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I park. They cheer and clap. Joni runs over stop watch in one hand beer in the other. Hans even looks happy. I get off my bike gingerly and grab the beer as Joni rants on about my time. He notices the blood on my knuckles when I knock the beer back.
“Shane…your time was 11:37 not bad for a trial run yeah…”
“I would have done better but I bought it on turn 7….fucked my knee up a little.”
“Not enough to hurt race?’ Hans asks looking suspicious at me.
“No I will be fine.’
He leans over to his number two and say something in German to him. I didn’t know what he said but I could make out American and something that sounds like dame. I go back to my beer and Joni. Hans just walks away.
“You did good Shane…yeah. You will be good for tomorrow?”
“I thought we where on tonight?”
“No track is too slick they leave race for tomorrow….but they have party set up near by to make better yeah….you going?”
“Why not. Everyone else is right?”
“Yeah….” He says running back to the trailer with my bike beside him. “Oh Shane female is looking for you…very nice looking…very exotic….she was very serious…”
“Really…what’s her name…?”
“Uh…..oh….Esmeralda….yeah Esmeralda very sexy…..why do you get all the females…”
I spit my beer out and he looks at me like I have special needs. For a second there I thought he said Esmeralda.
“Esmeralda? Are you sure?”
“Very sure….dark hair nice very nice…..she will be at party I told her where to find you….”
“Are you sure she didn’t say Carmen…”
“The female who leave you broken bruised and forgotten…. I would have remembered if she said that….no she says Esmeralda….she say she find you…go get cleaned up yeah…”
Carmen………. here? I gotta be losing it. I walk back to my trailer in a daze.
I showered and cleaned my wounds. And limped my way back to the hotel where the party was being held. The people who own this track have spared no expense. From the daily tours of “The Ring.” To the competitors campers that are allowed. To rooms with a view of the whole track on race days, the makers of this track sure knew how to treat people.
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You always leave me holding my breath until the last word of an update!
i’m glad carmen owned up to the fact that she made a mistake, but i also completely understand shane for being hesitant to go back with her. awesome update.
amazing! im glad you didnt go out tonight
That was so freakin’ amazing, I’m loss for words.I’m happy that Shane isn’t giving into Carmen so easily. Shane is right, she did everything for Carmen and Carmen kept doubting her and messing with her.I always love angst between lovers, when they love and lust for eachother but something stops them from being together.
amazing! im glad you didnt go out tonight
I’m doing my happy dance with gritted teeth. Damn this is an interesting turn of events. pps!
This is so freakin good! Carmen finally being the one doing the fighting for Shane. Cant wait for the next update!!
finally after a long vacation i managed to catch up on this amazing story. wow man luv the way ur mind works… i cudv nvr expected the story to turn out this way… keep going.. absolutly brilliant!! damn! ive missed this..
HOT DAMN! (Yeah I said that) Glad she found her so quickly. Shane’s pissed off attitude & low blows were so real. Carmen thought all she had to do was confess true love & she’d get her back…well think again. Luv ’em together but Carmen shouldn’t just expect to waltz in & get her back. Although I do think this separation was good for both of them. When they finally end up back together their insecurities won’t tear them apart. Wonderful!
MORE, PLEASE!!!!!
absolutely love your fics. And I agree, I want more!