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Story written on September 9, 2012 by kins40.
"How about I just take a look for now and then we’ll decide how we’ll proceed?" Tina soothed.
Bette got lost in the smokey swirls and just nodded relaxing her head back into the comfortable chair.
She opened her mouth and let a gentle finger pull her cheek back.
"Bottom right hand side, correct?" she asked even more softly.
Bette nodded again, her eyes never leaving the dentist’s, searching, sensing, anticipating any change in them that would indicate the extent of the horror in the back of her mouth.
"You are right handed, aren’t you?" Tina asked reaching behind her on the little rack for one of her instruments. Bette made a noise with the back of her throat to indicate the observation was correct. "Little puff of air," she continued before bringing said instrument to Bette’s mouth and administering said puff of air.
Bette jumped slightly.
"Sensitive?" Tina asked again in her usual gentle tones.
Bette’s face fell and paled considerably in the process as she saw Tina hang the instrument back up and bring both her hands to her lap almost in defeat.
It was bad. She knew it. She felt sick.
"Usually I tell my patients off for forgetting that they have teeth in the back of their mouth," The young woman started, "But you seem quite the opposite, you’ve been brushing too hard."
Bette listened and looked at the white mask and brilliant eyes above it not really sure she understood.
"It is easy done. Bad day at work and when you come home you unconsciously take it out on your teeth, brushing that little bit more…aggressively than you really should. It is particularly noticeable on the right hand side of your mouth because you are right handed." Tina continued evidently smiling as she spoke. The mask was bulging again at the sides. "The gum in the very back of your mouth has started retracting in protest and your tooth has become very sensitive in the process but it is clean and healthy."
The blonde woman finally pulled the mask off as she finished speaking not really needing it anymore and she was not perched so closely over Bette.
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kins…did I ever tell you how much I adore and love your writing? I truly do…I can’t wait for the multi-chapter story.
Girl, you can spin a story. You are awesome
Kins40, will you marry me?
Damn…..kins you come out of nowhere and just rock my world like this, only to leave for god knows how long. I don’t care just as long as you keep coming back. Now that is a characteristic of a player LOL ;@)
I forgot my offering of the number 14. Thanks for including me. 14 is special to me because in a few short days my partner and I will celebrate 25 years together on September 14th. How appropriate that you would choose now to include my number. I know I have gushed over your writing before. I continue to adore you. T
Wonderful. Absolutely “freakin” beautiful. Thank you
Wonderful. Absolutely “freakin” beautiful. Thank you
Simply FANTASTIC Kins, just beautifully, wonderfully and lovingly fantastic. Thanks for popping back in and bringing wonderful stories. Can hardly wait for the multi-chapter story you will bring us. Thanks again.
Truly awesome writing – your words just seem to soothe any trouble away.
Ditto to everything above, well, maybe not the marry me part since its not too appropriate at this time. But, damn girl, you write great stories. I loved the Savannah slip in there… still one of my favorite stories. Thanks for the update.
Awesome! …Especially the wolf story. thanks kins40.
Magnifique, et une bouffée d’air frais pour mes poumons.
perfect!! These are the best short stories ever. :) Can’t wait to see what else you’ll bring us. Thank you!!
phenomenal, magnificent, extraordinary…I could go on, but you get my point. Can’t wait to see what you have in store with this next story.
Wow! Beautiful! Just beautiful!
My god woman, these stories are perfect. I could sit here and read them all day if there was more. Cannot wait for more stories from you. Thanks :)
Excellent,simply excellent.Thank you very much.
I love your beautiful writing. So well done. You brighten cloudy days.
majestic…
Thank you for every word. Simply beautiful love.
Great kins – I came to your stories late but delighted I found you! A true storyteller with the ability in your words to make me laugh and make me cry – thank you.
Do you think you might write some more Savannah some time?!?