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More Than a Feeling
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Why did you quit? Melvin asked.
WellI know that junior year is the most important year of high school. The grades from junior year get sent to colleges, and I wanted to do my best. Track was fun, but it wasnt going to take me anywhere. I wasnt that good at it. I decided to focus more on my schoolwork, and track would really cut into study time, so I quit.
Sounds reasonable enough. Melvin said, and then added, But maintaining a healthy body is also important.
I couldnt agree more. Tina mumbled, looking down at her plate. God, how much more do I have to eat?
Then, Melvin dropped the bomb. So, Tina, do you have a boyfriend?
Bette, who had been sipping her water, nearly spit it all over the table. Both Melvin and Tina looked at her as she struggled to stop her choking. Wrong pipe. She rasped, slapping a hand across her chest. She caught Tinas pleading look out of the corner of her eye before Tina looked away.
Uh Tina laughed nervously. IuhI did. But things didnt work out.
Suddenly, it felt as if all of Melvins tension had left him. Oh, well, Im sorry to hear that. Boys are a distraction anyway. Focus on your studies.
I intend to.
Youre a bright girl Tina. Someone will find you.
They already have. Thank you, sir.
Melvin sat back, sighing. Well, I dont know about you, but I am stuffed.
Bette stood. I clear and clean them.
Ill help. Tina said quickly, standing as well.
Bette rapidly took her plate and placed it on top of Tinas just as Melvin was about to examine it. He sat back as Bette grabbed his plate. Why thank you. He stood as well. Im going to go clean the grill.
Tina grabbed the glasses and followed Bette into the kitchen. Bette was already disposing of Tinas food. Tina placed the glasses in the sink as Bette turned. You dont like steak, do you?
I cant stand it. Tina admitted, a little embarrassed. I hope I didnt offend your father.
Bette shook her head and kissed Tina softly on the cheek. That was really sweet of you.
Tinas cheeks flushed as she turned the faucet on. She began to wash the dishes. Bette shook her head again. No, Tee, you dont have to do tha–
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Manda, you do know that you rock don’t you? Don’t worry about the lack of TiBette NC-17s. Anyone who tortured themself with S3 should be used to that…once again, and with more, sarcasm, thank you Ilene. Thank you very much! But, I’m all for TiBette having heavy make out sessions. Afterall, there’s a lot that can be done without, umm, “going for the gold.” In fact, that would make this Good Friday an Excellent Friday…sorry, my hormones got the best of me there.
I forgot to ask you to post soon…so, please post soon!
Yes.. lets head to bette’s room ;).. STUDIES need to be done.. hahaha. Fab chapter!.. Poor Tina… having to go thro the melvin test.. shes a trooper tho… she made it.. hopefully now they can play:).. Post soon! PLEEEASE!
Hot make out sessions will do for now, nothing to heavy … I gotta tell you, every tibette NC17 I have read, has helped me, forget s3 almost, I felt so DEPRIVED of tibette love making this season lol .. thank god for fanfiction right!, but take ur time no need to rush!
It is nice to see two young women who care for one another get to know each other before jumping into a sexual relationship. Being friends and girlfriends first can lead to a longer adult relationship. I like how Tina held her own with Melvin. I am not sure that I could have held up under those circumstances.
this was great…love tina’s struggle with clothes…wonderful story
haha yes i do believe sum anatomy shuld b studied
Great chapter. I think you are so right about them not rushing into having sex. Truthfully, they’re just starting to get to know each other. However, when the time comes, there are quite a few writers that write fabulous NC-17s that you may be able to persuade to help you. Chasemenow, giasony, flairforthedramatic, allyemmerson, just to name a few–hehe. Great chapter, thanks Manda.
Well well, happy studying! These girls are so young and they need to take their time, so let them have it. Your story doesn’t need to be spiced up with NC-17s, so just keep on going like you had in mind. Thanks a lot for this chapter!
If your NC-17s are anything like every other chapter you’ve written, they won’t suck. So, just keep that opinion in mind. :) So Tina hates steak huh? I’m one of those people where sometimes I’m like, “Meh I’ll eat it anyway” so I probably wouldn’t have had any problems there. lol So they are off to “study” now? Hope they don’t get interrupted because that really kills the “study” atmosphere. ;)
I forgot to add something earlier because I had just woken up and my brain still thought it was sleepy time. Well mostly it’s just a repeat of what I had said a few chapters ago. I agree that B&T shouldn’t have sex yet. Chances are they haven’t even thought that far ahead. But “studying” is just about right. They can take the “test” later. :)
heavy make out session to follow….lol!!!
Don’t worry about the sex part, too soon. Your writing is great, as is the story – just the way it is.
Tina is naughty. I love it.
Tina did good wiht Melvin! i like it, and i am agree with you they are not ready yet to have sex and but eventually they will get there and i thing you and they will be so ready! continue post a like so much this story
Good chapter. Wow Melvin have a lots of question to ask. Ok now let see some make out. Ok post soon please, thanks!