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Missing. 3
I walked in alone the guys where no where to be found. My head was really spinning but I try not to dwell on it. It was my vision that was irking me the most. Everything felt out of focus till I got in the darkness of the main hall.
Racers from all over the world where here. I saw some guys from the different crews we have bumped into along the way. Nothing as crazy as the old Bakersfield days. And that isn’t so much of a bad thing. I make my way to the crowed bar. Show them my race pass and get all the free drinks I can take.
I scan the room. Looking for her. It has to be her. I look and search but I find nothing but blonde and blonder and blondest. I refine my search for dark brunette so dark. Still nothing. I pay no mind to the blonde racer who is trying to get me to look at her.
Three hours and 4 beers later I was ready to call it a night. I find Joni talking with a blonde of his own and let him know that I was leaving he tells me that she is here…that he just saw her head upstairs to the balcony.
I don’t let him finish his sentence because I was running to get up there. It can’t be this easy. It can’t be that after all this time she is ready to admit that she is a jerk for leaving. Nothing is that simple right?
I take the stairs not trusting getting stuck in an elevator.
I follow the signs for the balcony running past some couples sneaking off. Paying them no mind I practically tear the handle off the door opening it. And as soon as I see her I know…..
Ch 8
It was luck that the race was called due to the weather. It was luck that I found the new guy Shane has been hanging out with. It was luck that we met at all. On that plane ride and the hour after hours in flight thinking about those hands, thinking about those lips, thinking about the way Shane smells like sex and violence all in one. God I was losing it. And that winding ride through those mountains the odd looks from the whitest people I have ever seen. Those eyes looking back at the most tanned person they have ever seen and luck. Fate… chance. This moment frozen in time. Bringing us closer and closer.
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(14 votes, average: 3.86 out of 5)
You always leave me holding my breath until the last word of an update!
i’m glad carmen owned up to the fact that she made a mistake, but i also completely understand shane for being hesitant to go back with her. awesome update.
amazing! im glad you didnt go out tonight
That was so freakin’ amazing, I’m loss for words.I’m happy that Shane isn’t giving into Carmen so easily. Shane is right, she did everything for Carmen and Carmen kept doubting her and messing with her.I always love angst between lovers, when they love and lust for eachother but something stops them from being together.
amazing! im glad you didnt go out tonight
I’m doing my happy dance with gritted teeth. Damn this is an interesting turn of events. pps!
This is so freakin good! Carmen finally being the one doing the fighting for Shane. Cant wait for the next update!!
finally after a long vacation i managed to catch up on this amazing story. wow man luv the way ur mind works… i cudv nvr expected the story to turn out this way… keep going.. absolutly brilliant!! damn! ive missed this..
HOT DAMN! (Yeah I said that) Glad she found her so quickly. Shane’s pissed off attitude & low blows were so real. Carmen thought all she had to do was confess true love & she’d get her back…well think again. Luv ’em together but Carmen shouldn’t just expect to waltz in & get her back. Although I do think this separation was good for both of them. When they finally end up back together their insecurities won’t tear them apart. Wonderful!
MORE, PLEASE!!!!!
absolutely love your fics. And I agree, I want more!