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My first time…a Sci-Fi Story Chapter 7– BEHIND THE MIRROR – THE SECOND WAVE
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Jody: “hi there, we are Jody Lerner and Kelly Freeman second years, may we speak with you (addressing to Brenda) please?”
Brenda: “sure, do you want me to go to your table?”
Jody: “yes please”
The short girl sits at Jody’s table.
Jody: “what is your name?”
Brenda: “I’m Brenda Jenkins”
Jody: “we accidentally heard your quarrel with your girlfriend”
Brenda: (sobbing) “she is no longer my girlfriend; she is now with that girl, her OA”
Jody: “and are you okay with that?”
Brenda: “no, I’m not, we were together for eight years we had plans to have a family and now she has left me for her; I don’t understand, Tina wasn’t like that, she was always very loving, but she changed since she met her OA”
Jody: “I understand that, Bette Porter is like that, Kelly and I studied high school with her in New Los Angeles, she was always pushy, and she wanted to be the best undeservedly”
Kelly: “yeah…, she cheated, because it is not possible to be always the first in everything and she was, so she cheated”
Jody: “if you are interested, we may prepare a plan so you could have you girlfriend back and we may do justice”
Brenda: (suspicious) “I don’t know, I may try with Tina first”
Jody: (sighing and writing a number on a piece of paper) “okay…, look if you change your mind and you need our help just call me, this is my hphone”
Brenda: “thanks”
Jody: “see you and good luck”
Now
Jody is coming back with some food and drinks
Jody: “well Brenda tell me about your girlfriend”
Brenda: “look…, to tell the truth we weren’t girlfriends, because she was very particular, she didn’t want to be girlfriends until we were able to have sex”
Jody: “mhm…, she is indeed very particular, did she have…, you know, any other friend’s… girl friends around?”
Brenda: “well…, yeah, she was always very popular, she likes to … how I could say…”
Jody: “huh…, (smiling) she is a player”
Brenda: “it’s not exactly like that…, anyway she told me I was the one that she loved”
A strong rumble shakes the building and Brenda gets up:
Brenda: “what’s that?”
Jody: “a storm, wait a second, I better check on the students, make yourself comfortable Brenda”
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Phew, happy that Tina is alright!
Sciencefiction is not something that interest me, but your story is a exception.
The “changed” girls found each other, and i am looking forward to see how they are gonna rescue Louise.
Thanks for the update!
Hi Bibi:
You can believe it or not but I was also worry about Tina, she could decide to go to her mother that she saw through a window in the wormhole, but she came back to Bette, it was a hard decision.
Now the question is why they were attacked, lightning hitting exclusively building H-027, what do you think about that?
As far as we go, there are 12 ‘changed’ girls even though they may not be the only ones with potential abilities, however they were the ones that changed because a strong emotion, love, and their change was triggered by feeling their lovers or friends in distress or danger.
That is not usual in real live sometimes love makes us move heaven and earth even using hidden abilities, of course no like the ones in this story.
I’m very glad that you like my story and each time you guys make a comment it helps me to re-write my ideas and continue this story.
Thank so much for reading, and again, sorry for my English.
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Enjoyed it, thanks.
thanks for reading
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Let me see if intender correct me if I’m talking nonsense.
This means that we have a meta-human group, and Bette and Tina are
with more powers than the others … this group are humans who possuíem “biological variation” in their METAGENE. And that this gene remained dormant until activated with this extreme storm or feeling, which is Love. And this METAGENE uses the source of this action as a catalyst for such “genetic change” resulting in meta-human abilities? !! … our mother !! … It’s getting very interesting this story.
The entire universe.
Note: I’m aware that this is a Sci-Fi.
My friend, you are extremely close:
Mutations are changes in the DNA sequence that regularly is present in certain population and it happens in single individual or group of individuals.
Evolution requires mutations that could be transferred to offspring
For mutations to be transferred to offspring they have to be in germ line cells (sex cells)
The mutations could take place in the following ways:
-By duplication of genes, where some of them remain originals (dominant and recessive genes)
-By activation of some genes, through environmental factors (including age)
-By mutations that take place in noncoding sequence (fragments) of DNA. DNA have sequences of units that coding traits (functions), these sequence are genes, however there are sequences of DNA that do not coding any trait (or not known genes)
Now, it is known that using biomolecular engineering or genetic engineering, the last type of mutations could be performed by “someone”
Thank you so much for this reflection that is helping me with the story
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I am very happy to contribute to its history.
And you’re leading me back to read biology books.
Bear hug.
I hope I’m not boring you with these technicalities. This is what Louise is questioning herself after her third dream (former chapter); did “someone” play God altering the genetic material of the cryobanks? or was there a genetic mix of DNA from humans and other species, and now is about to be expressed? That could give some explanation or have relationship to what is called a METAGENE and METAHUMANS (in some sci-fi stories and comics, which by the way I love). But here this is not going to happen to a privileged group, but to the whole human race and in different levels and you will read what it will entail
Bear hug
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