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More Than a Feeling
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"Relax Porter, I’ll handle it. Trust me, by Monday afternoon, all will be well. Listen, I’m off to tell Huber it’s over, so if you don’t hear from me in an hour, he’s killed me and hung me above his door as a pretty tribute to our love."
"Godspeed." Bette said, and then hung up.
"What’d she say?" Tina asked, her head resting on the palms of her hands.
"Dana apparently isn’t home for the weekend, so she’ll take care of it on Monday."
"Okay. I hope she listens to Alice."
"I think she will. I’m sorry this happened Tina. I told Alice not to say anything to Dana." Receiving only a slight nod from Tina, Bette continued. "She told me Dana was gay before you did. And I told her not to say anything, but Alice never listens to anyone. I’m sure if she knew this would happen though, she wouldn’t have asked Dana out."
She didn’t know how to respond to that, so Tina just nodded as she rose from the chair and stretched. "Let’s go inside. I’m kinda tired."
"Oh yeah. All right." Bette said, following Tina inside. "Do you need anything?"
"Huh?" Tina turned, raising her eyebrow.
"I mean, like, food, a drink, whatever." Bette motioned around the kitchen.
"No thanks, I’m fine. But that’s really sweet of you." Tina shuffled into the living room. "Come watch TV with me." She called out to Bette, who was still in the kitchen. Bette walked into the living room to find Tina already beneath a blanket, curled up on the couch with the remote in her hand. She laughed nervously, taking a few apprehensive steps toward Tina and then plopping down on the opposite side of the couch. Keep yourself under control. She’s hurt. She’s vulnerable.
Oh, but I want to kiss her.
"Any ideas?"
Several. "Ideas about what?"
"Ideas about what?"
"About what to watch." Tina muttered, absent-mindedly clicking the remote, flipping through channels faster than Bette could see them.
After several minutes, Tina sighed. "There’s nothing on." She said, throwing the remote down in defeat.
Folding her hands and placing them on her knees, Bette just looked over at Tina. "So what do you want to do now?"
Tina thought about it for a minute. "I need a distraction."
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Great Chapter, What’s up between Bette and Monty? Post Soon
lol yeah, why does Tina desperately wants to know everything about Bette huh? hmm oh well i don’t knowww, maybe because this is another B&T beginning lol
Eric such an ass and glad Tina trust Bette and not going out with Monty. Oh Tina want to know everything about Bette, this gonna be good, and what’s happen between Bette and Monty. OK post soon please, thanks!
exactly was lamentamini said…eric tried bette n she dissed him!! so sad monty so sad!
Ice bitch huh. I bet asshole Eric tried to score with Bette and she shot him down. Maybe while Bette is flipping through the channels a movie wit a couple of hot women will be on and Bette can gauge Tina’s reaction. ;)
Holy hell I needed this chapter to pull me out of the trenches from Sunday’s episode. Why am I even watching when I can just live happily in Fan Fiction Denialville? Manda, your story is excellent and again, I thank you for writing it at a time when it’s situation critical. As for Bette, woman up and go get your girl. Parting is such sweet sorrow, Monty! PLEASE post soon if life allows Manda.
My friend introduced me to this story of yours.. It’s great!!! I just totally love the way you are writing B&T.. and Alice she is a riot! hahaha.. I really hope everything is going to be aright with Dana. Can’t wait to see B&T’s first kiss *wink*.. hahaha.. Great work! Next Chapter Please :)
This was great, and your dialogue is very good!! Thanks!
Wow, Tina is very trusting… Hope it doesn’t get her in trouble… Thanks for writing it!
i can answer this for you, tina: because you like her more than a friend….love this chapter, at least tina isn’t mad at bette…i’m glad tina heard it all…and his nickname reminds me of full monty LOL
Love it. Please post soon
very good chapter, i am glad Tina wasn`t mad with Bette, she trust her. i hope she won`t go out wiht Monty! keep posting you are doing great! thanks for happy times for B&T
haha Eric lft disapointed that makes me happie :) hmm..so Bette&Monty have a past hay..that bloke BAD newz..he can shag&bag ne babe y mst he have his peker set on Tina..no sprks..he aint wrth it..T knew of his rep b4Bette even called Romeo a man-whore..I jus no get this..yuk..b gun Eric!..get outa the picture..T trst B she shouldn’t trst Monty b careful Tina..B should b her white knight&go4it tell Tina the truth, it time2get her beloved ladie..Lookin4wrd2B&T’z1st kiss..hope Alice fix the mess she made..that gurl a trip THNK u4writing..Love how u capture the essence of the L-wrd gurlz..GRT chap as alwys!! positively realistic..Post soon
I’m loving it. It’s so nicely written i can just see them sitting and her behaviout to Eric, i believe he tried it with her and turned him down badly. Post soon, alsways nice to read your story in the morning before work
this is great! i look forward to your posts everyday. hope you can post soon!
I am loving this story. It is so cute reading how Tina is wanting to know everything about Bette. Bette is being too nice by not telling Tina what happened with Eric. Eric is just a jerk and needs an adjustment with his behaviour and quick.
Sooo great this story….
Tina’s a smart girl. I’m glad she snuck a listen. Not only is she cautious of Eric…now she is suspicious. It will never work. So what’s the history between Bette and Eric?