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    Moving On Chapter 32

    Story written on March 6, 2005 by Mates4eva.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=52461
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    Tina wakes up the next morning to one hell of a surprise!

    Bette saw the softness, the love, and the concern gazing back at her from Tinas eyes, from her heart, and a hesitant smile graced the corners of her lips. It was quite a turn around from the last time they had seen each other, Tina had been so angry, her eyes full of loathing and hate. and who could blame her, Bette had thought at the time.

    Bette knew Tina well enough to know that this sudden change of heart was probably temporary; a result of an experience she was going through. perhaps had gone through, while she was unconscious and Bette wanted to know what it was all about, wanting to help Tina through it if she would let her!..

    Desperate to know what happened to her, her memory eluding her, Tina stared in anticipation at the women who had captured her heart the moment they first laid eyes on each other, thinking to herself, What the ***** is going on here Tina? think!!! What the ***** happened last night?

    A sudden terrifying thought occurred to Tina, worrying her immensely. Bette looked terrible, she was in hospital, god. What about their son? Was Jack ok? Where the ***** was their sonwhere was Jack?

    Tina was totally dumbfounded, her mind not yet completely processing her situation or predicament. She knew she was in a hospital, but how and why had her completely mystified, she had also seemed to have lost all concept of time. She looked intently at Bette (hesitantly, quietly) So what.. whats going on Bette? Wheres Jack, is he ok?

    Bette looked at Tina perplexingly, What Tee, Um who is. Whos Jack????

    With that single statement, those three little words from Bette, Who is Jack, a look of horror consumed Tinas face and she started sobbing; the realities of the situation suddenly hitting her subconscious like a ton of bricks..

    Bette comforted Tina the only way she knew how, she held her tightly in her arms, not knowing what was going on, what Tina had been through, scared to ask, but planning on never letting go, Shhh. Its ok Tee, Its ok!! Bette repeated the sentiment over and over.

    Bette managed to successfully calm Tina, easing her troubled mind; but she had no idea what Tina was talking about and her own mind started to wander.

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    2. MATES…YOU ARE AWESOME…AND THIS IS ONE HELL OF A TWIST…I HAVEN’T FINISHED READING THIS CHAPTER YET…BUT I HAD TO LET YOU KNOW…THAT YOU ARE BRILLIANT….BRILLIANT I SAY….SIMPLY….GOSH…I DON’T KNOW WHAT ELSE TO SAY….I WISH I COULD GIVE YOU A HUG RIGHT ABOUT NOW…..HEHEHEHE….OKAY…HERE’S A CYBER HUG…YOU ARE THE QUEEN OF DRAMA…..

    4. ALRIGHT..I FINISHED READING….TINA PASSED OUT…HAHAHHAHA…..MATES DAMN GIRL YOU ARE GOOD……I NEVER EXPECTED THIS TWIST…BUT I HAVE TO SAY THAT IT IS THE BEST TWIST SO FAR ON THIS SITE….

    6. Mates…this is sure a twister – what a surprise. You have made the best stundt for the season. I must say you had us all fooled with this story…..so what happens now. Is the nightmare starting all over again for Tina. That poor girl. Let´s see where you take us now on your journey. Post real soon. Great stuff.

    8. Welcome back Mates, oh what the hell is just happen is that all about in Tina dream and now what is really going on. I just don’t really what really going on next because Tina pass out and how is that happen. Please post soon, thank you!

    14. OMG. This has to be the best twist ever. I’m usually good at knowing something like this is coming but I really didn’t have a clue. A bizillion stars for you mates. You rock.

    15. mates: you have us all fooled!! great story. I think you and JLO are in a league of your own. Interesting twist. I think i know is the doc – one doctor stephanie!

    19. Hi Mates, OMG! this chapter has got to be the mother of all the twists that i have read…this was absolutely fantastic! An infinity of stars for you…..WOW!!!!!

    21. CHAPEAU!!! Incredible… I’m speechless and also impatient to read next chapter (even if I think the doctor is Stephanie). It’s a very great story.
      Oh… I hope there’snt another doctor in this hospital named… Kristie???

    23. Mates….you DOG…how do you do this? I’m starting all over again, what happened to the lovin’, Is it the dreaded DR PHELPS?
      again, how could you do this to us? I love it!

    26. Great twist! I must admit, I briefly wondered how Tina’s body could be in such great shape after 5 years of coma…..I also think the doctor is Kristie. Please continue!

    31. DR. STEPHANIE!!! AHHHH… Now how do I know if this is real or not? Can I ever trust again? I miss Little Jack already, and am dying to find out whata really happened! So glad you’re back

    34. oh no….don’t tell us it’s doc Kristie? or Cristie?… I sure will faint if I’m Tina… oh no… good..oh no…GREAT story there..keep going, don’t stop, pleassssssseeeee..I’m addicted to the fanfiction already!!

    35. Hi I have just read this whole story – right from chapter 1-32, i absolutly love this story and the direction you have taken with it, please continue.xx

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