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“Don’t say another word…I swear to fucking god you better not say another fucking word…”
“I love you. You can do whatever you want. But I will love you. You can leave and I will follow you forever. You won’t be able to sleep because I will be there, you won’t be able to eat, to taste anything without telling me first….you understand what I am telling you?”
“Stop it Carmen. Just stop. This isn’t you. This isn’t you at all.”
“You have no idea who I am.”
“Is that so Carm…..you set me free. You! Now what, you got an itch no one can scratch but me. I am just a game and a fuck toy for you….just leave, stop this…stop telling me you love me when I know for a fact that you don’t love at all. You have no feelings. You have no soul.”
Shane she is hurting my feelings but I knew this would happen so I try not to take it too hard. She is fighting it. But I won’t let her win. I can’t. I came too far. And I miss her too much. It’s time to get serious.
“Shane?”
“What do you want? Don’t you ever get tired of fucking with me? Don’t you ever get sick of playing all these games with me? What are we going to do this till we die?
“We made a promise. You promised me you said we would be together no matter how crazy or stupid we became with fits of temporary insanity….I am here telling you that I am sorry.”
“Sorry about what? What did I do for you push me away Carmen. I saved you. I saved your son. I gave you my everything. My whole fucking everything. I would have done anything for you. And still it wasn’t enough….I told you a long time ago if you just want me to fuck you all you have to do is ask…but don’t give me this you love me bullshit. Because you can’t feel love at all. You are soulless.”
Ok. Soulless. That cut deep.
“Ok Shane….you are right. Ok. I am soulless. At times I have no feelings at all. But neither do you. We are the same. We kill, we love, and we walk outside the lines. We are perfect. Just remember Shane. That no matter what you say I know how you feel. I know how bad you want to get away from me right now. I know. I know that as much as you want to get away something is making you inch closer and closer to me. You know it and I know it.”
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You always leave me holding my breath until the last word of an update!
i’m glad carmen owned up to the fact that she made a mistake, but i also completely understand shane for being hesitant to go back with her. awesome update.
amazing! im glad you didnt go out tonight
That was so freakin’ amazing, I’m loss for words.I’m happy that Shane isn’t giving into Carmen so easily. Shane is right, she did everything for Carmen and Carmen kept doubting her and messing with her.I always love angst between lovers, when they love and lust for eachother but something stops them from being together.
amazing! im glad you didnt go out tonight
I’m doing my happy dance with gritted teeth. Damn this is an interesting turn of events. pps!
This is so freakin good! Carmen finally being the one doing the fighting for Shane. Cant wait for the next update!!
finally after a long vacation i managed to catch up on this amazing story. wow man luv the way ur mind works… i cudv nvr expected the story to turn out this way… keep going.. absolutly brilliant!! damn! ive missed this..
HOT DAMN! (Yeah I said that) Glad she found her so quickly. Shane’s pissed off attitude & low blows were so real. Carmen thought all she had to do was confess true love & she’d get her back…well think again. Luv ’em together but Carmen shouldn’t just expect to waltz in & get her back. Although I do think this separation was good for both of them. When they finally end up back together their insecurities won’t tear them apart. Wonderful!
MORE, PLEASE!!!!!
absolutely love your fics. And I agree, I want more!