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Bette appeared “I am parched – when is lunch babe – it smells heaven “
“Ten minutes – maybe less – it’s very quiet in there “
“Grandad is getting a tutorial on his new phone from Professor Angelica “
Mary and Tina both laughed “This I have to see – and maybe she can give me a lesson or two “
Bette retrieved a bottle of water from the fridge and looked at Tina who took her beer and took a long drink
“Something stronger my love?”
“I think me getting steamed is as bad an idea as letting Angie run amok “
“Bad ?”
“I am wound up that’s all “
“It means a lot to you “Bette said smiling “I know that – this is special for you “
Tina drained her beer and grinned “I think I am more wound up than Angie “
“You want my special relaxation technique ?”
“Will you stop it?” Tina was laughing
“Gee – you cannot help some people “Bette replied grinning back
“You never did care who caught us in the act did you ?”
“I don’t remember “Bette smiled
“God the places we did it and didn’t get caught “Tina reminisced
“I don’t think this is the place for “do you remember “
“I know – maybe tonight when everyone is in bed?” Tina smiled
“That might be sooner than later – your dad is so happy babe “
“I know – I just wish my mom would ease up “
“Do you want me to have a word?”
Tina accepted another bottle of beer that Bette had removed from the fridge “Not a good idea – why did we agree to them staying for so long “
“Because they would be making several journeys here what with the wedding and the birthday “
Tina sighed “Why are we doing all of this together ?”
“It seemed a good idea at the time – plus a Christmas wedding is romantic “
Tina yawned – Bette took Tina’s hand “It’s going to be okay – you are not alone any more – you have me and I love you and the loud one very much – this is the right thing for all of us “
Tina moved closer to Bette and snuggled against her “I know you are right – it’s just “
“I know – there has been a lot happening lately – but you and I are great. We are better now than we were when we got married the last time and that lasted longer than anyone expected “
Tina looked at Bette
“You think no one gave us a chance ?”
“I know no one gave us a chance – Alice didn’t and neither did Kit. so all that nonsense Alice came out with about us being the perfect couple was a revision – it wasn’t what they all thought at the time. We proved them wrong then and we sure as hell are going to do the same thing again – I love you and I sure as hell believe in you and I “
Tina gently kissed Bette “I am so lucky – you are right of course – who thought that you would be tamed by me – you were my first female lover – I remember all the fuss it created “
Bette stroked Tina’s hair “They were wrong then and they are wrong now “
Tina smiled “Thanks – you always know how to make me feel better “
“I am telling the truth Tina “
“I know – maybe I am just nervous “
“Pre wedding jitters “
Tina smiled “Yes “
They kissed for several minutes until Tina eased away “Do you want to help me serve lunch?”
“I would love to – maybe with her tummy full Angie might have an afternoon nap “
“I could do with one”
“Last Christmas we all snuggled up on our bed and we all had a nap “
“Not going to happen this year sadly – come on – lets get lunch sorted out”
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I am very happy to see taken up this story. Thank You allyemmerson. Please, do not also forget The L Wings (not for ending but for more and more chapters :)) ), one of the best fanfics all time :)
Nice…very nice, Ally! Thank you!
Oh no, you didn’t just ended this amazing story! :-(
what a beautiful journey you took them and us and i am sad it ended. Is there a chance you are gonna give us a sequel? There are so more things to tell.
Good job to ban Alice and Jenny immediately when Bette became the owner of the Planet.
Ally Emmerson, i want to thank you for sharing your talent as writer and i hope you will come back with more incredible stories and maybe finish your other stories like the L Wing.
The End ! Really ???????? Just when I was thinking about how many pages you used to give us on the L-Wing….and enjoying the 23 today… Maybe the planets are right – the alignment…the new Moon… New beginnings and ends……”proof of miracles and of the truly amazing human spirit ”
Thanks AllyEm, for everything.
(Nicholas is a *wink wink* good name for a cat brought into the home at Xmas! :)
The end???? Oh its sad,but Thank you for año.
Thank you so much for hours of enjoyment reading this story as well as the other wonderful stories. I hope your writing block is long gone and you continue to write such marvelous stories of Bette and Tina. Loved it, thanks
I greatly concur with your sentiments. Just need to add how much I adored Angelica. Ally you are such an amazing artist, I say this because your words always paints a picture for me. Thanks for sharing your talent.
Sorry to see this story end but thank you for coming back to complete it. I would certainly welcome a sequel..
I check back daily looking for the continuation of The L Wing. Hopefully soon.
Thanks for all your stories.
Thank you so much for this and your other great stories.
So happy to have had the wonderful 23 pages to read but so sad that it’s ‘The End’.
Perhaps an Epilogue?
Perhaps a Sequel?
Perhaps more L Wing?
Perhaps just, at the risk of sounding like Oliver Twist, more?
Sincerely Thanks Absolutely Loved it :)
Thank you for finishing this part of the story. Seems as if the story could handle a sequel if you’re so inclined. I was reading “Running on Sunshine” and it is quite excellent. Maybe write more for that story?
Thanks! Sorry to see it end but I know you will come back with a sequel. PPS
My God! my heart was just in pieces. my favorite story ends …: – ((((
I loved every minute of it and I thank you, Ally that you wrote this fabulous story.
can we expect an epilogue?
the last sentence was heaven for me, every story should have this, (they only deserve it).
Wow, I thought Bette would do something like that.
Thank you Allyemmerson!
What a great way to start the new year with the
conclusion of NEW YORK MINUTE.
I love your stories.
Would it be possible to repost IS THIS LOVE?
I can’t find it on this site, and it is my all time
favorite story.
Thanks again.
binglebug
This story will leave longing.
Sad that comes to an end.
I raise my glass of wine and I’m doing a
big greeting to you, thank you for giving us
a fascinating story, engaging, a beautiful story! and
Best of all, you complete this story, a
great toast to you. !!
The whole constellation of the universe.
I await your return.
I was fearful when I saw 23 pages that this was the end. Your stories have delighted and entertained me for years. I , like many would love to read a sequel but am happy with what we have had the great pleasure to read.
There are two more stories I would love to see. I will continue to look daily for anything you write. Happy new year.
Thanks Ally!! Appreciate this so much! Thanks for spare time writing and share with us! Hope you and Rocky are doing fine! :) looking forward to your next installment whenever you are ready ;-)
It has taken me several days to read this book and its many chapters. I want to say that I love your Bette and Tina. I am thrilled to read a story in which these two women mature in their relationship and in their lives. I love how you have them teach each other how to communicate and how essential it is for their relationship. I am also impressed on how you present the aspect that the group was far to involved with each other’s lives to be healthy. Alice simply had no boundaries. I think Shane did and maybe even Dana did. Jenny was just crazy and Alice took no responsibility for her own actions and decisions. The biggest surprise was Kit. I guess that is what happens when you allow addictions to control your life.
This was a wonderful story and well written. I have really enjoyed it from front to back. I believe that Tina still has a bit more maturing to do but in time with Bette’s help she will get there. New York is truly a wonderful place for this family. Thank You for sharing this….I look forward to reading your other writings in the near future.
Standing ovation for Ally :-)
Thanks Ally! Love your stories so much!! Thanks!!
Like Hellbent says
“The End ! Really ????????”
6 years later Angie is 12, 1 year from being a teen! And, unknown baby is 6!
Really, I love your work and need more. PLEASE!