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    Missing. 3

    Story written on January 13, 2007 by New Dawn Fades.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=63972
    Author Notes:

    Why did this feel like it was happening at the speed of sound?

     

     

    We don’t speak. We don’t have anything to say. We just stare and stare daring the other to look away. Getting bare and the feelings exposed. She looks dizzy. She has cuts on her hand her chin is red and bruised. Her hair is long. Kinda curling at the end. I want to touch her so bad but I can’t move.

     

     

    I hear her boots creak on the wood of the ground beneath us and I move toward her. I feel her hands on my body cold but getting warmer as they roam, familiar that feel of her. Lost in that feel of her. Her lips on my throat, her teeth biting and tongue tasting. Her fingers pressing hard into my back. My fingers touching the strength of her arms, feeling that soft silk of skin thinking to myself how silly to describe how soft silk can be. Her lips on my shoulder. Her teeth trapping the straps of my dress.

     

     

    She pushes me back and back till I am up against the wall. She has not kissed me yet and I try to get to her lips but she won’t let me.

     

     

    “Shane…”

     

     

    “Don’t …..Don’t talk…don’t ruin it with your talking.”

     

     

    “Shane….please.”

     

     

    “God Carmen….” Shane says trying not to look at me. “Why are you here…how did you know where I was?”

     

     

    “Endy…”

     

     

    “Great.”

     

     

    “Shane?”

     

     

    “What. What do you want from me? You tell me to go you tell me that you are setting me free and here you are fucking with my head. Fucking with my heart…..just fucking with me…..”

     

     

    “I am sorry…”

     

     

    “You are always fucking sorry Carmen….always fucking sorry…”

     

     

    “I love you.”

     

     

    “Don’t say that to me.”

     

     

    “Say what that I love you.”

     

     

    “Stop it Carmen I mean it.”

     

     

    “That I miss you.”

     

     

    “Carm…”

     

     

    “That I am sorry.”

     

     

    “Fuck you.”

     

     

    “I made a mistake.”

     

     

    “Just stop…please.”

     

     

    “I love you Shane.”

     

     

    “Stop it!”

     

     

    “I miss you and I love you.”

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    2. i’m glad carmen owned up to the fact that she made a mistake, but i also completely understand shane for being hesitant to go back with her. awesome update.

    4. That was so freakin’ amazing, I’m loss for words.I’m happy that Shane isn’t giving into Carmen so easily. Shane is right, she did everything for Carmen and Carmen kept doubting her and messing with her.I always love angst between lovers, when they love and lust for eachother but something stops them from being together.

    8. finally after a long vacation i managed to catch up on this amazing story. wow man luv the way ur mind works… i cudv nvr expected the story to turn out this way… keep going.. absolutly brilliant!! damn! ive missed this..

    9. HOT DAMN! (Yeah I said that) Glad she found her so quickly. Shane’s pissed off attitude & low blows were so real. Carmen thought all she had to do was confess true love & she’d get her back…well think again. Luv ’em together but Carmen shouldn’t just expect to waltz in & get her back. Although I do think this separation was good for both of them. When they finally end up back together their insecurities won’t tear them apart. Wonderful!

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