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More Than a Feeling
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I guess.
Lets go then.
Gripping on to Tinas hand tightly, knowing that shed have to let go before they reached Melvin, Bette led Tina out of her bedroom.
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What do you think of the house? Melvin asked Tina, putting another piece of steak in his mouth.
Its certainly veryinteresting. Tina cleared her throat. I meanyou have a lot of really nice paintings andsculpture and stuff.
They had been eating for nearly an hour, and Tina didnt know what to make of Bettes father. Melvin had been shooting off questions like a police detective. When did Tina meet Bette? How did she meet Bette? Why was she in a senior class if she was a junior? How good was she in History and English? What was her home life like? What did her mother do? He switched from subject to subject with no general pattern, and Tina was starting to feel as if he were trying to make her slip-up.
So, Tina, how are you doing in school? Melvin asked before taking a sip of beer.
Im doing well, Mr. Porter. Math is a struggle, but Bettes helping me through it.
Oh, are you tutoring Tina as well, Bette?
Not really. Tina only comes to me when she needs help with a question.
Which is most of the time. Tina tried to laugh, but she was so nervous. She looked down at her plate, staring at the sauce-covered meat. Shed only taken a few small bites before moving to salad and vegetables, but those were all gone. All that remained was the steak. Nearly grimacing, Tina cut off another small piece and put it in her mouth, chewing slowly, reluctantly before forcing herself to swallow.
Bette noticed Tinas struggle and immediately felt bad, but that soon turned to love when she realized that all Tina was trying to do was impress her father.
How are you doing in other subjects?
Very well, sir. Tina replied politely.
Do you participate in any extracurricular activities?
Tina took another hesitant bite of her steak. I dont this year.
But you have? Melvin asked, intrigued.
I was on track for two years, but quit.
You never told me that. Bette blurted out, and immediately regretted it. Why would she tell her if they were just friends? She hoped Melvin wouldnt think the same thing.
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Manda, you do know that you rock don’t you? Don’t worry about the lack of TiBette NC-17s. Anyone who tortured themself with S3 should be used to that…once again, and with more, sarcasm, thank you Ilene. Thank you very much! But, I’m all for TiBette having heavy make out sessions. Afterall, there’s a lot that can be done without, umm, “going for the gold.” In fact, that would make this Good Friday an Excellent Friday…sorry, my hormones got the best of me there.
I forgot to ask you to post soon…so, please post soon!
Yes.. lets head to bette’s room ;).. STUDIES need to be done.. hahaha. Fab chapter!.. Poor Tina… having to go thro the melvin test.. shes a trooper tho… she made it.. hopefully now they can play:).. Post soon! PLEEEASE!
Hot make out sessions will do for now, nothing to heavy … I gotta tell you, every tibette NC17 I have read, has helped me, forget s3 almost, I felt so DEPRIVED of tibette love making this season lol .. thank god for fanfiction right!, but take ur time no need to rush!
It is nice to see two young women who care for one another get to know each other before jumping into a sexual relationship. Being friends and girlfriends first can lead to a longer adult relationship. I like how Tina held her own with Melvin. I am not sure that I could have held up under those circumstances.
this was great…love tina’s struggle with clothes…wonderful story
haha yes i do believe sum anatomy shuld b studied
Great chapter. I think you are so right about them not rushing into having sex. Truthfully, they’re just starting to get to know each other. However, when the time comes, there are quite a few writers that write fabulous NC-17s that you may be able to persuade to help you. Chasemenow, giasony, flairforthedramatic, allyemmerson, just to name a few–hehe. Great chapter, thanks Manda.
Well well, happy studying! These girls are so young and they need to take their time, so let them have it. Your story doesn’t need to be spiced up with NC-17s, so just keep on going like you had in mind. Thanks a lot for this chapter!
If your NC-17s are anything like every other chapter you’ve written, they won’t suck. So, just keep that opinion in mind. :) So Tina hates steak huh? I’m one of those people where sometimes I’m like, “Meh I’ll eat it anyway” so I probably wouldn’t have had any problems there. lol So they are off to “study” now? Hope they don’t get interrupted because that really kills the “study” atmosphere. ;)
I forgot to add something earlier because I had just woken up and my brain still thought it was sleepy time. Well mostly it’s just a repeat of what I had said a few chapters ago. I agree that B&T shouldn’t have sex yet. Chances are they haven’t even thought that far ahead. But “studying” is just about right. They can take the “test” later. :)
heavy make out session to follow….lol!!!
Don’t worry about the sex part, too soon. Your writing is great, as is the story – just the way it is.
Tina is naughty. I love it.
Tina did good wiht Melvin! i like it, and i am agree with you they are not ready yet to have sex and but eventually they will get there and i thing you and they will be so ready! continue post a like so much this story
Good chapter. Wow Melvin have a lots of question to ask. Ok now let see some make out. Ok post soon please, thanks!