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    Luau (Chapter 4) -FINALE-

    Story written on November 8, 2007 by SammysGirl.
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    Number of Comments: 13
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=67441
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    Dana and Alice throw their housewarming luau, Bette and Tina are caught en flagrante (sort of), Helena wants to show Lara how much she’s loved, and Shane struggles with her feelings. (Oh, and there’s a Hawaiian vacation video too!)

    Shane thought she was doing a smooth job of avoiding being alone with Beth. Her actions, however, were far less skilled than she imagined. By the time they were halfway through the tour, no one, except Shane, thought she was behaving normally. Finally, Beth cornered her, lagging behind the group as they trouped upstairs.

    “You’re blowing it,” she said.

    “There’s nothing to blow,” Shane was suddenly cold with shy anxiety. This was a woman she’d fucked regularly for a year, been friends with for nearly a decade after that and now she could barely string a sentence together in her presence.

    “Whatever you say,” Beth said kindly. She understood that denial was Shane’s defense mechanism. “You can only avoid this, whatever this is between us, for so long and I think you’ll agree that we have to figure it out ourselves… before they do.” She was gone just as quickly as she’d appeared, leaving Shane to wonder why she frozen with fear.

    Between the roasted meats, the fresh pineapple and coconuts, the leis and the tropical flowers, the entire place smelled like Maui. The Gods smiled upon the tightly knit group and treated them to a spectacular sunset as they finished their authentic luau. It was, quite simply, one of the most beautiful evenings ever recorded. Some would even think it romantic. Bette and Tina managed to sneak off before desert was served, threatening to throw off Alice and Dana’s carefully planned moment.

    “They probably just went to call Angelica and say goodnight,” Alice observed. “Let’s go find them.”

    That proved easier said than done. A quick check upstairs and down did not yield the missing couple. Alice rejoined Dana and quickly dialed Bette’s cell phone, while Dana called Tina. They heard distant ringing and followed the sound to the powder room off on the far side of the house. Dana stopped short when they heard the muffled sounds of laughter from behind the closed door.

    “Maybe we should give them a minute.” She was embarrassed, despite the grin she flashed.

    “Yeah,” Alice answered mischievously, “like that’s gonna happen.” She rapped hard on the door. “Is everything okay?” Her voice dripped with sarcastic concern.

    “We’re fine,” Bette responded automatically, her mouth full of Tina’s left nipple. Tina’s thighs were closely firmly around Bette’s right hand as she bit her lip in a fight to keep from moaning. Loudly.

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    2. A fantastic finale. Thank you for your beautiful post. I absolutely adore Danish and thanks to writers like you who never seize to amaze me your creativity and writing styles. As long as you write, I will comment. Yes, I read almost all the Danish fanfics within 4 months started in late March. I am so very grateful to you all undying dedicated Danish writers. Thanks again SammysGirl from the bottom of my heart. I too am looking forward to your next creation.

    4. hello my friend! Just read through your latest….and loved it! it’s been awhile…hope all is going great for you! as you might suspect, I was a sucker for Helena’s sweetness on Lara!

    5. That was AWESOME ending!!! I cracked up at AL and Dane catching Bette and Tina in the bathroom (flippin funny). Loved the wedding,great writing!!!!! I cant wait untill the next story,PPVS P.S You are amazing at writing Sammy!!! Thank you too. :)~

    8. oh man fantastic!!!!! i loved it all so beautiful i don’t want it to end:( did i read somewhere that lucky in love will be back soon oh i hope so so very much if not you have done so well i’ve enjoyed everything you’ve written!!! :)

    10. thanks a million for his wonderful story! I’ve enjoyed reading where it went from chapter to chapter. Kissing before they were pronounced married made me laugh :) This is great! thanks again. You’re awesome! I hope this will not be the end of your Danish stories.

    11. hiya,sorry, I think I forgot to comment on your last update on this! So I’m doing it together with this one. Wonderful story and wonderful ending! Amazingly good captured and sweet.Can’t wait for your next ones.

    13. Woo Hoo! I was beyond excited to see your post. I love your writing and your stories. I am really looking forward to the sequel. You write all the characters so well and really amazing Danish. Loved Alice and Dana catching Bette and Tina — it usually seems to be the other way around. And the vows were beautiful. Great. Great. Great. Thank you so much for the story!

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