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More Than a Feeling
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"I came to see how you were." Bette said, crouching next to Tina. "I guess you already spoke to Dana."
"Why did you tell Alice?"
Bette shook her head. "I didn’t Tee, I swear to God I didn’t."
"Well then how did she find out?"
"It’s a gaydar thing. Alice can just tell. I don’t know how, but she can."
"A gaydar thing." Tina echoed, turning her gaze over to the rest of her backyard.
Bette took Tina’s hand, on the verge of tears. "You have to believe me Tee, I wouldn’t have told anyone, ever. I know what it’s like to keep that secret and how scary it is when others find out. Please believe me."
Tina sighed, looking back at Bette. "I do."
"S-so, you’re not mad at me?"
"No." Tina barely whispered. "But now Dana hates me."
"No she doesn’t."
"She told me she never wanted to speak to me again."
"She’s just mad. She doesn’t mean it."
Releasing the grip on her knees, Tina brought them over the lawn chair and sat up straighter. "No, I really think she meant it. I don’t know what to do now. She’s been my best friend for so long…I don’t have anyone else."
Bette moved from her position and sat next to Tina on the chair. "That’s not true. You have me."
Tina gave Bette a small polite smile. "Yeah."
"And Alice said she was going to try to explain everything to Dana."
"Are you so sure that’s a good idea?"
Bette sighed. "I don’t know, but we have to do something, right?"
"I guess." Tina said, picking at the bottom of her old, ratty shirt.
Suddenly, Bette’s cell phone started ringing. Bette flipped it open. "It’s Alice." She said to Tina before answering. "Hey Al, what’s up?"
"She’s not home."
"Who? Dana?"
"No, the Tooth Fairy, of course Dana. She went somewhere with her parents for the weekend. So it’s a no-go."
"Shit."
"Hey, it’s no biggie; I’ll just talk to her on Monday."
"Yeah well, I’m here with a pretty broken-up Tina. She thinks Dana hates her."
"That’s a little drastic, isn’t it?"
"Yeah well, we wouldn’t be in this position if you just listened to me and kept your big mouth shut."
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Great Chapter, What’s up between Bette and Monty? Post Soon
lol yeah, why does Tina desperately wants to know everything about Bette huh? hmm oh well i don’t knowww, maybe because this is another B&T beginning lol
Eric such an ass and glad Tina trust Bette and not going out with Monty. Oh Tina want to know everything about Bette, this gonna be good, and what’s happen between Bette and Monty. OK post soon please, thanks!
exactly was lamentamini said…eric tried bette n she dissed him!! so sad monty so sad!
Ice bitch huh. I bet asshole Eric tried to score with Bette and she shot him down. Maybe while Bette is flipping through the channels a movie wit a couple of hot women will be on and Bette can gauge Tina’s reaction. ;)
Holy hell I needed this chapter to pull me out of the trenches from Sunday’s episode. Why am I even watching when I can just live happily in Fan Fiction Denialville? Manda, your story is excellent and again, I thank you for writing it at a time when it’s situation critical. As for Bette, woman up and go get your girl. Parting is such sweet sorrow, Monty! PLEASE post soon if life allows Manda.
My friend introduced me to this story of yours.. It’s great!!! I just totally love the way you are writing B&T.. and Alice she is a riot! hahaha.. I really hope everything is going to be aright with Dana. Can’t wait to see B&T’s first kiss *wink*.. hahaha.. Great work! Next Chapter Please :)
This was great, and your dialogue is very good!! Thanks!
Wow, Tina is very trusting… Hope it doesn’t get her in trouble… Thanks for writing it!
i can answer this for you, tina: because you like her more than a friend….love this chapter, at least tina isn’t mad at bette…i’m glad tina heard it all…and his nickname reminds me of full monty LOL
Love it. Please post soon
very good chapter, i am glad Tina wasn`t mad with Bette, she trust her. i hope she won`t go out wiht Monty! keep posting you are doing great! thanks for happy times for B&T
haha Eric lft disapointed that makes me happie :) hmm..so Bette&Monty have a past hay..that bloke BAD newz..he can shag&bag ne babe y mst he have his peker set on Tina..no sprks..he aint wrth it..T knew of his rep b4Bette even called Romeo a man-whore..I jus no get this..yuk..b gun Eric!..get outa the picture..T trst B she shouldn’t trst Monty b careful Tina..B should b her white knight&go4it tell Tina the truth, it time2get her beloved ladie..Lookin4wrd2B&T’z1st kiss..hope Alice fix the mess she made..that gurl a trip THNK u4writing..Love how u capture the essence of the L-wrd gurlz..GRT chap as alwys!! positively realistic..Post soon
I’m loving it. It’s so nicely written i can just see them sitting and her behaviout to Eric, i believe he tried it with her and turned him down badly. Post soon, alsways nice to read your story in the morning before work
this is great! i look forward to your posts everyday. hope you can post soon!
I am loving this story. It is so cute reading how Tina is wanting to know everything about Bette. Bette is being too nice by not telling Tina what happened with Eric. Eric is just a jerk and needs an adjustment with his behaviour and quick.
Sooo great this story….
Tina’s a smart girl. I’m glad she snuck a listen. Not only is she cautious of Eric…now she is suspicious. It will never work. So what’s the history between Bette and Eric?