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Luau (Chapter 3)
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“Another?” Dana whispered.
Alice nodded. Dana reached under the pillow and fumbled with the lid for a second before enhancing Al’s considerable wetness with a dollop of lubricant. Alice’s eyes closed reflexively when she felt her herself stretch to accommodate a fourth finger. This was something rare for them, but Alice wanted as much of Dana as she could get. She took a breath and gathered her thoughts.
“Baby,” she murmured, “I want us to try it.”
Dana’s eyes registered her surprise.
“I, I don’t know…” she stuttered. “I’m afraid I’ll hurt you.”
Alice slid her hand down to Dana’s elbow and then to her wrist. They’d talked about this once or twice, and while they were both curious, neither thought it was something they’d ever actually do.
“Look how close we are already,” Alice whispered, fighting back the urge to orgasm again. “I really want this…I really want you.”
Dana’s mouth went dry with fear and desire. She knew that Alice wouldn’t judge her if she couldn’t try, which, in the end, is what made her decide to go for it.
“You have to stop me if…”
“I don’t think we’ll have a choice,” Al joked. “I’m pretty sure you won’t be able to do it if it hurts too much.”
Dana screwed up her courage and tucked her thumb behind her fingers, drawing them as tightly together as she could. Alice lifted a leg high, resting it on Dana’s shoulder as Dane began to push in. She reached a point where she could go no further and pulled back partway, only to begin the journey anew. She repeated the process, fascinated by the palpable intimacy and trust between them. This time she met far less resistance and Alice moaned loudly. Dana froze, a startled look on her face.
“It’s okay,” Al exhaled.
“Yeah?”
“Feels a little weird, but it’s amazing.”
“So, keep going?” Dana was afraid she’d say yes, but more afraid that Alice would say no.
“Yeah.” Alice’s growl and lidded eyes told Dana everything she needed to know.
She took a deep breath and pushed again, thinking that they’d get just a little closer this time. Both were caught off guard when Dana found herself fully inside. It was, perhaps, the most intense physical connection they’d ever experienced. Alice noticed that the slight discomfort she’d been feeling disappeared at once. It was her last rational thought.
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that was great and I can’t wait to see what will happen next so please post soon great update I love this story
I’ve got to say mama this flows so well, I got snippets but together it just melts so perfectly together. I really can’t believe you were even the least bit worried. One bit of criticism I do have is this…um yeah more sex, I know this was mostly sex but I need more. It was so hot and steamy and I just wanted like 7 to 9 more pages of it, but its ok save it for next time. This was mostly perfect just add in those 7 to 9 pages (I’m thinkin 9 more than 7) and you’ve got a flawless chapter. Maybe a little bob action? You know…you know what I mean a little Bob lab? No? But yeah everything is great and I love the piece at the end very sweet memorable ending. Well there you go I read it even more amazing the 4th time (which is how many times I’ve read it)
YAY! You are back! Great Post! Look fwd to the last chapter as well as anything else you are writing!!! Thank You!
Wow oh wow – another of my favourite authors is back again – yippee !!
I agree with CD,you did a wonderful job writing this chapter. I just love reading ur stories and this chapter was HOT HOT HOT damn it. Please post sooner (i know its been crazy) but i want more.PPS
SammysGirl, I am delighted to be able to write you this comment cause I did not have the opportunity to do so before. I have enjoyed all your Danish stories especially “Life Choice”. “Loose Ends” was heartbreaking. I salute you and all the other dedicated elite Danish writers for keeping this pairing alive. Thank you again.
thank you for updating. I’m bad at leaving commets hehe but this chapter is truly awesome! you rock! I absolutely love it so PPS:D
Hmm, now there’s a honeymoon I wouldn’t mind having! I love that you can write them being so intimate and trusting with each other. And don’t worry about posting infrequently, you know you have a lot of fans who will be happy to read whatever you put up, no matter how much time passes between chapters.
Yay!! I JUST re-read this story the other day in the hope you’d update sometime soon and what an update! Great that you’ve got some storylines in the pipeline too. Looking forward to them as always! Welcome Back :)
hiya!Good seeing you back, very excited about this. Really missed your stories. Lovely update, what can I say more!? :)
I don’t think there are words to adequately describe how excited I was to see your post this morning. I love your writing and loved “Lucky” and am loving “Luau”. News of a sequal to “Lucky” have put a huge grin on my face. This was a great chapter! So much love so much trust and so much humor. Thank you for your continued posting!!
Good to see you back! Your update was magnificient as always. :D I always get drawn into your stories. Whenever I’m reading it, it’s like there is a whole parallel universe where Danish lives forever happily. I love that. Keep it up.