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    Story written on July 15, 2005 by ilovekc.
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    The gang faces a tragedy and must deal with pulling the pieces together.

    The two officers looked at each other before the bigger one spoke up again.  Why dont you sit on the couch first?

     

    Just tell us.  Deep inside Shane knew what was coming and she wanted to get it over with and get the men out of the house so she could care for Alice.

     

    The man nodded and his voice came out slow and small as he directed his words at Shane.  Miss. Fairbanks was shot and killed tonight after witnessing a murder herself. Im very sorry to have to have to be the one to tell you this.  This address was marked down as her next of kin, a Miss Alice

     

    Alice didnt hear anything else, her knees had given out and she had slid down the wall sobbing loudly.  Her body shook with her whimpering, her eyes crying so hard that she couldnt see out of them.  Nononono Her face fell in her hands and she didnt see Shane lead the Police out nor did she feel Shane pull her into a hug.  She rocked and cried her body and head aching from the energy she was spending.  Than as suddenly as she had broken down she stopped and stared unmoving at the door.  Her voice came out strong, the last words she would speak for a long time.  Shes not deadI would have felt itshes coming home


     

     

    Shane hung up the phone and looked at her best friend broken on the floor.  She had finally gotten a hold of Bette and Tina, who were catching a flight to come home.  Her own face displaying the weeping she had been doing and tears were once again falling.  Come on Allets go back to the bedroom  She dropped to her knees and tried to pull the broken hearted woman away from the door. 

     

    Alice eyes didnt blink her gaze stayed fixed on he door.  She didnt feel her body being lifted up and carried through her apartment and into her bedroom.  She was numb.

     

    Carefully Shane placed the blonde on the bed and crawled up next to her.  She wrapped herself around the limp body and gently kissed Alices cheek. Tears welled in her eyes as she looked at her best friend who continued to look catatonic.  No words would form in her throat and she could not offer her best friend any more comfort.  All she could do was hold her and wait for Bette and Tina to come and save them both.

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    2. great story. and yes you had me in tears also. I sure hope you’re a fast writer, looking foward to the next chapter. And I will be checking daily, no make that several times a day.

    8. oh my god, it would definetly be a crime to not continue this story! You’ve got me totally hooked. Im so glad Dana is alive. Great idea for a new and very different story. Can’t wait for the next part! :)

    14. OH my god this is brilliant and I can’t wait to read to rest please post soon I love it and I hope all goes well for everyone and I hope that they all can forgive her for having to do it

    15. hey thats was soo good but sad! plz post the next bit 2 it would love 2 see how is all ends! Will Al be with Dana agen i really hope they do! keep up the good work! xx

    16. I was crying my eyes out and then.. it was quite a shock that Dana was alive. I never thought that something like this would be found in TLW fanfic section :) I’m totally loving this, continue, please!

    17. First i want to say i live you to (my name is Kc) and this story ROCKS!! I was yelling at the computer for Dana’s “death” awesome twist keep it up

    22. wow that was fvcking good! you got to continue this…its really awesome and i know you gonna do great with this story just as your other one. Excellent start! i cant wait to read more about it :)

    25. This is my first time ever commenting on anyone’s story but I have to say this this story is absolutly phenominal. I really like the aspect that everyone is so emotionally distrought over Dana’s death. Trully great writting. Keep it up and post soon I really want to know what happens next.

    26. Ok.Ok.Ok… my girls AND a murder mystery?!! I’m hooked! Please, continue. Great start, BTW! I love the twists and the turmoil that they are going through. I can actually visualize them all… very touching. I’m loving this story! Keep up the wonderful writing!

    29. Wauw, what a beginning!. You definitely got my attention 100 %. I just hope that everything will be good in the end for Alice and Dana. Please don´t keep us in suspense too long before the continuation of the story. So Please post soon!

    35. i definately like this story! I like the way thet all take care of each other. And then the end, well, i’m looking forward to whats gonna happen next! post soon please!

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