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Story written on September 9, 2012 by kins40.
She shifted uncomfortably on the chair which, if she were to be honest, felt rather heavenly against her back.
Just then, a door behind her opened and Bette heard the nurse address the newcomer. She could not see either of them and could barely hear their conversation. The voice of the new person was soft and low and after hearing a thank you, she felt then saw her dentist for the first time.
Clad in purple scrubs and wearing a mask, a rather young, blonde woman appeared by her side, clutching what Bette recognised as her file.
"Hello, I’m Doctor Kennard but people usually refer to me as Tina," she said propping herself down on the little stool by the side of the chair, next to the tray of dental instruments. "How are you today?"
The tone was soft and gentle with a slight hint of a Southern twang and seemed to fill Bette’s head with cotton wool instantly and from the first syllable.
Bette smiled, maybe rather stupidly, at the brilliant and kind hazel eyes which were fixing her from above the white mask. The brunette knew the young woman was smiling too as she noticed the bulge in the mask as her cheeks filled out.
If her heart had been able to fly, it would have in that very moment, soared.
"Please forgive the mask, but I have a slight cold and I wouldn’t want to pass it on." The dentist continued with equal gentleness in her voice. The sound was almost hypnotic and Bette felt so drawn, she nearly forgot where she was.
"So," the young woman continued, averting her eyes to the paper file on her knees, "You have a little toothache?"
Bette came back down to Earth with what felt like a thump. It coincided directly with the movement of the chair as Tina pressed the button to make it lift up and recline, adjusting the light overhead so it shone directly into Bette’s mouth.
The brunette could do nothing else but nod her response. Her heart was now lodged into her throat and she was not entirely sure whether it was out fright or because of the blonde dentist’s presence.
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kins…did I ever tell you how much I adore and love your writing? I truly do…I can’t wait for the multi-chapter story.
Girl, you can spin a story. You are awesome
Kins40, will you marry me?
Damn…..kins you come out of nowhere and just rock my world like this, only to leave for god knows how long. I don’t care just as long as you keep coming back. Now that is a characteristic of a player LOL ;@)
I forgot my offering of the number 14. Thanks for including me. 14 is special to me because in a few short days my partner and I will celebrate 25 years together on September 14th. How appropriate that you would choose now to include my number. I know I have gushed over your writing before. I continue to adore you. T
Wonderful. Absolutely “freakin” beautiful. Thank you
Wonderful. Absolutely “freakin” beautiful. Thank you
Simply FANTASTIC Kins, just beautifully, wonderfully and lovingly fantastic. Thanks for popping back in and bringing wonderful stories. Can hardly wait for the multi-chapter story you will bring us. Thanks again.
Truly awesome writing – your words just seem to soothe any trouble away.
Ditto to everything above, well, maybe not the marry me part since its not too appropriate at this time. But, damn girl, you write great stories. I loved the Savannah slip in there… still one of my favorite stories. Thanks for the update.
Awesome! …Especially the wolf story. thanks kins40.
Magnifique, et une bouffée d’air frais pour mes poumons.
perfect!! These are the best short stories ever. :) Can’t wait to see what else you’ll bring us. Thank you!!
phenomenal, magnificent, extraordinary…I could go on, but you get my point. Can’t wait to see what you have in store with this next story.
Wow! Beautiful! Just beautiful!
My god woman, these stories are perfect. I could sit here and read them all day if there was more. Cannot wait for more stories from you. Thanks :)
Excellent,simply excellent.Thank you very much.
I love your beautiful writing. So well done. You brighten cloudy days.
majestic…
Thank you for every word. Simply beautiful love.
Great kins – I came to your stories late but delighted I found you! A true storyteller with the ability in your words to make me laugh and make me cry – thank you.
Do you think you might write some more Savannah some time?!?