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    Story written on September 9, 2012 by kins40.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=79638
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    Finale

    She closed her eyes, concentrating on the slightly muffled sound of the voice coming from behind the white mask.
    Two rubber gloved hands pressed on her cheeks to help tilt her head into the correct position. Bette’s skin erupted into a myriad of goosebumps at the delicate and despite the gloves, warm touch
    "Now let’s get started. Would you open wide for me, sugar?" The voice was so incredibly soft that Bette felt she had entered a dream.
    There was silence for a few seconds as the dentist examined the inside of the brunette’s mouth. 
    As the little mirror travelled along the inside edge of her teeth, Bette held her breath, anticipating a painful experience  as she felt the dental probe slide on the outside, inside and in between her teeth in a soft clinking noise as Tina examined her mouth.
    She kept her eyes closed and concentrated on the dentist’s voice, softy rhyming off teeth names for the benefit of the nurse behind them who expertly charted them down.
    "That voice," Bette thought as her heart fluttered some more. 
    A voice which seemed made up from all the good things in the world. A bright sunny day… a baby’s first word… the first crisp steps in virginal snow.  Her voice sent shivers down Bette’s spine with every word.
    The brunette was so far gone in her daydream that she almost did not hear when the dentist spoke.
    "You look after your teeth beautifully," the light southern voice remarked as tools were removed out of the mouth they were examining and added with a slight sense of regret, "I won’t be seeing you that often."
    Bette couldn’t help it and chuckled almost embarrassed.
    "Now you said you had some discomfort?" the dentist carried on reverting to practician mode.
    Bette’s knuckles immediately grabbed on the chair armrests tightly, straining and turning her fingers a paler shade of white.
    It did not go unnoticed by the young dentist who instinctively covered a grasping hand with her own gloved one in a reassuring gesture.
    It had the desired effect and Bette’s eyes darted immediately to the understanding hazel ones above the white mask.
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    4. Damn…..kins you come out of nowhere and just rock my world like this, only to leave for god knows how long. I don’t care just as long as you keep coming back. Now that is a characteristic of a player LOL ;@)

    5. I forgot my offering of the number 14. Thanks for including me. 14 is special to me because in a few short days my partner and I will celebrate 25 years together on September 14th. How appropriate that you would choose now to include my number. I know I have gushed over your writing before. I continue to adore you. T

    8. Simply FANTASTIC Kins, just beautifully, wonderfully and lovingly fantastic. Thanks for popping back in and bringing wonderful stories. Can hardly wait for the multi-chapter story you will bring us. Thanks again.

    10. Ditto to everything above, well, maybe not the marry me part since its not too appropriate at this time. But, damn girl, you write great stories. I loved the Savannah slip in there… still one of my favorite stories. Thanks for the update.

    20. Great kins – I came to your stories late but delighted I found you! A true storyteller with the ability in your words to make me laugh and make me cry – thank you.

      Do you think you might write some more Savannah some time?!?

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