted, but didn’t even come close, causing them both to giggle.
Out of the blue, Al threw back her side of the sheets and jumped up. She rummaged through her computer bag with no luck.
“Whatcha looking for?” Dana’s eyes were glued to her wife’s perfectly delectable ass.
Alice found her prize and turned in time to catch a glimpse of Dana blatantly ogling her. She jumped onto the bed, landing on her knees with a knowing smile, and presented Dana with a tiny navy blue box, tied with a tiny white satin ribbon.
“What is this?” Dana was genuinely surprised.
“Open it,” Al flashed a high wattage smile, which Dana returned reflexively while fumbling with the ribbon.
“When did you have the time…” Dana’s voice trailed off as she lifted an elegant sterling silver dolphin key chain from the box’s tissue padded depths. “It’s beautiful!”
“I saw it the day we swam with them,” Alice said, “and I know you’re not generally a fan of the key chains, but I thought maybe this one would be okay…”
“I love it,” Dana proclaimed. “It’s the perfect memento of our time here. Thank you.” She lifted her head and Alice leaned down to kiss her. “Now, seriously, when did you manage to do this?
“Let’s just say I could get used to having the amazing Joseph and his Technicolor dream staff around all the time,” responded Alice as she snuggled into Dana’s arms. “Well, maybe not ALL the time, but you know what I mean.”
“I do,” Dana answered happily. “I totally do.”
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that was great and I can’t wait to see what will happen next so please post soon great update I love this story
I’ve got to say mama this flows so well, I got snippets but together it just melts so perfectly together. I really can’t believe you were even the least bit worried. One bit of criticism I do have is this…um yeah more sex, I know this was mostly sex but I need more. It was so hot and steamy and I just wanted like 7 to 9 more pages of it, but its ok save it for next time. This was mostly perfect just add in those 7 to 9 pages (I’m thinkin 9 more than 7) and you’ve got a flawless chapter. Maybe a little bob action? You know…you know what I mean a little Bob lab? No? But yeah everything is great and I love the piece at the end very sweet memorable ending. Well there you go I read it even more amazing the 4th time (which is how many times I’ve read it)
YAY! You are back! Great Post! Look fwd to the last chapter as well as anything else you are writing!!! Thank You!
Wow oh wow – another of my favourite authors is back again – yippee !!
I agree with CD,you did a wonderful job writing this chapter. I just love reading ur stories and this chapter was HOT HOT HOT damn it. Please post sooner (i know its been crazy) but i want more.PPS
SammysGirl, I am delighted to be able to write you this comment cause I did not have the opportunity to do so before. I have enjoyed all your Danish stories especially “Life Choice”. “Loose Ends” was heartbreaking. I salute you and all the other dedicated elite Danish writers for keeping this pairing alive. Thank you again.
thank you for updating. I’m bad at leaving commets hehe but this chapter is truly awesome! you rock! I absolutely love it so PPS:D
Hmm, now there’s a honeymoon I wouldn’t mind having! I love that you can write them being so intimate and trusting with each other. And don’t worry about posting infrequently, you know you have a lot of fans who will be happy to read whatever you put up, no matter how much time passes between chapters.
Yay!! I JUST re-read this story the other day in the hope you’d update sometime soon and what an update! Great that you’ve got some storylines in the pipeline too. Looking forward to them as always! Welcome Back :)
hiya!Good seeing you back, very excited about this. Really missed your stories. Lovely update, what can I say more!? :)
I don’t think there are words to adequately describe how excited I was to see your post this morning. I love your writing and loved “Lucky” and am loving “Luau”. News of a sequal to “Lucky” have put a huge grin on my face. This was a great chapter! So much love so much trust and so much humor. Thank you for your continued posting!!
Good to see you back! Your update was magnificient as always. :D I always get drawn into your stories. Whenever I’m reading it, it’s like there is a whole parallel universe where Danish lives forever happily. I love that. Keep it up.