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Luau (Chapter 4) -FINALE-
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“There’s one more thing we wanted to share with you,” Dana said quietly, “and for this we took our inspiration from Tina and Bette.”
The screens flickered back to life on a close up of Alice that pulled back to reveal her in a simple strapless white silk dress, holding a bouquet, standing barefoot at the surf line of their private beach at sunset. The camera panned to the right to reveal Dana, also barefoot, in crisp white linen slacks and a flowing white linen blouse. They joined hands as they walked the final few steps to the waiting minister. Traditional vows were exchanged before each was invited to speak, the one detail Dana hadn’t thought of. Alice went first, her already welling eyes spilling over.
“So you know our family is going to kill us for this, right?” Hearty laughter rang through the room. “But in this, like everything else, Dane, you’ve made my dreams come true. No one else in this world understands me like you do. You make me feel more like me just by being you. I know from the bottom of my soul that we were born to love each other.”
Dana couldn’t control herself. She leaned in and kissed Alice tenderly before the minister interrupted them with a good-natured reminder that it was Dana’s turn. They pulled apart sheepishly, their foreheads still touching when she began.
“It’s always been you Al,” Dana spoke in a soft, strong voice. She lifted her head and held Alice’s gaze as she continued. “I knew it the first time we met. No matter what I’ve needed, how lost I’ve been, how afraid…” she paused as her own tears began to fall. “…how happy I’ve been, how successful, how grateful…you’ve been there. I was only half of me without you.”
This time Alice broke the rules and kissed Dana lovingly. The minister cleared her throat, causing them to pull apart again. Another peal of laughter erupted from their friends as they watched.
“By the authority vested in my by God and, someday soon let’s hope, the state of Hawaii, I am delighted to pronounce you married. NOW…you may each kiss your bride.”
The cater waiters managed to serve champagne and sparkling cider during the video without being noticed. As the lights came up, the crowd searched for Dana and Alice, expecting them to be near the monitors, however the happy couple had circled around to pull back the screens and position themselves next to their wedding cake, where Dave joined them. He gave a little bark and everyone turned to find Dana and Alice in the midst of kiss. As one, they stood and applauded. Al and Dane opened their eyes but did not immediately break the kiss, prompting another swell of applause.
“Welcome to our wedding reception,” Alice finally managed to say. “We couldn’t imagine sharing our happiness with anyone but you, our closest family and friends.”
It was Shane who had the presence of mind to step forward and raise her glass. She unconsciously looked directly at Beth as she spoke.
“I think I speak for everyone when I say that you guys are incredible and we are all honored to be here. Here’s to you Dana and Alice, and to a long and happy life together.”
Helena picked up her knife and started tapping her glass, followed immediately by Bette and Tina. Alice and Dana kissed again. And again, giggling the whole time. There was a moment of wonderful, affectionate silence.
“We love you guys too,” Dana said and stole another kiss. “Now let’s have some cake!”
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Great ending to a lovely story. Can’t wait for your next chapter in the lives of our Danish pair.
A fantastic finale. Thank you for your beautiful post. I absolutely adore Danish and thanks to writers like you who never seize to amaze me your creativity and writing styles. As long as you write, I will comment. Yes, I read almost all the Danish fanfics within 4 months started in late March. I am so very grateful to you all undying dedicated Danish writers. Thanks again SammysGirl from the bottom of my heart. I too am looking forward to your next creation.
this was just the perfect ending…and the writing of it was amazing. i hope this isn’t the last of your danish writing.
hello my friend! Just read through your latest….and loved it! it’s been awhile…hope all is going great for you! as you might suspect, I was a sucker for Helena’s sweetness on Lara!
That was AWESOME ending!!! I cracked up at AL and Dane catching Bette and Tina in the bathroom (flippin funny). Loved the wedding,great writing!!!!! I cant wait untill the next story,PPVS P.S You are amazing at writing Sammy!!! Thank you too. :)~
…to a long and happy life together.” You too ;-) Very sweet.
Great story. I love it. I wish they actually had a long happy life together.
oh man fantastic!!!!! i loved it all so beautiful i don’t want it to end:( did i read somewhere that lucky in love will be back soon oh i hope so so very much if not you have done so well i’ve enjoyed everything you’ve written!!! :)
yeah!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
thanks a million for his wonderful story! I’ve enjoyed reading where it went from chapter to chapter. Kissing before they were pronounced married made me laugh :) This is great! thanks again. You’re awesome! I hope this will not be the end of your Danish stories.
hiya,sorry, I think I forgot to comment on your last update on this! So I’m doing it together with this one. Wonderful story and wonderful ending! Amazingly good captured and sweet.Can’t wait for your next ones.
YAY!!! I Love THEM!!!! I Love Dave Too!!Great Story!!! Looking fwd to your next story! Keep Up The Great Work!!!
Woo Hoo! I was beyond excited to see your post. I love your writing and your stories. I am really looking forward to the sequel. You write all the characters so well and really amazing Danish. Loved Alice and Dana catching Bette and Tina — it usually seems to be the other way around. And the vows were beautiful. Great. Great. Great. Thank you so much for the story!