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    Luau (Chapter 3)

    Story written on October 20, 2007 by SammysGirl.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=67251
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    Dana and Alice, the honeymoon. In paradise. Need I say more?

    Dana began lightly drumming her fingers against Alice’s walls, turning her hand slightly back and forth. She knew thrusting was out of the question, but wanted to explore as much of Al as she could. As her fingertips mapped every crevice of Alice’s most private spaces, Dana felt her own need growing, her hips undulating gently against Al’s raised thigh behind her. She felt Alice contract, locking Dana’s entire hand into place as she reached a level of pleasure that defied description.

    Every nuance of ecstasy that crossed Alice’s face played down her body, the currents passing through Dana’s hand and arm and traveling to her own core, time and again. All too soon it was over and Dana gently withdrew from Alice’s center. There was another momentary discomfort as her body accommodated the widest part of Dana’s fist, but Alice barely felt it. Instead she was overcome with a vulnerability for which she wasn’t prepared, fighting back tears of happiness and the urge to giggle simultaneously. Dana quickly snuggled in and pulled Alice close to her, holding her tightly, as a swell of powerful emotions overwhelmed her too. She sighed softly when she realized Alice was toying with her hair in an effort to comfort her, having read her perfectly even as she’d been dealing with her own feelings.

    “You okay?’ Dana’s voice trembled faintly, catching them both by surprise.

    “Yeah,” Al managed.

    Neither had the energy to move for a very long time. Even as their satiated bodies rested, entangled in one another, their minds raced. Mere words were inadequate to express their thoughts. Instead, they said everything with a gentle stroke of a bicep here or a loving nuzzle of collar bone there. This was another plane, somewhere beyond any reality they’d ever known, and they savored every nanosecond, even as sleep finally overtook them.

    As the sunset neared a cooler breeze caressed Dana, nudging her into that delicious state between being asleep and being awake. She slowly became aware of the feeling that she was being watched and struggled to open her eyes, finding Alice studying her intently from her pillow.

    “What?” Dana yawned.

    Al averted her eyes and smiled at being busted.

    “I…I don’t know if I can find the words,” she stammered.

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    2. I’ve got to say mama this flows so well, I got snippets but together it just melts so perfectly together. I really can’t believe you were even the least bit worried. One bit of criticism I do have is this…um yeah more sex, I know this was mostly sex but I need more. It was so hot and steamy and I just wanted like 7 to 9 more pages of it, but its ok save it for next time. This was mostly perfect just add in those 7 to 9 pages (I’m thinkin 9 more than 7) and you’ve got a flawless chapter. Maybe a little bob action? You know…you know what I mean a little Bob lab? No? But yeah everything is great and I love the piece at the end very sweet memorable ending. Well there you go I read it even more amazing the 4th time (which is how many times I’ve read it)

    5. I agree with CD,you did a wonderful job writing this chapter. I just love reading ur stories and this chapter was HOT HOT HOT damn it. Please post sooner (i know its been crazy) but i want more.PPS

    6. SammysGirl, I am delighted to be able to write you this comment cause I did not have the opportunity to do so before. I have enjoyed all your Danish stories especially “Life Choice”. “Loose Ends” was heartbreaking. I salute you and all the other dedicated elite Danish writers for keeping this pairing alive. Thank you again.

    8. Hmm, now there’s a honeymoon I wouldn’t mind having! I love that you can write them being so intimate and trusting with each other. And don’t worry about posting infrequently, you know you have a lot of fans who will be happy to read whatever you put up, no matter how much time passes between chapters.

    9. Yay!! I JUST re-read this story the other day in the hope you’d update sometime soon and what an update! Great that you’ve got some storylines in the pipeline too. Looking forward to them as always! Welcome Back :)

    11. I don’t think there are words to adequately describe how excited I was to see your post this morning. I love your writing and loved “Lucky” and am loving “Luau”. News of a sequal to “Lucky” have put a huge grin on my face. This was a great chapter! So much love so much trust and so much humor. Thank you for your continued posting!!

    12. Good to see you back! Your update was magnificient as always. :D I always get drawn into your stories. Whenever I’m reading it, it’s like there is a whole parallel universe where Danish lives forever happily. I love that. Keep it up.

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